Aw, Thank you! Soo, it WAS hot? i am always worried about that! Glad you liked it! I think i am going to try to finish some unfinished stories.. and, try to make then... Hot! what say?
It’s Sunday! I can’t believe its Sunday and here I am rotting away in the library! Darn you Professor Mukhuty. That guy can dole out assignments like it’s nobody’s business. How different would it have been to allow us to submit the papers on Tuesday instead of Monday! Would have been a damn sight easier if I could get an access to the University library where the required texts were in their proper places instead of me trudging along to this library where no one under the age of 50 ever venture
Arensha’s attitude left a lot to be desired. Even though he was a Noble of Galwrock, a High Commander, his recklessness was what one would expect to see in a common assassin. Of all the things Ailarha could forgive in a warrior, pride was not one.
His lust for power on Galwrock was almost as much as his desire for Ailarha’s body; she could not determine which repulsed her more. In all her years, she had yet to see such a selfishly driven mortal.
The last straw that broke his sta
His pride at stake, Arensha decided to risk it all! So what if he was to take on the High Mistress of the planet? What he had on his side, no one even believed existed! He would make Ailarha and her followers kneel before him!
Cake it is! what will it be? (i can even try a double layered one! ) i really liked it.
My mind whirling with possibilities of what could be going on through Barry's mind!
no happy endings... is that something to be worked on?? no wonder people complain!!
Thank you! In my eyes, that's the beauty of shorter pieces. always leaves us wanting more! Thanks for the review and, this one is not going to be continued, so... maybe you'll like the next one.
WOW! Thanks for the R&R Louis! i am sooo glad that the images were clear. I 'saw' the scenes in my head when it was happening and its good to know that it translated! I am pretty sure this is just a lone standing piece of work. the qustions you asked are all answered in my head, and i am sooo not going to answer them. It's upto you to fill in those blanks. Just one... It's not anything Sci-fi, or even a psych facility, It's just a regular hospital. cheers!
‘Dance with me?’
To deny him was not even an option. My entire being responded to his very existence. I would know when he entered a room, I could almost feel his want: whether or not he wanted me to gravitate towards him or slink out of the very establishment he graced with his presence.
Neil was a perfect gentleman; he never would even so much as lift an eyebrow if someone offended him. He simply didn't care about anyone else; no one but me! They were not his, not like I was.
‘How lon
This song was dedicated to me by a very special person. Beautiful isnt quite the word i'd use to describe how it makes me feel everytime. Special? definitely!
I really love this chapter a bit more than the first actually!
(Uh, did u get that from the comments?)
ummm... thanks to you I have so many interesting thoughts!
Loved it, Wayne
Oookay, i dont know why i didnt review this one earlier..
apologies and I'm gonna correct that mistake now, sooo...
Bittersweet!! thats something i LOVE!! so... this one just sat perfect in my heart.
I really like the way you describe things, and then people. in the end, no matter how unwanted the decision was, thanks to your layout, it made perfect sense!
*sighs*