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Hey, Comsie - Just wanted to follow up to your above post to say that I hope you didn't take my own comment about this chapter as a criticism/complaint. While I may not really care for the Scotty character, I was definitely not complaining about what you write in your stories, or how long it may take you sometimes to post new chapters. You're the author, and I know you have to find your muse (and the time) to do your thing, so I just wanted you to know that I am very much aware of that. I'm not going to say too much about your "spoilery" info regarding Tristan being "Scotty's own Jason Fixx", since that's still a work-in-progress. I understand what you're trying to do there, but I must say that (at this point in time, anyway) I find those parallels to be...thin. Jason's hooking up with Tristan, and purposefully stringing him along for future hookups (while having no real interest in an actual relationship with Tristan) is VERY different from how Tristan has interacted with Scotty, IMHO. Tristan has never hooked up with Scotty, never pretended to have feelings for him, nor given Scotty any indication that he's interested in him. The only thing he's done (that I can recollect ATM) is just never told Scotty to his face that he's not interested in him, and that's because he's still mostly closeted (as is Scotty). So while Tristan is certainly the object of Scotty's affection, he's never done anything to Scotty even remotely close to what Jason did to him. Is Tristan hurting Scotty? Yes, but inadvertently. He's in the closet, so he's really, really limited in what he can do to to set Scotty straight (pardon the expression)! I'd say, in fact, that Scotty is just as guilty as Tristan for the hurt he's experiencing because he's so infatuated with Tristan and can't control his feelings. Unfortunately, it's one of those "shit happens" moments that we humans fall into, thanks to our emotions. (SO much fun, don'tcha know)?! 😛 Anyway, just my take on the matter (as things currently stand in the story). I'm of course curious to see where you take the story from here, so I'll be awaiting the next chapter. Just know that I'll be perfectly fine if your muse suddenly tells you to write Scotty out of the story because he gets his own dedicated story (or gets run over by a bus, whatever). LMAO! Sorry! The Jesse-Tristan fanboy in me had to take one last shot at Scotty there. 😉

I'm going to be an exception (and a bit of a bitch) here and state - I just don't friggin care about Scotty. I absolutely love this story and the Jesse, Tristan, and Artie characters. Seriously, I'm SO happy and surprised to finally have a new chapter show up! (Thank you Comsie)!!! But Scotty... I don't hate him but I'm just not interested in him or his story. Time spent on him is time I'd much rather see spent on Jesse and Tristan. So Scotty can get run over by a bus (or get his own spinoff story, whatever) for all I care. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to run and hide from all the Scotty fans that seem to exist on this site.

O...M...G...!!! Has anyone else recently looked to see what the actor Jacob Tremblay looks like now? He's gone from cute, little kid to a stunningly beautiful 14 year old hottie! 😲

Very well said, and I completely agree! 👍 Peace!

Well, that's an interesting viewpoint, and you are certainly entitled to your opinion. But I very much disagree with your statement of a good story/plot needing at least 4 main characters. Comsie himself has written tons of stories where there are just 2 main characters, and I certainly wouldn't consider them "stale". If Comsie chooses to make this story about 4 characters (Jesse, Tristan, Artie, Scotty), so be it. He's the author and it's his story, and I'm sure it will be a great read. ❤️ Historically, though, his stories tend to focus on one main couple, so I would be less surprised if he splits Artie and Scotty off into their own story. And that's actually the option I would prefer, to give their fans a more detailed story for their relationship, and to bring Jesse and Tristan more back into focus with this story. (Just my two cents here, Comsie). 😚 And I guess my feeling about the Scotty character is that he's "just" an ancillary character whose primary purpose in this story is to be a "hurdle" for Tristan to overcome, while learning to deal with his own sexuality and finding his true love (Jesse). (Please don't take offense here, as I know you really like the Scotty character). 🙂 Just goes to show how differently Comsie's stories can be interpreted and how they resonate with his readers. 😎👍🏻

I love this story so much but... not to be a Debbie Downer... I'll be glad when the focus gets back to Tristan and Jesse. I love the Artie character but I just don't feel the love for the Scotty character. (Sorry, Comsie! Don't mean to be critical. You're the artiste and it's your story, so you tell it how you want). Regardless, I'll keep reading and enjoying it. I'll just enjoy it even more when Tristan and Jesse are back in the spotlight. They're such an awesome couple! 🥰

Ruh roh! Has the time finally arrived where wee Spencer has transformed into a tiny zombie, wandering the school halls, in search of a “hot meal”?? Not to be an impatient bitch but, hurry up and post the next chapter, Comsie!!! Puh-leeeeze!!! 😁😘😘😘

Comsie sure knows how to get my money... I went and bought the ebook as soon as I saw him mention it above. Lol! Enjoyed the story very much, Comsie. 🥰 But I will say I was crushed to see there wasn't a completed version of Jesse-101 in your ebook store. If that had been there... Well... The whole country would have heard an ear piercing shriek of joy that would outdo any high school girl in the history of the world. 😂

Shoot rainbows out his dick...?! Oh my, that's when you know it's serious. 😆

"Delicious breast meat"...???!!!??? EEEEWWWWWWWWWWW!!! 🤢🤮 Aside from that, good chapter, Comsie. 😂😉

Yay!!! Another chapter for Jesse-101! This is one of my very faves out of the many stories you do, Comsie. Jesse, Shelter, GFD, and Left Without Words are my most-loved, I’d say, but all your stuff is so good, man! ❤️ Thanks for the new chapter!! 😄

I’m with Black Paper - let’s just get rid of Sarah. She should have an unfortunate accident with a steamroller in the street, and then Shane and Deme can have lots of alone time together to “mourn”. 😜😂

Damn, just when it was getting good! I say Jake and Alex grab Preston, throw him to the zombies, and then go right back to what they were doing before being so rudely interrupted. 😆

LOL Hopefully it's milk and cookies. That would taste a lot better than what usually comes out of his sack. (Not that I would know from personal experience or anything. *cough* *grin*) Either way, I'll be eagerly awaiting Santa's gift!! Thanks for the good news, Comsie!!!

Here, here! I did the same almost a month ago and there's still no update yet. Com's gonna have me crying all thru Xmas.

Not to be all complainy but it's been a while since there was a new update to this story. I'm really liking the premise of this one, so pleeeeeeeease don't forget about it and leave us begging, sobbing and crying for more.