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Chapter 9 Family Time....
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 9 Family Time....
Nettie Poo...better slow down chica, you'll be caught up soon...lol Thank you, thank you... for such a lovely comment. Kaleb is awesome and unfiltered as Chase has come to understand and appricate. as you mentioned in chapter 8 Kaleb is fastly becoming someone Chase wants in his life, he's like that missing link. The fact that Chase wanted his father to meet him even on his death bed speaks volumes. the nursery scene was very important because understand the matter of Life and death crossing paths sometimes. he's a smart man and no one except Chase seems to give him complete credit for that. His father and Brother has his back, but you have to wonder if its out of respect and love or DO they see what Chase sees. Thanks again chica...Love the comments. Kim -
:D Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.. Kim
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Thank you so much for sticking it out...and reviewing, I really appriciate it... As I mentioned at the on set, they might be recuring characters if the readers liked them...so mever say never... Again thanks sooooo much!!!! Kim
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“Damn it!” Captain Morgan slammed the two inch hard cover book shut, pushing it aside. He sighed heavily as Drew and Tony entered the room. He watched Drew take a seat and Tony close the door behind them. A look of confusion attacked his features. “Wait a minute. Aren’t you supposed to be on bed rest?” He asked sternly, through a questioning gaze. He tilted his head slightly waiting for an answer. “Well, sir, Tony said you wanted to see us.” Drew replied, pulling out the chair ne
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Totally cool, Westlake82. this was actually a fun story to write glad you enjoyed it. Skipping down memory lane can be fun, especially when we stick to the "good points"... LOL Againg thanks... Kim
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Chapter 12 Cause if it isn't Love.....
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Cause if it isn't Love.....
Swhouston44, you're 1st time with Kaleb...Awwww. He's such a sweetie. Chase is indeed a lucky man and I think he realizes it. Helen, we haven't heard the last of her just yet... and yes she needs to take up knitting or something. She and Kaleb are like oil and water... It's I that should be thanking you for such a wonderful review...So thank you... Kim -
Chapter 12 Cause if it isn't Love.....
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Cause if it isn't Love.....
Nephylim...YAY!!!! still with me Kaleb is amazing. I wanted their first time to be special, so glad you thought I pulled it off..and thanks for the review... Kim -
Chapter 12 Cause if it isn't Love.....
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Cause if it isn't Love.....
Yes, they are actually intuned with each other... thanks for the review, so happy to see you are still reading.. Kim -
Chapter 12 Cause if it isn't Love.....
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Cause if it isn't Love.....
50 lashes with a wet noodle eh charlieocho...glad it was worth the wait...I'm still recooping from the move from HELL... but anyway I'm back on track..I think. Thank you so much for the wonderful review and words that fuel the writers soul. And yes, Chase brought Kaleb a new car..the boy must have been awseome...hehe where is this headed..I'll surprise ya -
Thank you Mr. Christiansen for your review. I totally get what you are saying. This is one of my favorites stories so I think I'll take your advice and search out an editor and have it revamped. it's like besides that Mrs. Lincoln how did you enjoy the play....lol glad you enjoyed it in spite of...and again thanks for taking the time to post a review. Kim
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Chapter 12 Cause if it isn't Love.....
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Cause if it isn't Love.....
Um...yeah. I think I'll keep you around... MWAH!!!! -
“Are you okay?” He whispered before tenderly kissing Kaleb behind his ear. Kaleb held his breath and nodded slowly. “Umhumm…” He sighed, though is body told a different story. Chase could feel him tremble underneath him as he arched his back slightly trying to wrap his legs tighter around Chase’s waist. “It doesn’t hurt…really. It just feels weird.” "Its okay, Kaleb...relax.” Chase spoke softly as he stilled himself allowing Kaleb time to adjust to him. The first time should always be
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Chapter 6 Shall we kiss and make up...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 6 Shall we kiss and make up...
Just wait till the next chapter...lol Tony just might fall through that ice...oh and the stiches held up but will the past the next test..hehe... thanks Phoneix we have one more chapter left... so glad you're riding it out with me... Kim -
Danke, Nettie Poo. I'm really happy that you are enjoying Shades of Gray. I tell Chase is in for one hell of a ride and he doesn't even realize it which we will see in the future. Kaleb has this efect on him that he can't put a handle on, but as you mentioned the reward is always great. Helen is a little over protective and with Horace's explanation it makes the picture a little clearer, but she still is a bit over the top with it. lol And the children, Kaleb loves them to death, and is wonderful with them. I'd say he make a great father one day...ya think, oh and unfortunatly as Scott will soon find out, he's no match for Kaleb, and Kaleb isn't even trying hard. hahah PS: yes we will be taking soon...gotta finalize some things...right
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The aroma of fresh brewed Hawaiian coffee tickled Drew’s nose awakening him from his deep slumber. A smile of contentment creped upon his lips, he knew his husband all too well. Kona Hawaiian blend coffee was his favorite. He heaved a tired sigh combing his fingers through his hair and climbed out of bed. He hated sleeping alone and struggled with the urge to bring Tony back into their bed last night, but he needed to know that Drew was serious and what he did or was attempting to do was wro
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...You Always Get What You Deserve
Naptowngirl commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...You Always Get What You Deserve
Anya, you are NOT! the only one who want's Cooper with Kyle. I literally "dream" of it happening....lol I love the lil bastard. I see Kyle's name in a chapter and get all giggly and break out in hives in a good way... I just love him. I must say I've loved Cooper and Kyle, have since the List. As I read this chapter I had a permanent smile on my face. I also have to admit their admission makes me scared and excited at the same time...I don't want to hold out any hope and my breath, well .....I do, but.....lol Kyle let Winston go and Cooper told Chase he thinks he still loves Kyle... "Think..." Really..... lol I want them together in the worst way.... Great chapter Jwolf -
so i think this wasn't the last i saw from Scott ans Helen... bring on the date because i want for Chase to feel again and for Kaleb to be happy !! Thanks <3 Thanks Nettie Poo. Glad you enjoyed it. The world of the Fitzgerald Ah yes...We get more of them. Helen is a total trip. It appears everyone sees Kaleb as the yound man he is except his mother. I agree Scott has a reason to be a little salty. I just hope he understands Chase's position here as well. This is something he wants to explore and someting he has no control over. He can't help how Kaleb makes him feel. Adam is a wonderful brother we get to see more of him and Kaleb in the upcoming chapters so stay tuned. again thanks for reading chica...Happy Saturday!
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Kaleb is very different, but in a good way, as far as chase is concerned. Contrary is a good word. Chase never imagned he would be in a situation like this with a person like Kaleb. and yes Chase finds himself doing all sorts of things he "normally" wouldn't do and all Kaleb has to do is ask. Another thing we learn is don't try to figure Kaleb out it's a waste of time. One thing is for sure he never ceases to amaze Chase. I think Scott might be getting the boot...just saying lol
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Exactly...Tony is being a hot head, and yes we can understand, but as you mentioned he is putting himself in danger in the process which has Drew worried. He knows his husband and thats the problem... glad you're still reading and enjoying it...love the comments. Kim
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Thank you Phoenix, I think when you actually get to know the characters it makes the story that much more real, for me anyway. I start to care about them. I also like to pay attention to detail, while providing enough action to keep you coming back. Again thanks so much for reading and posting a review... Kim
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“Damn it…It went straight to voicemail.” Drew sighed tossing the phone. “That means it’s either dead or he’s turned it off.” Mona stated picking up his phone from the foot of his bed and placing it on the table beside him. “My bet is it’s off.” She sat patiently with Drew who had been trying to reach Tony for over an hour, but to no avail; both now starting to worry. “I really hope he’s not doing anything stupid.” Drew said scratching nervously behind his left ear, a look of concern evident
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Tony stepped inside the dark living room, home for the evening after getting kicked out of the hospital. He was instructed to get some rest and come back in the morning. He leaned against the door, closing it with his back while kicking off his shoes. He sighed exhaustedly as he tossed his keys on the table before vigorously rubbing his temples, trying to massage away the pounding inside his head. As he made his way toward the kitchen, he stopped by the mini bar scanning its contents. “Ahhh…" H
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Me shaking my head....lol James is something else....he entertains me. Just when I think he can't get any worse he does...and for some freaky reason I love it... hides my head in shame... lol Poor Sam...do we get more of him and what about Adam, he has confessed his love for James and James is out in the shed with Sam... I tell ya... thanks for the update Mark totally digging this story.
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reading is good...lol glad you are enjoying the story Nettie Poo. I agree with you getting involved with Kaleb can be challenging if Chase allows it to be. At this point it appears Chase and Darla see Kaleb for who he is not his disabilities. oh and Helen is just getting started..just saying. Thanks my dear. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Kim
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Chapter 11 What is Love anyway?
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 11 What is Love anyway?
got me blushing over here. Such a wonderful review. I think Chase adores Kaleb too... I know I do...
