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I am in awe of your writing and story telling ability. I wish I could be half that creative. As for the story I know someone in another review mentioned that maybe Carl killed his wife and that seems like a fairly good explanation but I have another possible idea that could draw several things together. Carl did try to sell his son, maybe he did the same with his wufe. She could be bead or still being held by someone and maybe William might have had a hand in that as well. Any way I am sad that it will be coming to an end soon. I really hope you write Carl some very painfull and humiliating punishment. I look forward to the rest of the story.
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Hey Brat, I have been reading the story since you started posting and I love it. It flows really well and has a great plot so far. I cant be the only one who sees the connection here between the call the Judge got at the hospital about the Governor or Lt Governor position and the murder and planted evidence but I see some real career problems for detective Flemming in the future. I guess if I had a complaint it is that the chapters dont come quick enough. I am looking forward to the next one so dont keep us waiting too long LOL. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
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Just another great chapter in a long line of great chapters. I agree with KevinD about the skewers though. Time for Trevor to have a little......fun, yeah thats the ticket. I am beginning to get used to the new format at GA but miss some of the extras that used to be part of the story like some pictures that allow this feeble mind of mine to imagine. I know most writers dont do this but I would love to see a pic of what the author thinks his main characters look like, even if it is just a drawing. Anyway as always keep up the great work and send that next chapter as soon as possible.
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The only bad part is the part where it says "So....Its over". I mean really you could have left that part out. :-) Seriously it is a very good story. Thanks for sharing. I really hope you do pick it up again with college and let us get a peek at how life continues. I would also like to see a little revenge of sorts on the old bitch grandmother just for fun. Thanks again.
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Chapter 7: Striking A Deal
sdaddy commented on Linxe Termoil's story chapter in Chapter 7: Striking A Deal
Still lovin it. I hope we find out what the deal is with the real father soon and hope the next chapter comes quick. Thanks
