Jan

I like your way of writing this story. The hope I have is that Owen will get more faith in his own life.

Is it James or Vincent who is with the other 3?

I liked the story untill now. Johnny now "behaves" as a rich man and can impress. That's not the man I had in my view. The story has told "he found himself in his heart, soul and mind". However: in the last chapters he now steps beside his shoes. I think I will read trough the end of the story, but I am not sure anymore.🤔