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Such a good start! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Well written, interesting characters and with a GREAT flow. Yeah, I am diggin' this.

Has this story been abandoned? It would break my heart.

Oh my word... I am enjoying the story so far. Had to comment on this chapter, though. It appears to me that the research was sub-par regarding Swedish people. I have never met or heard of people named Torsten and Ingalill who weren't born in like the 40's and 50's. Also, coincidentally, that was probably the last generation with less than adequate knowledge of the English language. We start studying English at the age of 10 and during the next 9+ years (depending on if you go to university or not) we learn to speak the language fairly well. It is an impossibility to find a Swedish teenager of normal intellectual capacity who doesn't speak English decently. So this chapter read more like a parody than anything else, I'm afraid to say. Or like you've been watching too many Ingmar Bergman films from the 60's. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but it has no bearing on today's reality. Alright, I need to carry on with the murder/mystery story. How funny that my initial disappointment over the lack of any love interests here has turned into wanting to know what happens with the story line. Although, couldn't we at least have found out whether Torsten was a good kisser?

Does anyone know if everything's all right with Dom? No blog entires and no stories posted in what seems like forever. I hope nothing bad has happened.

It's almost funny, the way my heart skips a beat when I see another chapter posted. I love everything you've written, but this story is special. As much as I always long for the next chapter, a big part of me hates the thought that one day there will be no more chapters to wait for. Does that make any sense? I adore the way Jeff and Evan's relationship is growing, how they are getting closer and learning to communicate better. Oh, by the way, I am sincerely hoping that the ending to this story is NOT going to break my heart like you did with Stonegate... Thank you for yet another wonderful chapter!

This is one of my favourite stories and I'm so very happy to see another chapter posted. I found Brandon's analysis of his brother to be both insightful and interesting. I like how Matt's character is more complex than one usually sees in stories, how he can be both strong for Luc and vulnerable, maybe even weak, when dealing with his own issues - or not dealing with them, as the case may be. I am curious to find out how he will come to terms with his past, how he will find peace, and how he and Luc will find their way towards a happy ending of this story. Another wonderful chapter, Duncan. Well done!

Loved this story, read it through in a day. I'm very disappointed that it seems to have been abandonded, though. Just my luck, when will I learn to not read a story that isn't finished? :wacko: Loved all the French, although my school French isn't enough for all this Quebecois! Anyway, hope to one day see a continuation.

First time commentor here. Hoping you're well, although missing your stories like crazy. Take care!