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You know this was my high school years........ oh the heart aches i had...
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Two days it took me to read this story from chapter one to chapter 30... I never been into zombie storys nor care about it. but hell This is a good story! keep up with the good work!!!
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working on chapter 16 as we speak!
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Hey, thanks for the reviews bro. You even mention some stuff I haven't even thought of! HAHAHAHA! There is another chapter coming out, just waiting on something! it's a surprise!
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Hey guys, I know it’s been a long time since the last time I added a chapter on this story. Honestly, I was going just to drop it since I’m a very busy guy. But over that last two years, I kept getting emails and reviews. I was surprised. Nonetheless, I feel honored that you guys are still reading this story. I want to say thank you so much… so here it is. Chapter 15 of Destiny Ship Day 18 of 20 Nate looked at the ceiling as he lay on his bed, still thinking about what happen a few days ag
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chapter 15 is in process.
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Honestly. this is the first time i came here this year.... As for the story. im not sure if the story going going to cont' i had alot happen to me last 12 months. Lost my home due to massive forest fire. Lost of high paying job. Lost of family members and family getting cancers... So alot happen to me. I want to write again.... Im planning to read my story today and see if i can get a spark going. thanks for the review. It really means alot and knowing this story is doing okay.
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Destiny by Hawkeye hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Hey guys and gals. Thank you for the reviews and personal emails! As I’ve been saying, it means a lot to me when you guys leave me messages. That is what keeps me going! And I have even chatted with some of you folks! I loved it, so if you ever want to come and chat with me and my friends. Come to #talkwritersplace on IRC. The server is: irc.sierranet.org. I would love to hear from you. Also you may add me to your Facebook at: http://www.facebo
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Destiny by Hawkeye Hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Edited by Pete Chapter 13 Day 12 of 20 “No, I don’t want vanilla cake, maybe chocolate cake with strawberries for topping.” Nate looked at the replicator’s food process control panel. “Well it’s your choice, Son, but just remember, everyone else has to eat it too,” Beth said, as she wiped down the table for the birthday party. “Well, we could have chocolate cake and everyone could choose their own toppi
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Thanks for the review buddy!!! Working on chapter 13 as we speak! YAY!
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Destiny by Hawkeye Hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com I want to say thanks to all the fans who gave me reviews from the last few chapters. Keep them coming, they help to inspire me to write more. Also I want to thank my editor, Pete. Thanks buddy for being there for me. Also I want say sorry for the delay of this chapter. Work hours have been crazy and I had a bit of writer block! ARGGH J but it’s all good now. TA TA Chapter 12 Day 7 of 20 As he was lying on the bed looking at his
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Destiny by Hawkeye Hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Edited by Alex atgtrn1@yahoo.com Chapter 11 - Day 3 of 20 “Yeah, he was so sweet!” Nate finished explaining to Alex about how Derek had secretly prepared a picnic the night before. He was sitting next to Alex at their normal lunch table at ESF HQ, enjoying their meal together. “Oh, that's very nice.” Alex complimented Nate, and he was happy for his new friend. Nate cracked a smile as he recalled the memories
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Destiny by Hawkeye Hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Edited by Alex atgtrn1@yahoo.com My advice, get some tissues, you going to need it…. Gentlemen, I give you Destiny Chapter 10. Chapter 10 Nate opened his eyes and gasped. His eyes teared up, and he took a tight hold of Derek's hand. He just stood there to take in the sight of something special, that someone had put time and effort into preparing for him, for the first time in his life. Nate felt very loved and cared
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Destiny by Hawkeye hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Chapter 9 Entering his bedroom, Nate crashed onto his bed. Feeling drained and mental exhausted, he was too lazy to have enough strength to help his mom make dinner. Looking at his comm-pad, he decided to call Derek and see how his day had been. After a minute, a hologram of Derek's head was projected into Nate's view. Nate said hi with a smile. “Hi sweetie, how was your first day of training?” Derek asked while looking for som
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Do you think Nate will ever forgive his dad? Chapter 8 Day one of twenty Staring into the bathroom mirror, Nate was feeling pretty nervous about his first day of training. He felt unsure of what was going to take place. Nate applied some gel to his hair and worked it into a semi faux-Mohawk style, and sprayed some cologne on to his naked body. Happy with his hair, he walked out into his bedroom and put his clothes on. He slipped a pair of printed dark red boys' boxer briefs up his
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This just a short chapter, I hope you enjoy! Thank again to Alex and Pete for helping me out. Destiny by Hawkeye hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Chapter 7 “Aren’t you supposed to be in school?” Nate asked as he sat down next to Derek, after their mutual orgasms. “Yeah...” Derek smiled and blushed slightly. “Skipped school, eh?” Nate teased him gently and smiled. “Well, I wanted to see you! Since you were sick yesterday, I thought I should stop by and vi
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Thank you for your reviews and emails. I cherish each one and hope for more in the coming future. Also I wish to thank my subject matter expert and editor Alex and my other editor Pete. If it wasn’t for your guys. This story never gotten pass the first page. Destiny by Hawkeye hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Chapter 6 Nate watched his father's fist slowly hurtling towards his eye. Unable to duck or move in time to avoid the fist, the movement seemed to him to be in slow motion.
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Destiny by Hawkeye hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Chapter 5 Lying on his chest, his body rises and falls slowly. Deeply involved in his own dream world. He didn’t know that his father was watching him from the doorway. It was past 6am, and Nate was soundly asleep on his bed, while father watched his son sleeping peacefully. Dan left the bedroom, sat in his chair in the kitchen and looked at Beth while she was drinking her coffee. Dan just sat there, stared at her and he couldn’t hold
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Sitting on the train heading home to Calgary, Nate was lost in his thoughts as his headphones blasted music into his ear canals. Thinking about Derek and what happen early. Feeling happiness in his heart and soul, something he wasn't expecting. He thought it would have been a miserable day fill with sadness and depression. Snapping out of his daydream, Nate saw everyone was leaving the train. He looked up at the display and realized he was home. Nate got up and left the train stat
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Slowly, his eyes opened. A light overhead was blinding him. Nate lifted his arms to block the light. He was unable to hear anything or remember where he was. Confused, he didn't understand what was going on. Now able to adjust his eyes, he sat up, using his elbows for support. Nate looked around, trying to get his bearings; he was in a small white room. There was a tray next to him with some medical instruments.. He noticed he was lying on a medical bed. Nate sat up fully, turned hi
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"HOLD ON DAD, DON'T LET GO!" Nate screamed as he was holding his father's hands. Nate was struggling to keep his dad from being sucked into the void of space. Tears were rolling down Nate's cheeks, knowing he was losing his grip, he knew this was it, a life and death situation, here and now. He was about to lose his father. Debris was flying past them, barely missing them, but hitting the breach in the bulkhead. Nate had one hand holding his father's hands and the other holding on
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A Sci-Fi story about a 15 year old teen forced to move from Earth onto another planet. This is the tale of Nate and his adventure.
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“WHAT!? WHEN DID YOU DECIDED ON THAT?” “Nate, your mom and I decided it’s the only thing left to do.” “f**k that, I’m staying here!” “Don’t SWEAR! Besides son, I think it will be the best for us.” Nate’s dad walked over to the chair and looked into Nate’s dark brown eyes. “Nate there is nothing here for us anymore. You and your sister are not going to have a future here on Earth.” Nate looked away toward his family pictures. “Dad, what about my friends, our family?” He was ready to b
