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HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHRIS, MAKE IT GOOD!! :D

We have to wait until Saturday! Noooooooo!! Damn, I will have time to prepare for another dose of annoying Sandi

To me, I like reading about sex but only if the characters have been developed enough so that I can enjoy the experience with them so to speak. If the story is all sex and nothing gets told to us then I do not like the story. Those are my thoughts

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I am currently reading Mantartania's Hot 'n Cold Short Summary The story so far is about Alexsi and Jaime. Aleksi is the star runner at college and the stepson to a politician and Finnish. Jaime is an older boy from Hawaii yet isnt too confident and does yoga . Will they get together, and more importantly will they stay together despite what life throws at them? Strengths Maria's writing style is very easy to read and even the longer chapters whizz by. You get engrossed with the characters and you can't help but fall in love with them. The story is only 7 chapters in but there are little aspects of the story that make it unique, like focussing on Jaime's yoga and Aleksi being Finnish we get to see some Finnish language Weaknesses I suppose (and I'm having to be picky here to put something in here ) is that occasionally there is the odd error in grammar or spelling that shows that English isnt Maria's first language. This sometimes disturbs the flow but only by a small amount. Improvements The only improvement to my weakness is probably just to go back over the chapter before posting slowly in order to try to catch the little buggers of errors Favourite part Waiting for future chapters but seriously I dont have a favourite bit because I get so wrapped up in the story that I just love every bit of it for what it is

I hear that and i go 'Uh-oh'! EVERY time! This time too. Nice build up! hehe, it does sound a bit ominous doesnt it? Build up to what?

Apart from reading and writing, I love martial arts and currently study Karate and Jiu Jitsu. I am also into the tabletop game Warhammer 40,000 and play a race called the Eldar (think Elves in space)

I loved this poem! I love poems as they are little windows into your soul Please write more!

Another guy?! didnt expect that! I sooo totally love these two characters. Cant wait to hear about Coop in the next chappy

Grrrr not another cliffie (and yes it is a cliffie because we dont know what was said on the phone) lol Another great chapter, Sandi...at times she is annoying as hell and others I couldnt help but feel quite sorry for her after Silver went quiet. Eagerly await the next! Thanks Nephy!

The Last Samurai was one to make me cry, dunno if that's the sort of film to cry about but it was sad at the end

If he spent the time practising his football instead of doing stupid things like that he would be a better player But lol at the vid

I used to have two cats, one was all black and called Rosie, the other one was a tabby cat called Tabbie (original I know) Sadly we had to have both of them put down a few years ago due to bad health. Then about 2 years ago my sister got a hamster and called it Bubbles. She was a bundle of energy for the first year we had her! (She kept escaping from her cage and her excercise ball we thought she had gone to audition for Mission Impossible ) But again, sadly, she died only last weekend, it was me who found her, my sister told me to give her a hug after being away from home for a while, and as soon as I grabbed her I could tell she had gone. So our garden is like a pet cemetary now! With two cats and a hamster buried underneath the tree in our garden. We like to think they still watch over us in our house

Oh dear oh dear oh dear!v I havent visited here for ages and look! Newbies have slipped under my radar Welcome to all of you who have joined since I last dragged my sorry arse to this thread hehehe Hope you have a wonderful time here

Nice to hear from you Bleu I might change that sentence so as to avoid confusion thanks for pointing it out. It was a delicious irony that Owen became the person to save Dan from himself. I hope this world keeps surprising people :)Thanks for reading

It's so nice to know you're reading my story Iarwain thanks!

YAY for 10,000 members!!!! *gets balloons and champagne out * hehe

I dont like her at all. Even though she knows River and Silver are together I bet she's going to try and prise Silver away from River...bitch.... On the other hand she could turn out to be help River and Silver further.... I cant see that happening though

Well that was certainly...eventful I feel something quite big is going to happen soon though, Conner and Jared are becoming happier with each other Oh and I really hope Conner's mother gets a dose of reality at some stage! hehe Really enjoying the story please dont stop

Hey John, so glad you're back to writing ways I loved the new chapter, I love everything about it. The story is at a nice pace in my opinion and every parent/grandparent has a different reaction, so I believe his Grandpa's reaction Having an epilogue without a prologue isnt dumb to me. Loved it so glad you're back please write more

YAY a new chappy! I almost fell off my seat in excitement I'm so glad Coop and Mich are together now but poor Mich with his parents, I hope Coop can help Mich through it because it seems as though Mich hasnt come to terms with it. More more more please! (uses puppy dog eyes)

Ooh i jealous River, I wonder if that's the start of problems, Silver can't fully understand jealousy yet I dont think, could that be a problem? Grrr I want more *pouts* Thanks for the chapter Nephy

Ok i lied, I am a horny devil

Don't worry I'm not being goaded into writing a sex scene Matt and Dan aren't ready yet and until they tell me they wont get it on But don't worry when it happens it will be good

it says food lol but thanks for reading