Jan

This part of the story after the former story really did my tears go. You wrote this very special to my heart. Thank you for writing this episode in Adam's life. Greetings, Jan from The Netherlands.

I do not like the words said by Jamie. Adam must know after a long time that his fysical missing did tell him that Jamie did not exist anymore. What is in his head anything about "saying" does not meet reality anymore. I will read the story untill the end, however I don't believe how it will be endend for Adam.

I have been faithfull to read your story untill te END. Many readers have disappeared from the beginning to the last chapter/entry. I am very disappointed about the "outcome". Your promise that there will be a secuence of this story does not fullfill my expectations. Sorry: but I don't think I will read any of your stories again. I am Jan from The Netherlands. If I made mistakes in the writing: sorry.

Hey Tony. I am from The Netherlands. The story goes on and on about leaves, swimmeets, the father, etc. After reading this last chapter 9, I have decided to leave the story. It becomes long winded. Sorry. Wish you all the best. Jan

Thank you Topher. A beautifull story. And: being a Dutchman, I have learned words I didn't know they exist in the English language. Ben was a master with those words. And Riley: he was also struggling with those words, however I had a dictionary on my laptop. 😂 Greetings, Jan

What I don't understand is why "LOVE" has many regards. Is it the love for the story or the love between the main characters. I "LIKE" the story very much. Thank you Topher. 😇

I like your way of writing this story. The hope I have is that Owen will get more faith in his own life.

Is it James or Vincent who is with the other 3?

I liked the story untill now. Johnny now "behaves" as a rich man and can impress. That's not the man I had in my view. The story has told "he found himself in his heart, soul and mind". However: in the last chapters he now steps beside his shoes. I think I will read trough the end of the story, but I am not sure anymore.🤔