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  1. Thank you for the good story.
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    Chapter 1

    Another wonderful story I completely enjoyed reading. Thank you.
  3. I really enjoyed reading the story… and like many others… I would love to read more about Blake and Ryan. I just finished reading treading water and I wondered if you, like me, see a parallel between Carly and Blake. Was Carly a monster of her own making? Was Blake about to do the same thing to himself, if fate hadn't stepped in. Is this a theme in your writing? Your stories are a pleasure to read.
  4. OK, I completely understand about the kitchen table because my mother had one and I would never part with it.
  5. It's been a powerhouse of a story so far ... A lot of hurt.
  6. Gosh, I am all caught up and anxious very anxious to read more. Maybe, I should mention that I loved every chapter.
  7. I really enjoyed this chapter. An intriguing turn of events.
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    Cold Beauty

    Cold beauty Spins lazy... Bowing down To passing passions The forgotten parade Of all the years Without You
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    Chapter 6

    Thanks for two more great chapters to read
  10. I enjoyed reading the first four chapters tonight, especially chapter 4. Thank you very much.
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    Chapter 4

    Thanks for four great chapters
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    Chapter 1

    I really liked reading this, thanks.
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    November Butterfly

    It's been... and was... but, can never...
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    Chapter 1

    Hey Krista. I enjoyed the first chapter.
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    7.13.16

    Wilbur and Charlotte Sometimes Life Imitates Art
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    6.11.16

    Momentary Beauty Glimpsed here and there Punctuates A day Of mundane attitudes Guardians Of an embattled heart Momentary Peace Momentary Silence Momentary
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    1.20.16

    Odyssey Odd he is Sailing a leaf Beyond the citadel outward Toward discovery And Redemption Or Oblivion And Death Or Escape And Hope Or Adventure And Treasure Or Not ... Perhaps Maybe It is all for A smile
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    Picture/poem/1.19.15

    Blue believer muffin pockets thigh huggers knee rippers skinny where skinny counts round where round cuffs the guy with blueberry jeans
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    Picture/poem/1.19.15

    Funny I don't even remember doing this one. Odd how I can forget.
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    Chapter 1

    I know these feelings well, how I have loved the dogs in my life.
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    Chapter 1 Arrival

    I enjoyed your first chapter.
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    Chapter 7

    These guys have a lot of trust in each other
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    Chapter 6

    Oh no is this the start of trouble
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    Chapter 5

    This chapter had wonderful feeling to it, well done.
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    Chapter 4

    Great weekend had a great time reading
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