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Hey Mark, is it close for the next chapter? I have a feeling the story is about to reach another climax! Can't wait!

BRAVO, Mark! BRAVO! I have been absent from comments but due to an eventful and busy year, but following Paternity loyally. Congratulations on your award too!

Well, I kinda suspected all along... lol. Pat is maybe out of the story. Sorry for his character to end like this but great job on touching a topic that devastate the communitty, especially the young. For a moment though, I thought pat was going to be the soldier who Jeff was doing when discovered in El Paso. But then I realize Brad would have made an extensive background check on him..? Jeff and Will... nice but something is missing or troubling my mind here. We'll see. I can see Brad having a grip on these two being together, perhaps they keep it a secret for a long long four years! This could give us such interesting chapters in the stories to come! But who am I, the author? Thanks for your hard work, Mark! P.S. (Could Hot Jeff be a long lost brother of Ryan? Same dick, same father, they say!)

Pat, Pat, Pat? That is the question. If I know your style any, Pat is going to give this story a surprise... After Jeff Hayes, I can expect everything! Oh yes, I have not forgotten, Mark! You killed Teddy Bear! ...Hahaha! Greetings!

Everything is coming to peace and quiet... I think there is a storm coming! After all it's the Crampton-Schluter-Hayes SAGA! Peace can only last that much! Glad to see and hoping to see more of Tony and Will having a good time. Pretty emtionally blending the scene with Will, Brad and Robbie. What better time and place and the night at the parent's bed to really speak sincerely and nudely about stuff! Priceless! Thanks Mark!

Mark you should've warned us to have the Kleenex box handy! All characters played superb! Maestro, you are AWESOME! Great Job on Robbie and Will having parallel flashbacks! I never thought of that !

PERFECT! BRAVISSIMO, Mark!

Well, Jeff seems to be sending a direct shot -And I don't mean a load one, but he seems to be dropping a " this is only for you Wade, pick a boo and enjoy but I am not sharing". Interesting! Now if that turns emotional in Wade... I sense a little disturbance in the force... ! What happens when Matt knows about it and he wants to get in Jeff's pants too to balance the equation? Brad is getting it, hopefully he does not suffer a reversal. The encoutner with the Cabbie and Will was very well put and has some message in there for a 14 year old: fucking does not resolve emotional blanks; and also, not all good looking dudes are great fucks, so don't fuck just because! Thanks for the frequent postings, Mark!

Thanks for the quick posting schedule Mark! This story is indeed enjoyable. I must say, the way you ended teh chapter is quite the soap opera! It will keep us on the edge until the next one. Keep up the great job! Much appreciated!

Most certainly intriguing what title Granger shall receive! After all, he is to raise a Royal, is he not? King George most likely would secure Granger's future and lienage closer to court. Not that he has not earned the right to peerage on hiw own...Lord Granger, Marquis of Brentwood does not sound bad at all, Mark?

They DON'T FIND HIM ? ?? Cant wait for the next chapter. But also, do rest yourself Mark, At this point even in my disadvantage, you deserve to rest! We'll be here when you come back after your 2 minutes nap!

Mark, this was everything it needed to be and more! I could visualize Stef going through the rage and Brad and Robbie coming down to realize they are up to a lot Sh*t to deal with when Will geets back. Wonder if they will get in trouble with the law for abling an abuser to be in charged of a minor... I would not be so fast to think Will decides to go to Escorail just yet. Teenagers moods swings 180 when they see the chance to get what they need or want. Although this implies Brad really changes his approach??? So if Will moves to escorial who could blame him, right? Your promptness and dedication are much appreciated! It was simply Masterful and Wonderful! Thanks Mark!

Stef is going to cut off both Brad and Robbie"s dicks when he sees Will's butt picture. Oh, I cannot wait for that scene!!! Hopefully after all the damages, these guys will see Will ain't kidding... but who knows! Maybe they are just spending too much time in the kinky sex room lately. Maybe Brad has given into fisting himself ! Can't wait for the next Chapter, Mark!

Well, well, well... it looks Brad and Robbie are right in the middle of hitting med life crisis and and of course, acting like teenagers or immature adults is the first phase: Egocentrical and Boyish. Hey, it happens to the best of us. Now, next phase are the "Hookers and the pool parties with 20 something/college guys for my my Honey" kinda attitutde. WIll is just being an unattended teenager, but it could turn nasty... so many options outhere to replace love with, or to attract attention, especially for a teen with money. What I am interesting in, is in the fact that Steph could actually side up with Will. Now that would be a major event: STEF vs. BRAD + ROBBIE = WAR OF THE GALAXIES! I put my money on Stef. He can take them both down at the same time with one hand, no sweat! He just need to do two things: TO Brad, he will give half his companies so he will just jump at it and be twice as busy and important. And to Robbie, he just needs to give him a huge Rubber Fist and Robbie will excuse himself from the battle! (Insert the "General Lee" Whistle here, please). Ha!

George our slutty captain is back! Certainly this promises to be such a great adventure, and odissey nevertheless! Thanks Mark for your dedication and your entertainment! I was wondering when were you going to publish the next book on this wonderful saga. I thnk george need someone or something that returns to him his admirable sense of humor and to recover his natural youthful and heroic take at life. Hopefully this journey will bring someone to keep his libido in practice and his sword sharp and agil! Can't wait for the nexxt chapter! Kudos Mark!

So glad to read Steff back!!! I miss that guy! Hopefully he will be more present in the story. Brad and Robbie are phasing their success and personal triumphs and forgetting that they fight for in their offices all day does not reflect to their naturally selfish oriented teenagers at home. Life a bitch, but they have to deal with it! Poor Pat he is up for a rift. Guilty or not! I'm glad Will is back! although depressed, he represents quite well the typical All-American Priviledge Class Teenager: Self centered, egotistical and isolatedly yet Brlliantly smart.

Alexandra Carmichael! Just name gives me sheevers! But she looks like a little kitten next to Mrs. Danfield, it seems. This drama and trama was beautifully designed and delivered. You realy put your silver and coin into this webbed one, Mark! Thanks! I enjoyed! (I'm not assuming is over, but this chapter was a nice pause in between and you brought us out into campus once again and that was a nice fieldtrip. Expecting second part of campus trip soon. It looks like a lot of that meeting will outcome. And not only for the good fo the GBLT community...

FIVE STARS FROM ME, Mark!!! Creative and absolutely different story line then when at sea. Granger will ahve to deal with the most twisted and unserved sister-in-law writters had evercreative! I lvoe this chapter because although it is rape and I do not approve of it, it makes sense and explains the sadic and out of control personality of Lady davina, and also the powermind she has over Freddie. Very smart of her to try to bareGeorge's child, so her lived could be spared of future attacks from the family she might think. She doesn't know the core of the Bridgemonts at all!

This getting nothing but better and better, Mark! Congratulations and Thanks a ton!

it looks like everyone's got a special someone, except for George... for now! I know he won't be calm abuot his ehm-mhm "urges" for long. Perhaps a new cahracter... or maybe not! Whatever the future, it looks really interesting! Great job Mark on getting the world upside down at this time. It feels really fresh and inserts an air of anxiety to the story! Thanks for the hard work,

I am wondering what's next for Granger and what ship will come to his command, or perhaps, he wil spend sometimes ashore taking care of the political and financial issues of his family? What say you, Mark? What say you? In other business, Kerry it the little slut isn't he? I hope he see straight before parting with Granger!

I agree the pictures really sucked one into Battle!!! Is it ouir great captain Granger to suffer the loss of every "friendly officer" in his ship/command? I could think: poor lad! But I think Llewelyn is going to have a ride when Granger discover his fetishing kinky side! WOW! Can't wait for the next chapter and the future of Llewelyn...

Outstanding work! Thanks so much Mark!

Mark, I loved this chapter! Thanks Bud!

Sequel!