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The fireworks metaphor was a nice touch. The ending seems far from happy to me. Richard's main dilemma throughout the story was - what was his role in his own story. He wondered who was the main character in his own life. He rightly assumed he was only playing a bit role. In the end - he chooses a supporting role character part - as now he will be the "good friend" supporting Stu and Nicholas. I guess Richard's life story could be titled ( in keeping with the Dickens theme) - Low Expectations.

That's a really interesting thought. Be kind of funny if it was Stu's handiwork. Stu seems too low key and up beat to engage in vindictive acts like that. I could see him leaving some graffitti - but not outing someone else. It would be even funnier if it turns out that the bathroom wall claim is not even true. The passionate make out session at the party may be all that has happened between Stu and Nicholas.

Wow - what a great chapter. the most amazing thing I think was that Richard actually read the entirety of David Copperfield. Current level of ADHD in school kids today makes that a gold medal olympic feat. Seems like everyone is hating Nicholas in a major way. True - Nicholas has violated all 3 vices listed - Mean Cruel and False - indicating he may be a total narcissitic asshole. That may be all there is to him - but it seems to me that we actually don't know that much about his motivations as to why he ghosted Richard in such a callous mean spirited way. We really don't know much about him other than the cruel way he treated a supposed close friend I can't help wondering if there is something more going on that we and Richard don't know We know he is super afraid of being outed ( his friend Darren's violent reaction seems to justify a healthy dose of fear) and extreme fear can exert an insanely strong influence

While Richard's final awakening and realization was shocking to him - but kind of needed. If it wasn't so sad (and mean) - I would be laughing at the comic turn of events - way out of the closet Stu publically snogging way way undercover Nicholas. How upside down can it get. Not sure who is suffering more - Richard or Nicholas - This story has become a real tragedy.

You have to really admire Richard's ability to be so so optimistic in the face of glaring reality I guess some people truly can't understand that the house is on fire until they are standing in the burnt out ashes. The good news is that he will be forced to wake up soon enough . He seems so accepting of everyone elses reality - just not his own The big question is will Nicholas wake up or is he beyond any salvation. As Joni Mitchell once wisely proclaimed - you dont know what you've got 'til it's gone

I thought he did come out to them - they just weren't listening doesn't that still count? Guess I need to go back and reread that chapter. The parents not being able to listen might explain why his sister is so loud

Reading your stories - for me - is is kind of like watching a magician perform. I ultimately am wondering - how does he do it. I sometimes suspect you may be a wizard waving a pen and creating these characters out of the ethers - but a sinister wizard because of the pied piper effect. read one chapter and I become entranced and can't not continue reading My big question however wasn't the elevator emergency override omission - no no no - the real strange bit fo me was Theo climbing into elevator. The only other person in the building that was a potential lifeline - entered into the danger zone without a lifeline. This does actually happen in real life emergency situations and both rescuer and victim perish as a result. Pretty sure that Theo's emergency response manual would not condone such an action I agree though - that such a dumb move is needed for the story to be good 😆

really awesome flipping of the script. totally fun !!! Pretty sure Richard's best laid plans will suffer the slings and arrows but there may be a silver lining waiting for him in the end. great chapter

Truly enjoying this crazy tale. Nothing much happened this chapter but the stage is being set for something explosive. The art teacher sees it. Richard has experienced so many shocking changes all in a way too short period of time. He is smart and perceptive, but that has been shut down as he tries to hang on to the one good thing in his life - Nicolas - by closing his eyes and embracing his boyfriends selfish manipulation. Problem is that he is chasing a bus that has already left town Will it all blow up in his face or will he blow up as he faces it? So many possibilities - both good and bad. Hey - it's never easy facing truths but he may find himself in the end

Have you ever been hit by a high velocity soccer ball? It can break bones (and has) That was a pretty cheap shot by Sandro - Seems like crying "bully" doesn't really apply

Seems like Mark did make an effort to repair the damage - it might have helped if he could have been returned Sandro-s honesty in kind. But had that happened - there would be no story to tell 😉

I loved the imagery of this - I think it was really powerful ( the words not the emojis - although they were pretty good also 😁)

What a start to a story. Adrift was a perfect title to the chapter. Poor guy has to be in a state of shock I did like his response to the dumb teacher question about David Copperfield. I thought the response was great (expectations) I don't know where this is going but the gut punch beginning has me hooked find out

This morning's banter was funny so thanks for the early mornimg humor Lonely isolated teenager on a ranch (probably not much club action happening in town ) just got an early Christmas present I am guessing he is anxious to inwrap Kind of reminded me of this scene from ANIMAL HOUSE

It is appaerent she is just protecting her own interets. If Owen is exposed - her scam will also be exposed. All of her actions including giving her "good friend" a day off - are about using Owen for her own needs. Lets face it everyone except Ryder is using the guy Owen is an equivalent of a cult member mind control. Worrying about which college to attend or how he can pay for tuition are the least of his worries.