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I hate being first. The first chapter, I was stumbling on your words. I was not used to this quality work. You write very cleanly, precise... This chapter, you introduced Kevin. The banter between he and Leon is also quite well written. I am not a writer. I just really like to read. Keep up the great work. RC

I am not reviewing this work, since I am a reader and would only be able to compare your work to other author's I have read. I will say this. I like your work, I like your character development...the characters Blake and Haze are fleshing out nicely. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading further adventures in A New Life. RC

First...I'm no writer, just someone that loves to read. That said, this work is very impressive. I lreally liked both Bud and Foster, and Tony. I wish you could have given a little more story, although I see your reasoning not to. Now, my one complaint and after reading your profile and seeing your interests...it has been a very long time since I was in a University setting, and surrounded by all manor of things scholarly. That said, a lot of what you wrote went flitting feet above my head. Don;t think I am complaining. It's just now I'll have to get out the Oxford book of quotations and get my googling fingers all limbered up. You just raised the bar for me. Don;t know whether I should thank you or not. Like I said in the second sentence. This is very impressive. Thanks for allowing the opportunity to read this. RC

I've begun to feel this tale will be with me a very long time yet. It seems like ages have passed since I began, but i know its been slightly over a year. I know for certain I will be here when the next chapter is posted. I told another GA contributor I hate all the cliff hangers....ha! I wouldn't be reading this if that were true. Thanks. RC

Great read...just too short...and I really hate cliffhangers! ; ) Don't take the cliffhanger thing seriously... A couple of my favorite writers on GA are C James and Androgene do nothing but leave me hanging each week. Keep writing. RC

I hate being first. I have never read your work before and have to say, compared to most of the teen high school stories this hooked me from the very beginning. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for letting me read. RC

I haven't walked away from it yet.I like the characters. They are fleshing out nicely.rc

I'm about to read the third chapter, and I have to say I like the story so far. The first chapter was a little rough, but,you got my attention, and I am still reading.I read a great deal. I mean volume-wise, I read a great deal. I read mysteries, sci-fi, horror, and yeah, even a bit of that Gothic stuff...I read the True Blood books.I am telling you this because I think since I read a lot, and am very particular about what I read, I think you might feel a little honored to be included with Dean Koontz, Stephen King Dan Brown, to name a few of the authors I read. Keep up the good work.In case you think this note is so I can toot my own horn...It is your work I am praising.RC

I don't mean to be first. I have read this at least a couple of times before. I really like your characters, their families and the diverse cultures.Keep up the great work.