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Jason has proved he is a really good guy. He is going to blame himself for Devyn's injuries & unfortunately he is to blame. It was a massive gamble with Devyn's life leaving him there. He should never have brought him back.

I really loved this chapter. The interaction with James was really awesome. I think James is trying really hard to be a brother now so I don't agree with any criticism of him. He actually is being really caring & protective in his own way. Getting Sasha to belong to the band will be the best medicine he could have.

Thank god Jason finally realises some of what is going on. He is yet to understand that Brad is raping Devyn that he killed his parents & had the sick doctor destroy his voice. Jason you are meant to be a bodyguard so think about the door from brad's room to Devyn's room. It is not rocket science. Chris & Trent are accomplices to a crime by knowledge & should go back to gaol/jail. I have no sympathy for them. They make me want to vomit.

Devyn isn't safe locked in his bedroom Jason. Brad has his own private entrance from his bedroom. He can enter anytime and Jason would never know it. Use your brain Jason. Another awesome chapter , thank you

Come on Jason one plus one makes two dude. It's getting pretty obvious. The only thing not obvious yet to Jason is the extent of Brad's evilness but everything else is in his face. Thank you for another amazing chapter in your brilliant story. Very few authors write such a gripping awesome story.

Brad has murdered his father,Devyn's mother, rapes & assaults Devyn, put Kieran into a coma. Sells drugs & sells Devyn as a rentboy for customers to do what they like and all this to his step brother from the age of 12. Brad is beyond evil. He is a monster. Jason needs to understand this quickly or he will be dead as well. I' m very worried also about Michael. Thanks for the story. It has me totally on edge.

I think Brad is responsible for the following crimes The murder of Devyn's mother & Brad's father in the so called accident The injuries that put Kieran into a coma Brutal physical assaults on Devyn Hiring out Devyn since the age of12 for sexual & physical abuse. Drug running & using Devyn as his courier. Blackmail of Chris & Trent so he can use them. I'm pretty suspicious he also sexually assaults Devyn with his adjacent bedroom & private entry. It is an awesome story. I can't wait for Jason to finally understand what is going on & get his head out of a cloud. Come on Jason save Devyn .

OMG is Brad that blind he can't put it together immediately. He should have realised something wasn't right the first time he met Devyn when it was ok for Sam to hit him in the face leaving a bruise. Since than the endless clues & hints by the others. Even though he was acting as a prison guard he thought he was a bodyguard. He may be naive but he is "blinded" by the money despite Chris etc telling him they were being blackmailed into silence. It is time for Jason to use his brain.

Jason is actually beyond dumb. If he thinks it is normal to lock a person up permanently under lock and key than he is sickenly pathetic. His thick head can't see past the money he got from Brad. It is such a joke he was surprised he didn't have internet access. When is that guy going to look beyond his nose. It is also clear that the others including Chris know he is being sexually abused as well as physically abused. They would look the other way if he was killed. They have no excuse. I could vomit over all of them. In many ways they are worse than Brad.

I was puzzled by Devyn been sent to so many "tutors". It seemed unlikely Brad would care about his education. It sounds now that he is been used as a rent boy to these tutors & the police chief. Knowing Brad it would not be for money but for favours as he wouldn't need that amount of money. Brad clearly killed his own father & Devyn's mother to access the fortune. I'm not certain why he is keeping Devyn alive but most likely to control Devyn's inheritance from his mother. Jason is still indebted so much to Brad he is missing all the clues.

I loved this chapter. I loved Sasha & James interaction especially the last line. It is so sweet how Lacey calls him baby. Their relationships blurs between sister & mother. Where is Frank ? I realise he is around but I ' m really looking forward to Frank letting go & showing his love for his son which is clearly immense. I am so happy the story doesn't end here . That made my day. I wondering when Sasha becomes Alex again. I suspect soon.

I can't believe Frank let them leave without bodyguards. He should have seen that this could happen. Also it was insane punishing James by humiliating him by forcing him to buy women's underwear. It is as if they wanted to totally destroy any chance of James & Sacha being friends. By the way when will the next chapter be published. This story is totally consuming me.

Hi I'm not sure where you got your information but Australia has some of the strictest labour laws in the world. There is no systematic use of children for any sort of labour in Australia. It's likely some families with farms have their children helping out but nothing like what you describe. It is much more likely in the USA.

James has acted in such an evil,cruel & twisted way that is hard to see how Sacha could ever forgive and trust him. James has become one of Sacha's tormentors no different to the cruel people who have tortured Sacha in the past. James will struggle to ever develop a relationship With Sacha . His potential for cruelty will always remain in Sacha's mind. I think James did see something in Sacha's face giving him a clue to his despair & pain but I think it is too late. He might soon understand how shocking an existence Sacha has had and suffer guilt & regret but I think the damage is done & never really repairable.

I don't have any sympathy for James at all. This poor little rich boy has had everything he could dream given to him. He lives in absolute luxury. Sure he didn't have the full attention of his distraught parents. However they needed his support as much as he needed support. He should spend a bit of time with the millions of children living in refugee camps to learn what real misery life can be. He wouldn't have survived very long in Alex's shoes if he was the one who was kidnapped.He is a pathetic, cruel piece of slime. He isn't totally ignorant of the things Alex has been through. He only wants to know the parts that he can use to humiliate Alex ( Sacha). I find it hard to not accept that he isn't evil. I hope he suffers along the way.

I love this story. Please keep writing.

This is the best story I have ever read on this site. I know Spencer is fictional but I love him.

Wow, great chapter. It was a really sad chapter. Zach is a paradox. After his initial shock he seemed to be quite caring but despite knowing Bay was hurting he turned so quickly and really quite cruelly. Although Bay contributed to it I hope he regrets it one day. It was also sad how Alex struck back so cruelly. I know Bay was awful at the time Alex came out but Alex proved he was just as cruel and awful. They all look fairly ordinary human beings. Lena comes out the best.

Personally I would like Bay to forget Issac. Issac on one hand needs to be in control but on the other hand needs Zoltan & Zulan not just as friends but as personal bodyguards. I haven't forgiven Zulan or Issac for the attack on Bay. .Issac is the much older but acts as the much younger. He seems incredibly weak and I suspect Bay will have a full-time job dealing with Issac's insecurities. In addition it seems like there isn't going to be much privacy in their relationship. Bay can expect the two Zs to get a running commentary on all aspects of their life including their sex life. It's a bit creepy. I can only just imagine how Issac would have reacted if it was the reverse with two of Bay's friends discussing with Issac the bottoming issue. He would be straight out the door with no chance for discussion. Zulan is attempting to assist Bay but in reality it is the least he can do as there has been no apology. In any case I think he is doing it for Issac and not Bay as he realises Issac is not going to get someone as special as Bay again.

I'm a little surprised that most of the sympathy in this awesome story is towards Issac. Even before Bay's " I'm not that gay" gaffe Zulan was warning him not to hurt Issac. It doesn't seem right that 3 guys at least 8 years older are all worried about Issac being hurt. Normally it would be the reverse with concern for the much younger, inexperienced Bay. Bay's mistake was hardly a hanging offence and in fact the only one physically hurt was Bay. Zulan's attack was not justified and he could have caused Bay to be hurt more seriously. He was lucky Bay's shoulder took the damage and not his head. No-one cares to apologise to Bay for the assault and in fact Zoltan is now doing a Zulan. Issac really only needed to involve Bay in a conversation about his attitude. It is highly likely Bay would have eventually saw his own internal homophobia. Personally I think Issac and his dependence on his 2 guards characterises him as a fairly weak character. Has he told Zulan or Zoltan to leave Bay alone.

Personally I think the much older Zupan & Issac are way to hard and judgemental on an 18 yr old kid. I can only assume Zupan's actions are based on guilt. Attacking an 18 yr old on fairly weak grounds was assault and wrong. Zupan can suggest Bay can keep running for another 10 years. Well if he does he might catch up with both Issac & Zupan with life experience and I think he would change in his acceptance of his sexuality with or without their tough love in a fairly short time. They both expect way to much. This is not an equal relationship. I'm not sure Isaac deserves Bay.

I think this is an awesome story & idea. I notice you have not written a furthur chapter. I really hope you do. Your writing is excellent.