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@Summerabbacat @sandeman @Karenloves2shop I love that Lewis has divided the room this much. One side wants him to sort himself out, the other wants Harry to run, and James is just standing there looking suspiciously available.
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Same. For a second I thought it was one of the VBS kids. I think Beth is a star.
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That bothered me too. His mother controls the story, the pills and even the appointments. Caleb barely gets a voice in any of it.
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Harry would hate that job—or at least pretend to. Photocopy boy, with an excuse to see Lewis all day? He’d be causing paper jams on purpose and denying every single one. As for James and Spencer… I’m saying nothing.
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Are you another Harry? 😂
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James is so tempting. I want him so bad… Oh wait. I’m the author. 😈
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Hopefully Harry gets there. I’ve just edited a future chapter and spent twenty minutes blinking back tears at the screen—and I’m the one who wrote it.
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Well, that was one dramatic road trip. Enjoyed it.
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Too fucking complicated
Carl Accolla commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Too fucking complicated
This feels like the point where patience stops being kindness and starts becoming self-punishment. Neil’s fear is understandable, but Alex cannot keep paying the price for it. -
I’m really enjoying how naturally this is developing. Great writing.
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More than a friendship?
Carl Accolla commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in More than a friendship?
“Just a mate,” says Alex, while Neil quietly moves into every corner of his life. Hmm. -
An evening with Mother
Carl Accolla commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in An evening with Mother
A free flat with strings attached, and a “straight” hunk who keeps emailing. I know which development interests me more. -
The Blue Light of Dawn & a concert in the country
Carl Accolla commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The Blue Light of Dawn & a concert in the country
A composer, a biker, and one spare helmet. What could possibly go wrong? 😏 -
They’re both as bad as each other. Harry just has the better excuses at the moment 😉
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“I’m not sure about James” is exactly the sort of sentence that makes an author rub his hands together. Keep that thought… 👀
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Someone in antlers was waving a prosecco glass in the middle of the office. Harry checked his watch to see whether the lift had taken eight hours or he’d fallen into a festive time warp. Barely nine, apparently, and the pre-party performance had already started. The heat hit him as he stepped out—already uncomfortable. Laughter cracked across the second floor. Everything had started closing in by late December—the trip to Nottingham, the Christmas party, too many things piling up at once. F
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Prologue: The Riverbank
Carl Accolla commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Prologue: The Riverbank
I got Twin Peaks too and Caleb’s name feels far too conveniently left behind. I’m suspicious already. -
A month in and Owen finally learns Ryder’s surname. At least Taco Bell was less complicated.
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My favouite thing I learnt in the two years was Lekker belangrijk. Used it a lot. 😂
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Harry probably thinks forgiveness is what he needs but doesn’t deserve. Whether Lewis is really the relationship he should be worrying about is another matter.
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Can you imagine Harry trying to book the meeting room? He’d overthink it, change his mind twice, and call Emma before doing anything.
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Just crack on reading 🫡
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Owen badly needs tomorrow. Margot finally opened a door instead of building another wall.
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I Don't Like Champagne
Carl Accolla commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in I Don't Like Champagne
Blake isn’t exactly wasting time, is he? And I still don’t know whether Courtney is Courtney, Trish, or both. -
A voice, an accent, and a thousand assumptions
Carl Accolla replied to Kileoli's topic in The Lounge
I know, I was only joking. For the record, there’s no such thing as US English. There’s English, then there’s the version where the S is swapped for a Z, the U is removed to save ink, and a few words are changed just enough to avoid accusations of plagiarism. <wink>
