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Agaith

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  1. This is going to be a serious thread? Ok, need to go looking for my serious hat..........ok found it! That was such a good opening chapter Nephy. Not even 4000 words into the story and I already want to just pull River and Silver to me and hug them forever! Oh and I reiterate what I said in my review...if chapter 2 is a cliffy you're going to have to ask real nice for that hug
  2. Wow, what an opening to the story!Although it made me so sad to read the love scene, Silver hasn't grasped the fact that River wants him to do this because he wants to not because he has to. Three months with River compared to seven as a sex slave allows me to know that we can't Silver to be completely better, but I hope it gets better.Somehow I think we're all going to be sent on an incredible ride during this story. Oh and if next week's chapter ends on a cliffy you're going to have to ask real nice for that hug
  3. A very warm welcome to you Northern Dutch Guy. I hope you have an excellent time here on GA, as you've been reading for a time already (I think most of us start as lurkers )I'm sure you already know this is an excellent site for fiction. Good to have you aboard!
  4. Hehe I almost forget I have this thread Everyone discuss things about the story! I dont bite! ( Unless you want me to ) Well anyway the rough edition of chapter 11 is finished, once edited and beta read it will be out to you lovely peeps
  5. Can I pour it over you instead? @Dragon: Wow, you look great in drag mate and it isnt OTT drag either. Good work
  6. You could pretend to be though
  7. EEEEEEEK come on tomorrow come faster! Really looking forward to this story
  8. I think its wonderful Frosty and I'm glad that the stories you read on here inspire you to draw and paint
  9. HAPPY BIRTHDAY FAIRY!!! :D
  10. Congrats Andy I'm so happy for you! I would offer advice on children after my years of experience but Ill leave it to the others Once again I'm so happy for you Andy :hug: (three hugs too gay? tough )
  11. I personally prefer ties as well, but then again I've never had to wear a bow tie before only ties at school and at formal occasions. But yeah I like the look of ties to bow ties
  12. HAPPY BIRTHDAY JOEY!!!!!!!!!!!! :hug: ( i wont forget how nice you were to me in my first ever escapade into GA chat ) Thanks Joey
  13. Agaith

    Do not fear

    I'm glad you can relate to emotion. I feel a lot of people have trouble reviewing poetry because of the various ways it can be interpreted. As long as the reader gets something out of it then I am happy
  14. Agaith

    Do not fear

    thanks Sam, I will try and write another if an idea hits
  15. Agaith

    Do not fear

    hehe Frosty yeah all my poems are about emotions I was feeling at the time of writing so they are all about something that has touched me or someone close to me
  16. Agaith

    Do not fear

    LOL, thanks Bee, I'm glad you exhausted your reviewing skills on me
  17. I can feel them creep closer, the fears, the doubts they enter my head, they start to shout. I look at my love but do not believe, that the smile nor his grace is truly for me. I look at myself and then back at him, I still feel the same, is it a sin? I tremble and shake, and start to feel sick, as he walks towards me, bit by bit. He kneels down besides me, I feel hands hold my face. And instantly I feel like I'm perfectly safe. He leans to my ear and starts to whis
  18. Agaith

    Chapter 10

    Thanks for the review TJ! Im glad you enjoy it! :)Yeah Dan really needed that release of emotion and hopefully Matt and Dan can move on from that
  19. It sort of spoils the fun a little bit for me but even so if the story is well written I will still read it because as Frosty pointed out, I like the journey the author takes us on as well as the final word the author leaves us on.
  20. That was such a good story! wow I didnt know much about the myths and legends stuff but I love it when I read it and that was so good to read. Yes all the characters are sexy but the feelings that are protrayed show that the sex really isn't just sex. Ive loved every story I've read of yours Nephy and I doubt that trend is going to end anytime soon (P.S that was sweet of you to mention me )
  21. Wow. Um what a brilliant ending to another rollercoaster story! All the characters are so vivid and the imagination for this story is incredible Another brilliant story that should be read by everyone
  22. Hehe I know what you mean by the last paragraph. I had a story I was writing when I was in my earlier teens then stopped writing on it. Looking back on it (and it's at 45K + as well) I hate the style I wrote it in, I feel my current story is better, probably because I'm more mature (hard to believe I know ). But I keep it as it serves as a reminder that as an author I am only getting better I also hope to see many more novels from you
  23. You never cease to crack me up with these pictures Ara I agree though, it's amazing to see the transformation of Bridge from the painfully weak boy we saw earlier on to now being face to face with Abdi'el quite literally I'm intrigued as to what is going to happen
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