James Morey

I said to myself he didn't but he did. 😛 I wonder what would have happened if nobody had seen the platform get moved? Would Michael have noticed when he was mounting or would he have jumped and what kind of a collision/damage would occurred? What a nightmare that would be. Maybe if enough winners loose their winning positions and it is made public why, the public will start to understand that nobody wants to hear all those slurs. Then maybe the suicide rate might drop a little. Please keep Donnie out of JAIL and keep Dennis safe. Fantastic story, keep those chapters coming.

Based on your comment at the bottom of "Oceanbank", does this mean that this story will not be concluded? I believe that this is the only story not finished.

I still think that the Tanzania officials are going to try to cause problems for Simba. I'm not sure what, when or how but I just feel they will. Great story so far, anxious for more.

In my opinion, the worse thing an author can do at the end of a chapter is to end it with a cliff hanger. However, even though I sometimes understand the reason I still hate it.😠 I think Donnie will be hurt at first but the video will save him in the end. I also hope that the rivalry between Michael and Max will say friendly and not become mean. And I trust that Donnie will not cause problems for Dennis down the road. Great story, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Mark, Am I missing something? I thought this story was fictitious which would include the characters in the story.

I'm wondering how Carlo and Will both know Fab and his girlfriend. Since it appears that Carlo is new to Harvard. Even with Will's two major love affairs he got to know them first and enjoyed the sex before committing to anything. So what gives? Is Will being setup? If so, who all is involved and why? Also does Marie know about the messages that Fab sent to Carlo and Will? If not why? As the old saying goes "There's something rotten in Denmark somewhere"!

Mark what a trip this has been! Cliff hanger after cliff hanger. This was a great story, in fact I had to barrow a computer because mine crashed on me just to keep up and not miss any chapters. I'm looking forward to reading TRAVISTY.