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  1. You are very welcome....
  2. ~*~*~The Epilogue The room was quiet and still, with just a hint of the sun’s rays shining from the east through opened blinds. It was 8AM on a cool Thanksgiving morning and Ryan and Joel were coming out of the bathroom, their towels draped around the waist after showering together. “Owww…Oops…shit.” Ryan stumbled into Joel’s back to prevent himself from falling. The sudden jolt took Joel by surprise, “Hey…are you okay?” He asked with concern reaching behind him to prevent Ryan’s fall.
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    Chapter 16

    ~*~*~16 “Yeah man…” Jaxson laughed heartily, slapping himself on the knee as he wiped the tears from the corner of his eye. “You should have seen the look on his face. He was scared shitless.” “Are you sure? Because, I could have sworn I smelled something foul coming from the back seat.” Tank laughed jokingly. Jaxson and the guys were still pumped from the night with Jace. They came by to visit Joel, filling him in on their little “Sting Operation.” “I mean, I felt just like I was i
  4. Awww....thank you sooooooo much. No, there's just 2 chapters and a long eppi. I have several stories to post, so hopefully that will make up for it. I'm blushing like crazy here...lol
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    Chapter 15

    ~*~*~15 “Um…hey Sam.” Brye waved, shoving his hand in his pocket. “Is she awake?” He asked his voice hopeful. “Yeah, I think so.” Samantha looked back over her shoulder, scratching the top of her head. “Come in.” She stepped aside allowing him to enter. “Olive, Brye’s here!” She called trying to stifle a yawn. It was almost midnight and she had been working all day and decided to hit the bed early, but since her bedroom was closer to the door she heard Brye knocking first. “Thanks…” B
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    Chapter 14

    DId you get a chance to read chapter 7. I know it still has part of 6 in there but at least you can see what happens with Joel and Ryan Of course I plan to finish it, the story is complete it's just the beta still has 15,16 and 17. I'm actually pretty upset about 7 to me thats the best chapter..heheheh but hopelly I'll get it corrected by tomorrow.
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    Chapter 6

    Hello...glad you're enjoying the story. I posted chapter 6 and 7 on chapter 7 and I was told to edit a little at a time, well I guess I hit my limit for today so I unpublished it until I can get it corrected. I'm sorry trying correct it as we speak. Again thanks so much.
  8. I'm actually trying to edit chapter 7 now. I think I have to wait for an admin. but if you continue chapter 7 the real 7 is after the 1st part. but thanks for reading. again so glad you like it. it's my second story posted here so I'm still a newby and have a lot of learning to do.
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    Chapter 14

    I know poor Joel. Just want to hug him.Awww... glad you are enjoying the story. the last three chapters will be posted this afternoon.
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    Chapter 14

    “What they won’t tell you, Joel?” Brye repeated trying to sound confused. “Yeah…I know it must be something pretty bad. I mean I see the way mom and dad look at me, the way Ryan won’t.” Joel sighed shutting his eyes tightly. “What do you mean, Ryan, is here day and night.” Brye pointed out defending his best friend. “I know, waiting on me hand and foot…He’s perfect, so I’m just wondering why.” Joel shrugged. “Tell him.” Olivia’s words echoed in Brye’s head. He scooted his chair close
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    Chapter 13

    “Okay follow the light Joel.” Dr Levy instructed his patient as he examined him, shining the light in his left eye then his right. Ryan sat next to him, their fingers entwined tightly together; holding his breath as he watched the doctor’s every move. He wanted to ask questions but he didn’t want to distract him. Janice stood behind him chewing nervously on the fingernail. Ryan called them after Joel woke up, they were there in five minutes, the hotel they were staying at was right next door
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    Chapter 12

    She stood quietly in the doorway observing the man she loved, the man who at this moment carried the weight of the world on his shoulders, completely broken, the man she loved since she was a young girl. She leaned against the wall remembering the first time she laid eyes on him. She was a freshman in high school… and he was a senior in college. It was at Lincoln Park on a warm July evening, at the Give Peace a Chance Rally. She smiled thinking back, his hair was longer then hers, and he wore
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    Chapter 11

    “What the FUCK was that!?” Mitch yelled jumping to his feet. He grabbed the railing that was preventing him from running on to the field. “That’s a Bull SHIT move!” He spat. Brye and Ryan stood to their feet as well, Brye, breathing anger while Ryan stood unable to move, his was a feeling, not of anger but one of fear. While Joel’s father and brother stood yelling profanity at the field of players and coaches, Ryan was in awe… silenced, his eyes focused on the field, focused on Joel who had n
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    Chapter 10

    The sounds of the birds chirping along with voices off in the distance caused Ryan to stir waking him from his deep slumber. He yawned, the taste of liquor and sleep laced his tongue. He pressed his head deeper into his pillow slowing combing his fingers through his hair; his attempt to reposition his body was met with resistance. A warm smile formed on his lips when he noticed Joel’s body draped on his own. He inhaled deeply, running the tips of his fingers through the waves of curls that
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    Chapter 9

    “Freeze!” shouted a deep, gruff voice. The boys froze in fright, dropping the can onto the floor. “Now, put your hands where I can see them.” The voice commanded. Ryan and Brye did as they were told. “Now, turn around.” They did so slowly and came face-to-face with a cop dressed in a black uniform, his badge glinting in the light, a gun pointed in their direction. “What are you two boys doing in here?” he asked. They didn’t speak. Fear had taken away their ability to. “I asked you a QUE
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    Chapter 8

    “Where the hell have you been Mister, do you know what time it is?” Brye interrogated Ryan as he walked through the door. Ryan laughed as Brye scooted out of bed making his way over to him, wearing nothing but a pair of soft gray drawstring shorts. Ryan slowly closed the door behind him and sighed. “Shouldn’t you be sleeping?” He asked side stepping his roommate who was looking at him as if he had two heads. “I could ask you the same thing.” Brye retorted trying to keep a straight fa
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    Best Laid Plans

    All I can say is WOW......this story had me from the door. I actually spent all day Saturday finishing it up. I have to agree with everyone one else, this has got to be one of the most gripping, loving come to terms with self I have read. I have read many stories here, and loved them all...but this one was....*sighs* Rick is mine and Ben's hero. that man rocks into forever. and Poor Ben I wanted to just take him and hide him from the rest of the world. Will, there are no words for him. I agree with Rick, He's a dead man. You captured everything in this story all while their relationship was developing right before their eyes. From the 2nd day of their meeting Rick knew Ben had issues and he wasn't leaving him. The sex was totally hot loved the humor in their conversations and loved that Ben finally found someone that would love him and he could love. The supporting characters were great too. I see you have several stories here, so will be checking them out. I told my friend about this and shes reading too... again such an entertaining read.
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    Chapter 7

    His heart was beating sporadically in his chest, so loud it was deafening. “Keep your eyes on me…” Joel’s words echoed in his mind as they undressed each other. “Keep your eyes on me Ryan.” Something that sounded so simple was almost impossible to do. Ryan knew if he were to look into Joel’s eyes he would see how frighten he was. This felt like a dream, as if he was floating…suspended in mid air. Faint labored moans escaped Ryan’s mouth with every lick...every flicker of Joel’s tongue agai
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    Chapter 6

    Ryan, Joel, and Brye stood out front of the AMC Rivers East Theater waiting for Emmett, his date and Olivia to arrive. Joel had purchased his, Ryan, Emmett, and Stephanie’s ticket, Emmett called saying they were running late, and he would pay Joel when he got there, while Brye got his and Olivia’s. The movie’s show time was 8:30pm it was already 8:10 and Brye was starting to worry. He paced up and down the sidewalk biting nervously on his thumbnail hoping his date would arrive soon. “He
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    Chapter 5

    It had been two weeks since the first game…the first party and the first kiss. Since that Hopeful night, things were very different for Ryan and Brye for that matter. They were the most popular freshmen on campus; Brye, for the obvious reason, he was the younger brother of number 21… Joel Masterson, the most valuable player for the Wildcats. For Ryan, it was as if he joined the, “Joel Lovers” fan club. Rumor had it that he and Joel did more than kiss when they went upstairs that night and bec
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    Chapter 4

    “Hey Ryan, hurry up man, Joel will be here in a minute, and I don’t want to hear his mouth about why we’re not ready.” Brye called out as he slipped on his shoes. “Okay…okay, I’m hurrying.” Ryan laughed; I’m just putting the finishing touches on my hair. Oh by the way I need to buy you some more styling gel, you’re almost out.” “Hey it’s cool, don’t worry about it, we’ll get some more later… now hurry up.” Byre stood up giving himself a once over in the mirror. He combed his fingers throug
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    Chapter 3

    To say the first week of school went over without a hitch would be an overstatement. Brye thought he had it all figured out and on the first day of classes he came to the sad realization that he didn’t, even after he and Ryan scouted the place out. He was late to most of his classes due to taking a wrong turn and ending up in the wrong building or on the other side of the campus. He prided himself for being on time to his calculus class only to find out that it didn’t start for another hour,
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    Chapter 2

    ~*~*~*~ 2 Ryan returned to their dorm after having showered and changed, now fully dressed and ready for today’s activities. His dress; casual, wearing a pair of faded jeans and a navy, cotton button down shirt that he wore unbuttoned and un-tucked over a simple white tee, his hair styled, though slightly damp, only to find his roommate still very much asleep. Ryan woke up before the alarm went off; he was too excited to sleep. This was not a dream, this was his new reality. This would be
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    Chapter 1

    Chapter 1 School Daze Ten… eleven…. twelve… thir- four- fif- six-… Wait! Twenty… twenty-tw- twenty-ni- …oh forget it. Ryan sighed to himself and chuckled quietly. He had been looking out of the window, trying to count the passing trees as he and his parents drove along the road, but at the speed they were traveling he could not keep up. Now he had to think of something else to distract himself… something to help keep his mind off the nervousness he was feeling as they got nearer and near
  25. Summary: Ryan Smith is away at college, experiencing life on his own for the first time. He meets Brye Masterson, his roommate and new found friend, who believes in living everyday to the fullest and having a good time… even if it means risking expulsion while doing so. They make a pact, their mission: Be the best students they can be… have lots of fun… and get laid before their winter break.
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