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Great to see a new chapter of "Indiana Summer". A great story, I was always sorry that it was unfinished.
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Wow, great cliffhanger at the end of this chapter!
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Just a minor observation: the scene about foreskins and uncut cocks was a little bit confused at times... “You’re pretty good at working an uncut cock hillbilly.” David rasped. Yes, I'd expect that, as Billy has had one all his life, he would be good at working it Still: great chapter and great to see some development in the relationship of the guys
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So ... a circumnavigation of Australia instead of the world? Interesting change of plans
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Still going strong after 100 chapters. Thanks and well done!
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Concerts and Conversations
Pipo commented on NightOwl88's story chapter in Concerts and Conversations
I really like "Indiana Summer" and I hope to see it completed. I think it is among the best that gayauthors.org has to offer. Thanks! -
Maybe if you let Jordan get off, we could organize a little party for him. I want to bring the rope
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I just finished rereading Second Shot and now I find you've started this sequel. Yay!
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Great chapter! I really like the way this story is progressing
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I like the "Pieces of Purpose" idea, but I think you should write them yourself. Anyta's piece sort of clashed with the image of Gar/Will that I got from the Purpose chapters and from the other two "pieces". Of course it is in line with a "fan fic" that it is in a different voice, but I prefer consistency ...
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Penultimate?! Does that mean that the story is almost over? Oh well... all good things must come to an end...
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Chapter 18: Whispers in the Dark
Pipo commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 18: Whispers in the Dark
I found this the best chapter yet. Finally a glimmer of light after the long buildup and all the angst. I liked the way you used the dark night as an aid for Blake to overcome his insecurities -
You're a tease. Another chapter, and still Trevor did not come out to Shane... how much longer are you going to torture him, and us? It isn't fair As to the story "dragging": I don't think so. I like long stories, and the scenery is also interesting in your epic (looking forward to the other half of the circumnavigation still to come ). But give Trevor a break, soon!
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I don't mind the cliffhanger... all will be revealed and explained in the next chapter, right?
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The latest "Attitude" features an interesting article on Anton Hysén, currently the only "out" professional soccer player. A scan of the article can be found here: http://z13.invisionf...dpost&p=1664069 (The Back Page, UK forum for gay soccer fans) Although the article is fairly superficial (typical glossy style), I still found it worth reading. And Anton is not bad to look at
