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  1. Waves...nephylim. I'm thrilled you're still reading this story and enjoying it. Yes ole Scott was in raw form that day and again yes Chase needs a rule book whem it comes to dealing with Scott and especially Kaleb... Hell I think I want me a Kaleb too...he's too damn cute. again thanks for the review
  2. Loved this chapter... 1st let me say I love the friendships here. Your writing style makes it so easy to read. It's like watching a movie. Now to the story. I totally feel for Cooper, it seems like he's trying to get it together and shit aka life keeps getting in the way..He's human after all so I also dig the Chase thing, though I agree with Chase and Spencer, Kyle is Cooper's first love. Kyle on the other hand I hope he sees that Cooper is his at this dinner which I can't wait to read about...lol Stil team Kyle don't know why but I just love his ass. I see his name in the chapters and get all happy...stupid I know so sue me...lol Devon well you know my stance on that...UGHHHHH...lol great chapter keep em coming. Kim
  3. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 2

    Love that you're back....lol and glad you are enjoying the story. What I dig here is, we have Chase and Kaleb who are totally different, but so much alike. You soon learn that Chase realizes that too. Kaleb...you can't help but fall in love with him..He just is sooooo... It will be fun to see where their relationship leads them...can't wait for you to read the next few chapters...oh and thank you...missed ya woman... we've got to PM wanna know what other stories you have read...I have a few if you're interested...
  4. He sat there at a total loss. A loss of words and thought as he watched his boyfriend...well that is, if they were still boyfriends, at this point he wasn't sure. They were, however if he had any say in it, but it appeared he had no 'say so' at all. The ride back to the hotel was quiet. Kaleb sat with his earbuds in his ears, music so loud even Chase could hear it as he stared out the window. This time there was no caressing... no talking. Kaleb hadn’t spoken two words to him since he walk
  5. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 3

    Tony stood outside the waiting room door taking deep breaths as he tried to regain his composure. He felt nervous jitters coupled with excitement that Drew pulled through. He hadn’t seen the other officers since he admitted to the captain that he and Drew were married and he wasn’t sure how they would receive him. He looked to his friend Mona for encouragement and received a warm smile. “You ready?” She asked taking his hand into hers. “Yes….” He nodded taking another deep breath before open
  6. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 1

    Nettie Poo...feels like home... Welcome I've missed you. Glad you like the first chapter...take your time and read...Another Sunday morning I hope. Scott is over confident and Chase is just being Chase...Keep your eyes on Kaleb you will learn about him as Chase does. He's different yes, but pure and honest so we shell see... Squeezeeeeeeee....lol
  7. Hey, Charlie, you're right it's a totally different setting and feel, but I'm glad you are reading and enjoying both. Shades of Gray will be around for a while I'm having too much fun with Chase and Kaleb but Urban Knights was just sitting there with nothing to do so...lol I will be posting Shades tomorrow as scheduled so stay tuned... Kim
  8. Thank you, Elezbed. The story is finished, it's only 7 chapters however so its short, but as soon as my beta gets them back to me I'll post them. So glad you are enjoying it. For me it's like sitting on pins and needles when I post a new story. you want the readers to like it so comments and reviews feed the writers soul... So again Danke. Kim
  9. Thank you, Elezbed. The story is finished, it's only 7 chapters however so its short, but as soon as my beta gets them back to me I'll post them. So glad you are enjoying it. For me it's like sitting on pins and needles when I post a new story. you want the readers to like it so comments and reviews feed the writers soul... So again Danke. Kim
  10. Hey, Phoenix, what I was referring to was the Marriage and the power of attorney. I had a friend of mine write a story where the couple were married and she was reminded by a reader that, that wasn't sooooo lol in my story they are married and it's recognized...lol like I said it's ficton and fun...and you're still reading WOOT!!! WOOT!!!
  11. He needed to think quickly. Which way did they go? Damnit. He ran to the right and just as he turned the corner. BANG….. The sound of the gun going off ripped through Tony’s ears. So loud, it was deafening causing the birds nestled in the trees to take flight. The ear-splitting blast echoing through the air carried on for a good thirty seconds but to Tony it seemed like a lifetime…Then silence. Tony stood paralyzed. The vision playing out before him was more horrific than anything he had imagi
  12. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 1

    Thanks Phoenix, I truly hope you enjoy the rest of the story. and as for the omitting of Tony's name, that was my lame way of having the reader wonder who Drew actually was in the bed with,lol and the answer is revealed at the office that it was indeed Mr. Paris...so the fact that it confused you a little worked...I guess. lol either way, thank you so much for the review and I hope you keep reading... Kim
  13. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 1

    “Uhuh…Uhuh.” He moaned with each thrust, going deeper and deeper being enveloped in the warm tightness of his lover. “Yeah…yeah…Oohhh, yeah, right there.” Drew murmured raising his hips to meet his lover’s, their sweaty bodies fitting together perfectly. “Faster, baby…go faster.” He pleaded gripping him around his waist, pressing their bodies so close together it was if they became one. Drew dug his fingers deeply into his skin, forcing him to go deeper… demanding to be fucked harder, just the
  14. Two youngs officers in the city of Chicago go up against the urban city. their duty: To protect and serve and maybe fall in love in the process.
  15. intune, thanks for much for the reviews. I'm glad you seem to be enjoying the story. Relationships take on all forms of dynamics so it will be interesting to see how thses two totally different individuls come together to form a solid relationship. You shouldn't have to wait too long, I like to post twice a week, but I'm in the middle of moving, UGH!!! Again thanks for reading and posting a review. Kim
  16. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 7

    Life is forever changing, you never know what to expect, you just have to hope you're ready when that time comes... Kaleb is determined to be the best boyfriend he can be to Chase, and thats a good start..
  17. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 5

    Family dinners are always fun...hehehe and add Helen and Kaleb to the mix... Him and his mother are always at odds. Chase might just have his hands full with this one...
  18. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 4

    Problems indeed...the trails of relationships, we all go through it...Kaleb and Chase will be no exception, but if they deal with them together, they might be ok...
  19. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 1

    Thanks so much intune... I'm not sure if Chase himself knows at this point. He really is seaching for the answers so it will be a journey that's for sure. And the situation with Scott will unfold but how. I hope you enjoy the ride and continue to read. Again thanks, Kim
  20. Swhouston44, I love a cliffhanger every now and then My hopes it that it brings you back...hehehe You know I'm not going to drag it out, but I'm glad it was entertaining. but I think Chicago is calling, so. Oh and Scott is not done yet...just saying so the hate can continue... thanks so much for the review and compliment. it truly means a lot...as I mentioned to charliecho, I a little drama a head for Kaleb and Chase, but Hey *shrugs* without a little how could they ever grow.... Kim
  21. Your broken record is like music to my ears... thank you. Kaleb and Chase have a few bridges to cross before I rest. I'm not much of a drama person, but I know the story needs just a skeet taste soooooo. I hope to keep you entertained.
  22. For me there's only a few stories that I absoulty love and look forward to reading at a time. Writing myself, working full time and being a single mom keeps me pretty busy, but I have to say this is one of those stories.... I freaking love it. I don't know what to expect from one chapter to the next and it's driving me crazy, but in a good way I've loved Kyle since "The List" so I'm just a goner went it comes to him...But you have put together a wonderful group of friends and reading about them totally entertains me to no end. Poor Cooper, I have a bad feeling about the university... And Devon, I don't like her at all so the Chicago thing sucks.... Now Chase...You are killing me here with this one *sighs* I don't dislike him I'm just indifferent when it comes to him...lol you know who I want together...hahaha but if he makes Cooper happy..*grits teeth* can't wait to see what you have in store next. Great chapter.... bravo!
  23. Chase stood at the window with his hands shoved deep in his pockets; tall, distinguished, dressed in classic black. He had so much going on; he couldn't wrap his mind around a single thing...not today anyway. He stared out the window at nothing in particular. It appeared that life was moving about as usual. People were coming and going, scurrying about with their daily routine. Just like any other day, except this was anything but. He couldn't wait for it to be over. In the past few days
  24. WOw....What a lovely, lovely comment. I adore Kaleb as well. I had mentioned in another comment that, Chase is having trouble wrapping his mind around what he's feeling and what Kaleb is doing to him, by just being himself. admitting to his brother that Kaleb was his boyfriend without all the explaining as to how, was indeed a big step, remember Chase has seen things in black and white, things must make sense to him...soooo...Also I wanted us to get a glimps of Chase's family, though they are very minor in this story, but I also wanted to show Kaleb and Chase dealing with something together... a growing process. Life would be easier if the outsiders would just let them be, but that would be too much like right... So glad you are enjoying Shades of Gray...I'm having a blast writing it... again thanks for the wonderful comment. Kim
  25. bookjunky18, I think you're like Chase and I, we are very protective of our Kaleb. Chase is becoming more comfortable with their relationship, admitting it to his brother was a big step. He still don't understand it though. The edu. side of him is trying to find logic in whats happening, where as Kaleb is just going with it...He doesn't have to understand it, he's just enjoying it. kaleb is in tune with Chase,which is way they work, like charliecho mentioned Kaleb just shines and they are both lucky. All relationships have obstacles, they just have to know what they want and want it bad enough..so we'll see... thanks so much, glad you are enjoying my lil ole story... Kim
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