Hawkeye

You know this was my high school years........ oh the heart aches i had...

Two days it took me to read this story from chapter one to chapter 30... I never been into zombie storys nor care about it. but hell This is a good story! keep up with the good work!!!

working on chapter 16 as we speak!

Hey, thanks for the reviews bro. You even mention some stuff I haven't even thought of! HAHAHAHA! There is another chapter coming out, just waiting on something! it's a surprise!

Hey guys, I know it’s been a long time since the last time I added a chapter on this story. Honestly, I was going just to drop it since I’m a very busy guy. But over that last two years, I kept getting emails and reviews. I was surprised. Nonetheless, I feel honored that you guys are still reading this story. I want to say thank you so much… so here it is. Chapter 15 of Destiny Ship Day 18 of 20 Nate looked at the ceiling as he lay on his bed, still thinking about what happen a few days ag

chapter 15 is in process.

Honestly. this is the first time i came here this year.... As for the story. im not sure if the story going going to cont' i had alot happen to me last 12 months. Lost my home due to massive forest fire. Lost of high paying job. Lost of family members and family getting cancers... So alot happen to me. I want to write again.... Im planning to read my story today and see if i can get a spark going. thanks for the review. It really means alot and knowing this story is doing okay.

OMG OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. f**kin idiots!! I hate school

Damn that was hot! I can feel the emotions when his father left. It happen to me too years ago... Stirred up alot of emotional. but to top it with that hot scene!! hehehe AWESOME

Chapter 14 is up! Hey guys and gals. Thank you for the reviews and personal emails! As I’ve been saying, it means a lot to me when you guys leave me messages. That is what keeps me going! And I have even chatted with some of you folks! I loved it, so if you ever want to come and chat with me and my friends. Come to #talkwritersplace on IRC. The server is: irc.sierranet.org. I would love to hear from you. Also you may add me to your Facebook at:<br style=""> <br style=""> http://www.facebook.com/people/Hawk-Eye/100001450886824 And I’m looking for artists out there to draw or paint my main characters, Nate, Thomas and Derek. Email me a few drawings and you will receive first look copy of the next 5 chapters -and- you will be a part of the story. Anywho, I give you chapter 14. It may be short… but I think you’ll love it.

Destiny by Hawkeye hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Hey guys and gals. Thank you for the reviews and personal emails! As I’ve been saying, it means a lot to me when you guys leave me messages. That is what keeps me going! And I have even chatted with some of you folks! I loved it, so if you ever want to come and chat with me and my friends. Come to #talkwritersplace on IRC. The server is: irc.sierranet.org. I would love to hear from you. Also you may add me to your Facebook at: http://www.facebo

Chapter 13 is released!

Destiny Chapter 13 is release. Enjoy people.... XD Chapter 13

Destiny by Hawkeye Hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Edited by Pete Chapter 13 Day 12 of 20 “No, I don’t want vanilla cake, maybe chocolate cake with strawberries for topping.” Nate looked at the replicator’s food process control panel. “Well it’s your choice, Son, but just remember, everyone else has to eat it too,” Beth said, as she wiped down the table for the birthday party. “Well, we could have chocolate cake and everyone could choose their own toppi

Thanks for the review buddy!!! Working on chapter 13 as we speak! YAY!

YAY, Chapter 12 is released... Click here for Destiny

Destiny by Hawkeye Hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com I want to say thanks to all the fans who gave me reviews from the last few chapters. Keep them coming, they help to inspire me to write more. Also I want to thank my editor, Pete. Thanks buddy for being there for me. Also I want say sorry for the delay of this chapter. Work hours have been crazy and I had a bit of writer block! ARGGH J but it’s all good now. TA TA Chapter 12 Day 7 of 20 As he was lying on the bed looking at his

Destiny newest chapter Chapter 11 is release Chapter 11

Destiny by Hawkeye Hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Edited by Alex atgtrn1@yahoo.com Chapter 11 - Day 3 of 20 “Yeah, he was so sweet!” Nate finished explaining to Alex about how Derek had secretly prepared a picnic the night before. He was sitting next to Alex at their normal lunch table at ESF HQ, enjoying their meal together. “Oh, that's very nice.” Alex complimented Nate, and he was happy for his new friend. Nate cracked a smile as he recalled the memories

Chapter 10 is up and running! Enjoy! Chapter 10

Destiny by Hawkeye Hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Edited by Alex atgtrn1@yahoo.com My advice, get some tissues, you going to need it…. Gentlemen, I give you Destiny Chapter 10. Chapter 10 Nate opened his eyes and gasped. His eyes teared up, and he took a tight hold of Derek's hand. He just stood there to take in the sight of something special, that someone had put time and effort into preparing for him, for the first time in his life. Nate felt very loved and cared

Chapter 9 is Release. Click here A fan have done this nice artwork of Destiny! If anyone like to draw and design, you welcome to draw something and send it in!

Pass ReviewI enjoyed all the details revealed in the classes. And I know I am more excited than Nate about this adventure, haha. I want to go on it. lol.Author's Response: Chapter 9 will be release soon. Hopfuly Wednesday or Thursday. More is revealed... Date: 12/07/2010 08:44 AM Title: Chapter 8 Reviewer: Surfgrommett Another good chapter! I can't wait until he finds out more about what he is doing on the ship! I also can't wait to see what happens between him and Derek!?!?!?! Maybe since he has his own unit Derek can come along??? WHo knows! Can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: Who knows what is going to happen. Nate have alot on his mind, seeing the count down has started. he have 19 days let on Earth, will he have enought time? Chapter 9 is almost complete. Hint: Dad signed him up for something else.... Date: 12/05/2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Surfgrommett Normally I'm not into Sci-Fi but this is absolutely wonderful! I love it! Please, PLEASE write faster than I do! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Date: 11/23/2010 06:12 AM [Respond] Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: bugeye For some reason the rating didn't work so again, here goes.Author's Response: there is a plan in place... Even the story have a ending. But it will be a long time before that happens, like chapter 200 Chapter 7 will be coming soon. it will be a short one.. Chapter 8 is going to be a long one... Date: 11/17/2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: bugeye You're going to have a hard time separating these too now. Date: 11/17/2010 12:31 AM [Respond] Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: bugeye Nate's transition from best friend crush to first love is kinda like going from the frying pan into the fire. Afterall he is leaving earth.Author's Response: Well remember he is a teenager.... One fling to another. It will be explained later in up coming chapters. I hope have another one soon in 3 or 4 days Date: 11/16/2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: bugeye Does Nate really live in the Obama Towers? Lol. I am very curious to hear about Derek and his decision to kiss Nate?Author's Response: HAHA I was thinking up a name for Nate tower... Obama was on TV. so why not name after him.. Date: 11/15/2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: DragonFire I first caught this on Nifty & am pleased you've made your way over to here. You have the makings of a good story here, but I seriously would advise a proof reader & editor. A second or third pair of eyes will pick up & eliminate those errors we authors always seem to miss. That aside, really enjoying it. Date: 11/15/2010 07:14 PM [Respond] Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: bugeye Good chapter. Liked the computer stuff. Fun.Author's Response: Yeah the "testing the sperm donation" is funny. There isn't many stories out there that is for the hard core gay geeks. There is going to be alot more techo in the future! I just wanted to developed the characters first. Date: 11/15/2010 05:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: bugeye Had fun ready this first chapter. Already very interested in Nate and his future.Author's Response: Well I hope you had fun!! I wanted a story that present all types of emotions, funny, happy, sad, love, angry even rage... Thank you for your comments. It does mean alot to me! Date: 11/15/2010 03:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: JeyO In all honesty, for your first writing... this is VERY well put together! I'm not exaggerating when I say that you come off as a very experienced writer. You give very well descriptions of the settings without carrying on forever, you make the characters likable in their own way and very understanding. Everything flows very realistic. A lot of events thrown into three days but they're VERY believable. I have to say, I'm a big fan of this story. I do hope you continue and finish this off.The bad part, I don't like how things set off after the kiss. Everything leading up was very good... but the kiss and the relationship are a bit too weird for me. There is no explanation as to why he kissed Nate or how he even knew he was gay. The fact that no one thinks it's odd how fast two people who don't even know each other are moving so fast. This character just seems to come out of no where as a perfect fit but there's nothing known about him at all. He's not a bad character or anything, I just don't get that one thing out of the story and it weirds me out to no end. Buuuut, good story and good writing!Author's Response: Date: 11/05/2010 09:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Kavrik You have emotional writing which intrigues me. However, let the punctuation carry the emotion and please don't capitalize every word in a sentence. It almost seems like shouting to me. I do love how you break description of characters into different paragraphs, how you lead with exciting dialogue, and how you use scent (she smelled the soap on his hand) to intrigue the reader. Let's see more of this.Author's Response:

Destiny by Hawkeye hawkeyestorys@yahoo.com Chapter 9 Entering his bedroom, Nate crashed onto his bed. Feeling drained and mental exhausted, he was too lazy to have enough strength to help his mom make dinner. Looking at his comm-pad, he decided to call Derek and see how his day had been. After a minute, a hologram of Derek's head was projected into Nate's view. Nate said hi with a smile. “Hi sweetie, how was your first day of training?” Derek asked while looking for som

Do you think Nate will ever forgive his dad? Chapter 8 Day one of twenty Staring into the bathroom mirror, Nate was feeling pretty nervous about his first day of training. He felt unsure of what was going to take place. Nate applied some gel to his hair and worked it into a semi faux-Mohawk style, and sprayed some cologne on to his naked body. Happy with his hair, he walked out into his bedroom and put his clothes on. He slipped a pair of printed dark red boys' boxer briefs up his