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Logan is kind of an idiot for ever tangling with big haired beaches in the first place. Not too smart to tangle with any kind of woman, They have teeth and usually have very long brightly painted and very sharp claws, plus they run in packs....NUFF SAID.. Oh...and don't get rid of Taylor.....(like we readers should be allowed to tell you the writer how to write) Hey just thought that a couple of the BHBs remind me of a terror from my high school days...she was a double BHB who beat me up with the cast of her broken right arm one summer...True love!!!! Keep up the good work!
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This is my first review of this. I really like your character development and the plot. It made me think. Some times I think having to think is loads better than being led around like a dog on a leash, by the writer. I don't know what to make of Greg though, misleading Corey with that kiss and all. I can't wait for the next installment...there is going to be a next installment...RIGHT!!!! Thanks for letting me and all those other people read this. RC
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Two chapters and still no date eh? I think of all the stories you have posted, except for all that sex in the House Always Wins, I like this story best, because a good deal of the conflict is internal instead of just all that yelling, and also there's no nagging mother-in-law....so far! Your characters are so fleshed out. . .I feel like I can almost reach out and touch Tom and Kit some times. RC
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Chapter 18: Whispers in the Dark
Swhouston44 commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 18: Whispers in the Dark
I'm sitting here wandering why, since this is one of my all time favorite stories, that I am just now reading chapter 18. Finally a bit of revelation by Blake. I figured it out. I held off reading this chapter so I could have at least three to lose myself in for a few hours. Really good reading awaits me. Thanks. -
Just found these stories. Saw your story and had to give it a read. This is really well written andI can tell that a lot of thought went into the individual dare segments. Your characters appear to have been fleshed out nicely given the scope of this work. This gave me some way-back remembrances of my stupid moments, and some of the duh-mass dares I took. Thanks for posting this. RC
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Worth wading through all the angst. I would make the comment that this seems like a perfect spot to end on, though I'd guess an untold number of rabid readers would demand my head, and that your fingers never leave the keyboard and that you keep posting further additions to this story.
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I haven't read this type of story for a long time and was really surprised when I realized I was hooked. I will save my review for after, but ....um .... I liked it a lot.
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Reply from Quonus10 (author) Thanks Oh, and what would be your one more wish??
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Prompt 38: Three Wishes 2.0
Swhouston44 commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Prompt 38: Three Wishes 2.0
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You are my favorite writer on AG, since you posted this before Tuesday. Have to tell you I am really getting to like Shane. I figure since this chapter was all relationship , that next posting some stuff is going to hit the fan. I just noticed something....not that you have ever put any in the works of yours I have read.....lol but in this chapter, although a 500 ft cliff plays a really big part throughout, there were no cliffhangers..... I really liked your inclusion of that precipice being right in front of Shane and Trevor as they talked of friends, family and future.
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A very terse but well written tale that I enjoyed reading ....Thanks for posting it.
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I have enjoyed the story so far. By the way what's the name of the town. Some of your characters sound like a few of my relatives.
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I take it you are making Trevor wait until he's legal in Oz before he's going to get anything down under... This is great fun to read...The reviews and your replies to same are pretty entertaining too. RC
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The chapter title was appropriate. What's happened? Two chapters with no...cli$$!*ngers .....I won't write that word again, I promise!!! I'm alarmed. Real great chapters back to back.. Seems we're getting a good deal of meat and a little gristle to chew on this week and last, and no dammed(misspelled on purpose) you know whats...thank you very much. Shane and Trevor are bonding and Shane is pretty intuitive when it comes to problems afflicting Trevor. You have created some pretty good people with Trevor,Joel, Shane and Lisa and I see where Bridget got villain of the year last year...... Keep up the great work RC
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I agree with two of the other reviewers of this chapter and think a certain author is a tease. Poor Trevor. A certain part of his anatomy must be turning from blue to black b now.....Also, I saw where in 2010 you were awarded the title King of ...what was it now....Oh yeah!....CLIFFHANGERS. Belated congrats. Trevor had better come out to Shane soon. Even I am beginning to squirm a little reading of Trevor's dillemna. Think about it. Trevor's last hook up was months ago. Keep up the great work. RC
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Chapter 10 - Sam and Tim
Swhouston44 commented on CarlHoliday's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Sam and Tim
I waited until this chapter to write anything. You write a blue streak. I couldn't quit reading before the end of this chapter. I hope more chapters will be posted in the near future. RC -
Chapter 17: Injured Diver
Swhouston44 commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 17: Injured Diver
Thanks. This chapter was a really great ride! RC -
You wanting to see the looks on our faces is going to come back on you if you don't get that next chapter out. We sit here for 2 weeks after you drop us that cliff and expect us to be patient. Then you joke about it....... You have us by the short and curlies... AND YOU ARE LAUGHING ABOUT IT AREN'T YOU!!!! Great Story, RC
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Great Story!
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Have been getting treatment for the overdose thank you very much. I like the idea of keeping it all in the family, and that Kit seems to be a bit more grownup than mom or pop!!! Okay I'll say it! More please! RC
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Really great getting this on top of the finale of Colorado Game. Your stories are fun to read, and always worth waiting for. Thanks, RC
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I love the how you wrapped up the story... In a reply to my earlier review you mentioned something about an overdose.........WELL!!!! how about a little CONFOUNDED II
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Having a great time reading this. Its not often I enjoy something this much. The clock going off instead of Mark is pretty darn funny. I like your characters...here and in the House Always Wins. Thanks for posting this for all to read RC
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Amazing, intriguing....a spiderweb of a chapter. My only question...will there be more?
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Very nice beginning. At the onset I felt like I started out running at full speed. I like the characters, and each time you submit a new offering, your writing keeps drawing me in. I'd worry you might get carried away by a mob of angry readers if you don't continue this tale. ; ) lol RC
