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  1. I'm Agaith, and I've been a book sniffer for a number of years. I suppose my favourite combination is when I have a brand new leather bookmark and slip it into a brand new book and sniff both together...hmmm so relaxing......................oh sorry I drifted off there but there's a little bit about my book sniffing habits.
  2. well the idea I have is to stay in my house in reading that i will live in next uni year. then I could just travel into London from there. There is no way I can afford a hotel, so its house or nothing lol lets hope i can use my plan haha
  3. There might be a way I can get to the meet by spending minimal money...we'll wait and see.
  4. That was excellent Frosty Definitely build on this snippet of fiction
  5. I know its a long ways off but its actually looking like a no from me guys
  6. Agaith

    Chapter 1

    I find myself instantly disliking Andy, maybe because I'd hate it if what happened in this chapter was done to me. Really enjoyed the chapter though I aim to read on
  7. Poor Silver, I can empathise with him bt not sympathise as I have never been through and hope to never go through anything like that. Me saying how hard it must be for him is as obvious and as pointless as saying that there are many stars in the sky and then trying to count them all. It's still going to get worse I know, but I always have fingers crossed just in case... :PThanks Nephy
  8. Um I really have to echo the title of the thread Made me laugh though lol
  9. Agaith

    Chapter 10

    As you have added your voice again to the format of the chapters I will, when time permits, get around to that. The differnt use of speech marks is, in my opinion, a point I will not bother taking on board because that is rarely a subtle difference. If you notice I use both sets because I have people speaking telepathically and verbally hence the usage of both. I will strive to improve my vocabulary though there are only so many ways of saying something without adding in a rarely used word to mean the same thing. And even with all the text books, doesnt make you a perfect writer, I will strive to make the story better and will point your review out to Dargon and Frosty
  10. Agaith

    Whew!

    hehehe Im such the exception to that rule Apparently I gave my parents a torrid time as a kid but I'm all sweet and innocent now Congrats Andy at least you wont be bringing home twice the bundle of fun
  11. Agaith

    Chapter 11

    Hey Dandevdrew nice to meet you. Im really glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for reading
  12. Agaith

    Chapter 11

    I havent read them know but ive heard things about them but that didnt even cross my mind when I wrote that. Dan needed a mentor and a source of Energy, what better than a sarcastic load of smoke in an amulet! The battle will be in this book, it will all happen here Thanks for reading Anyta
  13. Agaith

    Chapter 11

    lol err thanks I'll save a better reply for in the forum then Thanks for reading
  14. I wasn't charming enough?! Just kidding hehehe Summer is turning out to be a busy period for me but, as I said above, if I can afford it ill be there
  15. Simple answer: Such a turn off lol
  16. Agaith

    Chapter 11

    It's about time Matt trusted Dan more huh? It may not put them on an equal footing but Dan certainly has a role to play Thanks for reading
  17. Agaith

    Chapter 11

    Ah the bow...you'll find out later in the story ;)hehe I like to use vivid descriptions of places And I love Sarala as well, she injects some more humour into it Thanks for reading
  18. Agaith

    Chapter 10

    yeah I wanted something that was quite hard hitting. hehe im glad I shocked some people
  19. Agaith

    Chapter 10

    Thanks Chevalier good to have you on board
  20. Agaith

    Chapter 9

    That's so cool Im inspiring you to write fantasy! well I know you know the secret now as ive been awol in my replies but I hope I can surprise you again along the way
  21. Agaith

    Chapter 11

    MATT The twin suns projected their brilliant light onto the surface of Galwrock as they did every day. I could hear the Falls of Truth thundering in the distance as I surveyed more acolytes frantically training in the build up to the war. I was annoyed at not being able to spend this day, the day after everything came out, with Dan, but I had a duty to Galwrock and all the Galwrons that were here. Dan was still in bed; he was still asleep as I got ready. He must have been so emot
  22. If i know I can afford it in the summer then I'm in
  23. you weren't grumpy, or frayed, or fat Nephy. You missed yourself out with the compliments so here we go I'll have a stab at it When I got to my hotel late Friday night I was tired after a hectic afternoon and Nephy very kindly text me to make sure I had reached the hotel ok. She then proceeded to ask me if I wanted to come on a walk with the group, and, even with me being shy, nervous and tired I agreed to go along... Nephy was the first person to greet me and I instantly fell in love with her. Regardless of what she says on here, she made me feel like a part of the group instantaneously as did the others. Nephy's kindness and generosity to me was touching and I'm sure you touched the hearts of everyone at the meet with your personality, even through your pain. So thank you as well Nephy for making it special...and don't leave yourself out of the compliments after saying such nice things about us! (you know what those hugs feel like in real life now hehe)
  24. Agaith

    Puppy love

    Arggh I just get hooked straight back in after only one chapter with how you write Owl. :)I'm so rubbish with reviews im just gonna say I love how the story is developing and I love all the characters (except old man templeton and Candace )
  25. Nephy will now make it her weekend's mission to say things that will make us all blush scarlet
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