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Chapter 6: April Fool's Day
phallus commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 6: April Fool's Day
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I love the foundation you are laying as well and look forward to all the future interactions the war will bring.
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Tay!! I get to be the first to review the new story... hahaha... I like the new narrator and think this is going to be really interesting seeing the dynamics between the younger characters and how they play out.... good start Oh and as a side note, I visited the chat room for the first time and was called a dickhead, laughed at, told to change my name because it was offensive and no one even said hello. If your stories were not on here I would cancel my membership. Come to think of it... do you post them anywhere else? Because I am not very impressed with the people here.
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Thanks you! I am looking forward to reading this one.
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That was so beautiful I was actually laughing and crying at the same time. I really feel that emotionally I have been through a four hour f**k (can relate from personal experience hahaha). Wonderful ending. Everything was wrapped up. I don't care who the next narrator is or from what perspective because I know I will read it and that it wil be great! Thank you for such wonderful stories that always bring a smile to my face and anticipation and excitement when I see a new chapter posted. BRAVO! ENCORE! ENCORE!
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OH MY GOD... not only do we get 2 chapters in one day... fantastic and wonderfully surprising by the way.... thank you for that.... but what a chapter, things going down for omega and the assassinations were f**king brilliant!!
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dum dum dum .... wow, threaten the kids so Brad can start killing people hahaha brilliant! and Carson coming back, the gloves are off and let the fur fly.... I can't wait to se ehow it all wraps up...
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can't wait to find out what the clincher knock out will be.... and what is up with their sons?
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only four more to go and things are heating up.... Ella may be pregnant... what is up with JJ and Gathan? this was one of those calm before the storm chapters and i loved it hahahaha where is the news story of Brian's death?? hahaha
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love this story... and am so glad to have 2 chapters so close together. even though it is a cliffhanger! hahaha
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great boardroom battle hahaha maybe a little anticlimactic, but then you worked up to a couple big climaxes at the end though. i really hope there is another book coming in this series because it simply MUST continue.
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Mark you are an effing TEASE! Talk about a cliffhanger... the whole chapter was one.... great job!
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wooohooo i wonder what Alexandria has on old man Pfinster? hahaha the wheels keep turning. wil Brad get back in time? Is JJ really gay? Is he after Gathan? Is Darius gonna get with Ella over break? Who is Wil going to hook up with? Will their sex tape get out? So many thing to find out.... stay tuned kiddies hahahah great job once again.
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more, more, more... hahaha great chapter.
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Fabulous chapter... I see you are setting the ground work for future intrigue with the sisterinlaw and others. Can't wait to read more
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I love that way you make the whole thing so real. It is refreshing to read something that makes homosexuality normal almost included as a textural conext to enhance the depth of a character or illuminate the connection between characters. Although I love to read the description sex action it is such an integral part of the story and character development it is not the focus. I would be just as engaged in these stories without them, although I may not stay up for 8 hours at a stretch reading a single book hahahaha. Good job and I hope to see many more stories from you in the future. P.S. I think that JP will appreciate Brad's creativity with Brian since JP would have had him killed outright or done it himself. He has a ruthless past!
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and so it begins... beautiful! can't wait for more...
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HAHAHAHA Absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!! Loved this chapter.... wanted it to keep on going too..and I am even more eager to see what Elizabeth comes up with and to kill off Brian as well... this karma thing is wonderful!
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Sorry this is for ch62 but I realized after that you can only add one review and it doesn't let you edit it. Anyway, I had another idea... perhaps the threat of Brad acknowledging publicly who his father is would be enough to make her back off since it would ruin her in Washington. Someone like her would have lots of enemies just waiting to pounce and hasten her demise... maybe akll he has to do is show the first slight crack for the pariah to attack hahahahahahaha. Just another thought and BTW do I have to say how much I love this whole series... and all your others? hahaha
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I really enjoyed this twist. I love where Brad and Robbie are right now. I wonder how Brad and/or Wade will get his mother out of the clutches of Alexandria. Perhaps her grandfather on her mother's side was a Nazi doctor war criminal.... I know you will be creative... or perhaps she has no skeletons and they beat her the old fashioned way - by getting the goods on or influencing the politicians. Perhaps Brad finds a copy of his father's wishes in that box of items and it gives him the right to sue his father's estate and get a big chunk of her assets.... possibly enough so that things start to fall apart with the bad dot com deals. Oh well... just thinking....
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Loved this chapter!
