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  1. sparky53
    Very good story.I also agree with the previous reader that a little more information about how school went after Jordan's speech. But it is a very good story regardless.
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    It has been a long journey but the trip was certainly worth it. The Epilogue may be inconclusive to you but it brings a very comfortable closure to a great story.
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    Epilogue

    sparky53 commented on Adam Phillips's story chapter in Epilogue

    Adam. It has been Fantastic!!!! I also must say "Thank You". It has been along road but in the end it is worth every step. Thanks... Sparky
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    Don't fret the delay. Enjoy the time with the family and the down time. We will still be here. Your story is great but your family is more important. Take care of them and enjoy being with them. :-)
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    Groundswell

    sparky53 commented on Adam Phillips's story chapter in Groundswell

    Excellent chapter. Andy never seems to learn to trust Matt to handle the situation. However I can relate to Andy trying to fix the problem. Been there, done that, got the T-shirt. Adam, Take your time. Don't pressure yourself to write faster if you need to go slower. We can wait for the next chapter.
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    Fantastic.. Can't wait. Thanks Adam.
  7. sparky53
    Hello Adam, Fantastic chapter is all I can say. Thanks
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    Turnaround

    sparky53 commented on Adam Phillips's story chapter in Turnaround

    WOW is almost all I can say. Fantastic chapter. I have to agree with KevinD and hope that something does not happen that causes a split between Matt and Andy again. It is a fantastic story Adam!!
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    Sea Change

    sparky53 commented on Adam Phillips's story chapter in Sea Change

    Looks like Andy may get his big head back on straight. (no pun intended) Angie and Matt know more about Andy than Andy does. Very good chapter.
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    Hello Adam, It has been a while since I had French so Yes I ran it through a translator. Curious mind I guess.
  11. sparky53
    Chapter 26 was great. A lot of emotion going on.
  12. sparky53
    Adam, Family comes first above all else. Do not worry about the posting schedule. Take the time that you need. Your children are only young once. I have greatly enjoyed Crosscurrents and I happened up on "It Started with Brian" just as you started writing for Dan. You will finish your story because you have told us that. We can wait.
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