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    I remember this story, I love it.
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    How could he!
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    WOW!!!! Totally did not see that coming. I disagree with one of the reviews I read about having sympathy for Mrs. H. Here's way. She is a well educated person, a school teacher, she should have known that what happened to Derek was traumatizing. It changed Derek. If she had told her brother not to come around, but still kept in touch with him, I might give her a little sympathy, but she didn't do that. Because of all this, Derek never got to live the life he wanted. And to let the father get away with what he done is just wrong, but I know that happens in the real would everyday. At least if Derek does die, Charlie knows that he loves him. Exciting work........ I love it!
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    I love the elevator scene. He played that just right. I can see one of two things happening with Dean. Dean will continue to try and get him fired, or because the way Davey stands up to him with such confidence, he will fall in love him.... . Great writing for your first time. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
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    Chapter 4

    montyblk commented on JMH's story chapter in Chapter 4

    I do not like steven. someone needs to turn him in. he is not trying to help, all he wants is sex. sick doctor.
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    Ch 16: Mothers

    montyblk commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 16: Mothers

    I don't know if Mrs. C will set him str8, but she will give him a lot to think about. His way of thinking will not change overnight. But my concern is with Charlie. I can only imagine what he must be going through. Losing his best friend and being outed by that so-call best friend must be devastating. Great Work!!!!
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    Ch 07: The Spot

    montyblk commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 07: The Spot

    Poor Charlie , from the sound of the last statement that Hero made, this is not going to end well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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    WOW! I'm glad Jason didn't go all the way with Ethan. It would have done more harm than good. He is still so much in love with Peter. As for Peter, we don't know what's going on in his head. I know he still loves Jason, but what's stopping him from sharing that love. Does he blame Jason? Does he thinks Jason will turn out like his ex? Is it all the money? Jason has never acted like a spoiled rich brat, Peter was allways grounded. Why does he want Jason to be the one to break up? I would love to see them work things out, but life does not always works out the way we want them. I love this story.
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    SWEET!!! I was crying like a baby. I love this story, even if Peter had died. He still has a long way to recover, but at least hime and Jason are good! Looking forward to the next chapter...
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    I am so Glad Darryl took Dean back to the apartment while they drank. Smart move, he knew Jason was concern about Dean getting drunk. What a great friend. I think in a pass live Jason and Darryl were brothers...LOL Great work!!! You get me curious about what they will fine when they get to Peter's apartment.....Looking forward to the next chapter....
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    Hooray!! Jason pulled himsel together. Jerks everywhere I see. I glad Jason kept his cool. Great chapter Andy! Looking forward for th next!!!!!!
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    I really hope Jason do well in the game. I am so proud of Dean. You really show the love he has for Jason. The way you are writing this story seems so real. The time line is perfect! Peter's injuries are serious, so I know you just don't get over something like that overnight. Great Work! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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    I was a little worried there, but everything turned out fine. Chief Anderson seems to be showing up when Jason needs some help. Is there a story there? I'm also glad to see the police department is taking this serious, and doing a great job. Thanks for that statement by the chief about what may happen to Jordan. Great work!
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    Great Work!!!! Will we find out what will happen to Jordan and his gang? I would really love to see justice done. I didn't think that Royce would have let Barbara stop paying for school, but I wish he could have know what Jason was going through with their demands. I feel, and this is my opinion, He owes Jason some kind of apology. Keep up the good work my friend. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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    WOW!!! You know when a huricane hits a land mass, it becomes weaker. Amanda was that land mass. She really got Barbara set on the right path, for now. Great work!!!! Now I am still worried about Peter. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!1
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    Cliffy WOW! Andy....... Great Chapter. Hurricane Barbara is still going strong. I hope Amanda will give her something to think about. Barbara don't see how she is destroying her family. Barbara has been this way all her life is wil be very difficult for her to change. Will she cut him off? Will Royce put his foot down? Looking forward to the next chapter.......
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    I am loving this story more and more. I am so worry about them, and you said it was going to get worse? I',m praying no one is going to dying.......My heart is racing.
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    I had a feeling something was going to happen when he left his cell phone on the bed. I thought his mother was going to call, but when he heard the sirens, I knew it was Peter. Once again you had my heart racing! I did agreed with Peter about Barbara never giving up on trying to make him str8, and I have lost all respect for Ross . Great work Andy........Love it!!!!!!
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    I got to tell you, this chapter had my heart racing! Looking forward to the next chapter
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