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Jason has proved he is a really good guy. He is going to blame himself for Devyn's injuries & unfortunately he is to blame. It was a massive gamble with Devyn's life leaving him there. He should never have brought him back.

I really loved this chapter. The interaction with James was really awesome. I think James is trying really hard to be a brother now so I don't agree with any criticism of him. He actually is being really caring & protective in his own way. Getting Sasha to belong to the band will be the best medicine he could have.

Thank god Jason finally realises some of what is going on. He is yet to understand that Brad is raping Devyn that he killed his parents & had the sick doctor destroy his voice. Jason you are meant to be a bodyguard so think about the door from brad's room to Devyn's room. It is not rocket science. Chris & Trent are accomplices to a crime by knowledge & should go back to gaol/jail. I have no sympathy for them. They make me want to vomit.

Devyn isn't safe locked in his bedroom Jason. Brad has his own private entrance from his bedroom. He can enter anytime and Jason would never know it. Use your brain Jason. Another awesome chapter , thank you

Come on Jason one plus one makes two dude. It's getting pretty obvious. The only thing not obvious yet to Jason is the extent of Brad's evilness but everything else is in his face. Thank you for another amazing chapter in your brilliant story. Very few authors write such a gripping awesome story.

Brad has murdered his father,Devyn's mother, rapes & assaults Devyn, put Kieran into a coma. Sells drugs & sells Devyn as a rentboy for customers to do what they like and all this to his step brother from the age of 12. Brad is beyond evil. He is a monster. Jason needs to understand this quickly or he will be dead as well. I' m very worried also about Michael. Thanks for the story. It has me totally on edge.

I think Brad is responsible for the following crimes The murder of Devyn's mother & Brad's father in the so called accident The injuries that put Kieran into a coma Brutal physical assaults on Devyn Hiring out Devyn since the age of12 for sexual & physical abuse. Drug running & using Devyn as his courier. Blackmail of Chris & Trent so he can use them. I'm pretty suspicious he also sexually assaults Devyn with his adjacent bedroom & private entry. It is an awesome story. I can't wait for Jason to finally understand what is going on & get his head out of a cloud. Come on Jason save Devyn .

OMG is Brad that blind he can't put it together immediately. He should have realised something wasn't right the first time he met Devyn when it was ok for Sam to hit him in the face leaving a bruise. Since than the endless clues & hints by the others. Even though he was acting as a prison guard he thought he was a bodyguard. He may be naive but he is "blinded" by the money despite Chris etc telling him they were being blackmailed into silence. It is time for Jason to use his brain.

Jason is actually beyond dumb. If he thinks it is normal to lock a person up permanently under lock and key than he is sickenly pathetic. His thick head can't see past the money he got from Brad. It is such a joke he was surprised he didn't have internet access. When is that guy going to look beyond his nose. It is also clear that the others including Chris know he is being sexually abused as well as physically abused. They would look the other way if he was killed. They have no excuse. I could vomit over all of them. In many ways they are worse than Brad.

I was puzzled by Devyn been sent to so many "tutors". It seemed unlikely Brad would care about his education. It sounds now that he is been used as a rent boy to these tutors & the police chief. Knowing Brad it would not be for money but for favours as he wouldn't need that amount of money. Brad clearly killed his own father & Devyn's mother to access the fortune. I'm not certain why he is keeping Devyn alive but most likely to control Devyn's inheritance from his mother. Jason is still indebted so much to Brad he is missing all the clues.

I loved this chapter. I loved Sasha & James interaction especially the last line. It is so sweet how Lacey calls him baby. Their relationships blurs between sister & mother. Where is Frank ? I realise he is around but I ' m really looking forward to Frank letting go & showing his love for his son which is clearly immense. I am so happy the story doesn't end here . That made my day. I wondering when Sasha becomes Alex again. I suspect soon.

I can't believe Frank let them leave without bodyguards. He should have seen that this could happen. Also it was insane punishing James by humiliating him by forcing him to buy women's underwear. It is as if they wanted to totally destroy any chance of James & Sacha being friends. By the way when will the next chapter be published. This story is totally consuming me.

Hi I'm not sure where you got your information but Australia has some of the strictest labour laws in the world. There is no systematic use of children for any sort of labour in Australia. It's likely some families with farms have their children helping out but nothing like what you describe. It is much more likely in the USA.

James has acted in such an evil,cruel & twisted way that is hard to see how Sacha could ever forgive and trust him. James has become one of Sacha's tormentors no different to the cruel people who have tortured Sacha in the past. James will struggle to ever develop a relationship With Sacha . His potential for cruelty will always remain in Sacha's mind. I think James did see something in Sacha's face giving him a clue to his despair & pain but I think it is too late. He might soon understand how shocking an existence Sacha has had and suffer guilt & regret but I think the damage is done & never really repairable.

I don't have any sympathy for James at all. This poor little rich boy has had everything he could dream given to him. He lives in absolute luxury. Sure he didn't have the full attention of his distraught parents. However they needed his support as much as he needed support. He should spend a bit of time with the millions of children living in refugee camps to learn what real misery life can be. He wouldn't have survived very long in Alex's shoes if he was the one who was kidnapped.He is a pathetic, cruel piece of slime. He isn't totally ignorant of the things Alex has been through. He only wants to know the parts that he can use to humiliate Alex ( Sacha). I find it hard to not accept that he isn't evil. I hope he suffers along the way.