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  1. Very good story.I also agree with the previous reader that a little more information about how school went after Jordan's speech. But it is a very good story regardless.
  2. It has been a long journey but the trip was certainly worth it. The Epilogue may be inconclusive to you but it brings a very comfortable closure to a great story.
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    Epilogue

    Adam. It has been Fantastic!!!! I also must say "Thank You". It has been along road but in the end it is worth every step. Thanks... Sparky
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    Groundswell

    Excellent chapter. Andy never seems to learn to trust Matt to handle the situation. However I can relate to Andy trying to fix the problem. Been there, done that, got the T-shirt. Adam, Take your time. Don't pressure yourself to write faster if you need to go slower. We can wait for the next chapter.
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    Turnaround

    WOW is almost all I can say. Fantastic chapter. I have to agree with KevinD and hope that something does not happen that causes a split between Matt and Andy again. It is a fantastic story Adam!!
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    Sea Change

    Looks like Andy may get his big head back on straight. (no pun intended) Angie and Matt know more about Andy than Andy does. Very good chapter.
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