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you sir.....are an asshole..... hahahahahahahhahahahaha

I love the foundation you are laying as well and look forward to all the future interactions the war will bring.

Tay!! I get to be the first to review the new story... hahaha... I like the new narrator and think this is going to be really interesting seeing the dynamics between the younger characters and how they play out.... good start Oh and as a side note, I visited the chat room for the first time and was called a dickhead, laughed at, told to change my name because it was offensive and no one even said hello. If your stories were not on here I would cancel my membership. Come to think of it... do you post them anywhere else? Because I am not very impressed with the people here.

Thanks you! I am looking forward to reading this one.

That was so beautiful I was actually laughing and crying at the same time. I really feel that emotionally I have been through a four hour f**k (can relate from personal experience hahaha). Wonderful ending. Everything was wrapped up. I don't care who the next narrator is or from what perspective because I know I will read it and that it wil be great! Thank you for such wonderful stories that always bring a smile to my face and anticipation and excitement when I see a new chapter posted. BRAVO! ENCORE! ENCORE!

OH MY GOD... not only do we get 2 chapters in one day... fantastic and wonderfully surprising by the way.... thank you for that.... but what a chapter, things going down for omega and the assassinations were f**king brilliant!!

dum dum dum .... wow, threaten the kids so Brad can start killing people hahaha brilliant! and Carson coming back, the gloves are off and let the fur fly.... I can't wait to se ehow it all wraps up...

can't wait to find out what the clincher knock out will be.... and what is up with their sons?

only four more to go and things are heating up.... Ella may be pregnant... what is up with JJ and Gathan? this was one of those calm before the storm chapters and i loved it hahahaha where is the news story of Brian's death?? hahaha

love this story... and am so glad to have 2 chapters so close together. even though it is a cliffhanger! hahaha

great boardroom battle hahaha maybe a little anticlimactic, but then you worked up to a couple big climaxes at the end though. i really hope there is another book coming in this series because it simply MUST continue.

Mark you are an effing TEASE! Talk about a cliffhanger... the whole chapter was one.... great job!

wooohooo i wonder what Alexandria has on old man Pfinster? hahaha the wheels keep turning. wil Brad get back in time? Is JJ really gay? Is he after Gathan? Is Darius gonna get with Ella over break? Who is Wil going to hook up with? Will their sex tape get out? So many thing to find out.... stay tuned kiddies hahahah great job once again.

more, more, more... hahaha great chapter.

Fabulous chapter... I see you are setting the ground work for future intrigue with the sisterinlaw and others. Can't wait to read more