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Ah! The Robbie's Gen trend here is strong. So Matt is actually developing "emotions" for Carl just as Dad/Robbie did with Carson... makes sense. However, Matt wouldn't just lose his head over Carl's dick. He has had to much and plenty of variety of it. Which makes his numb about focusing on just one. But Matt culd be of weak character underneath that cockiness. Which means Carls is far more that what he lot's on! He have might under-sleeve tricks and could be plotting to play them on Matt to affect Wade... Maybe just power-thirst, or seeking ot improve his play time on the ice this season? Maybethere's a relation to Wade's father political campaign? Having reading the whole series, I wouldn't be surprised "Marky"! What you have in stores for us, huh? Greetings and Merry Christmas, Mark! ( and thanks for the St Vincent Chapter!) Reply from Mark Arbour (author) If it seems like it's too much of a repeat of something I've already done, there's a good chance it won't end the same way. ======= Exactly !!! This story is promising a lot!

Ah! The Robbie's Gen trend here is strong. So Matt is actually developing "emotions" for Carl just as Dad/Robbie did with Carson... makes sense. However, Matt wouldn't just lose his head over Carl's dick. He has had to much and plenty of variety of it. Which makes his numb about focusing on just one. But Matt culd be of weak character underneath that cockiness. Which means Carls is far more that what he lot's on! He have might under-sleeve tricks and could be plotting to play them on Matt to affect Wade... Maybe just power-thirst, or seeking ot improve his play time on the ice this season? Maybethere's a relation to Wade's father political campaign? Having reading the whole series, I wouldn't be surprised "Marky"! What you have in stores for us, huh? Greetings and Merry Christmas, Mark! ( and thanks for the St Vincent Chapter!)

My Goodness Mark! You have done it AGAIN!!! I loved the frame of the story am glad Wade and Matt and Cody will have a round in this novel. I surely missed them at times in the Will/Gathan story. As this cahracters are facing life and late twenties, I am interested in the development and results of facing such a horizon of possibilities in the future. As the quest is not for money or wealth, that leaves a lot of times for the characters to face more intrigued and emotional quest and the sense of maturity and parenthood responsibilities and skills life now will demand or force out of them. Also like the controversial issue of gay parenthood and family bias. What set of rules will they create to balance their presence and influence around the new generation babies? Can't wait to read more. And Mark, Thank you! for all your hard work. I most surely enjoy it!

Yes. BIlly and Claire are fraternal twins.

Ha! You killing Stef and Brad at the same time: Impossible! You love them both to death! I will say JP jumped out of your mind and attacked you with a lot of remorse! In any case, nice joke, but now I'll say for your attempt, now you owe us chapters 6, 7, 8, and 9 at once! Two 12 yo's having sex with a 30 something stud: sorry for their asses! I guess even writting this reply about that is illegal in my state !!! Nice try, though! and yes, if you make a Jeff Hayes outta these characters we WILL linch you! Haha! Later Mark!

It already is! Jeff is going to die, isn't he? he's going to blow in his body all 100,000Dlls worth of drugs! f**k! I really like the guy, you know! When did he became such a sack full of shit! It is like reading a complete different Jeff than the "teddy Bear". Uff! We'll see what happens! I hope he really just takes the money. Thanks, Mark!

Jeff needs his time. I hope you hadn't gotten him out of the picture completely! I am not sure about Sam. I don't think it will last. I give them til the end of the summer maybe. I think JP finds in him the old version of Jeff in a smaller more dominable body and he makes love and speaks the samse dirty language than Jeff. Oh yeah, JP is just in denail but he love and misses Jeff, horrible. I shall see what's next!

I don't undersand why you have negative reviews here! Maybe I'm just a lousy critic... I like it! I can't find anything wrong with it, except is maybe too short a chapter!

Perhaps to remmber that Mark is NOT using 18th century English so for continuity and consistency in the Spanish for those who actually speak spanish, we must recommend contemporary Yberic-castillian. It think it will save editorial time and breaks in the writting.language style in the novel. Don't you think? Bolas or huevos is correct, however nowadays in Spain to call the balls "alegrías: would cause a serious epidemic of laughing-wild! No Spaniard man would ask another man : let me lick your "alegiras". The other guy would bend but out of laughing instead of sexual interest in a f**k!

Ojete is used in some regions of Central America and some Gallegan Regions in Spain. However is not commonly used but the contemporary. Internationally it is not a common way to name the ass. Culo in the other hand is less vulgar in Spain than other countries as Mexico, where is a word that shall not be named in daylight-conversations. Culo is more vulgar but is also more sexual at the time of man-f**king. (Editing 101) "Pito" means dick, but at the time of f**king, saying "pito" is like f**king during kindergarden lunch break (yack!). Men use verga to denote power, erection, size, pride on their member. Expressing full development of it, sexual maturity. Is far,far more erotic and sexual. Pito is okay as to say that 'you shake you dick after taking a piss". A seaman would never use pito! He would use Verga, because it is manly, sexual and straight to the point, right! A man like George Granger maybe used pito when he was in the gunroom, but now that he is in charge he would name his member verga, where much pf his power resides and its masculinity value. I have no reckon of calling my balls "alegrías", maybe my grandma used to call those like that when she bathed me as a baby... pendejo, again this is no international Spanish noy Iberic. I guess Mark si trying to find out Spaniard Castillian (Spanish). I find your spanish valid of the Central American Countries. I not saying you are wrong, but the chapters (I believe) Mark is finishing up are to develop in Spain! Please do not take it personal! Dan!

Chingar has different meanings. Although is used to offend a person sexually as in "Vete a chingar a tu madre" Go f**k your mother! (f**k you! -in English) Chingar someone is not the same as "Coger someone (as in f**k someone). Is more like to abuse someone; to trick someone; to frame someone. The word chingar (a verb I'm affraid) can be conjugated in many ways but all of them in a peyorative way: very offensive, abusive or obsene. And very Anti-Romantic! Anyways, it is a common word in the current colloquial in Mexico, Central and South America where Spanish is spoken. I hope this helps you! Dan.

Mark, Spanish is my native alnguage. Let me know if I can be of more help. Although I ma never visited Spain, it is ma father's family country of origin. So here it goes! Nose: Nariz Lips: Labios (for singular just take away the "s") Neck: Cuello Nipple: Tetilla -singular; Tetillas -plural / women's nipple is called "Pezón". A men with large nipples can be said he has pezones (plural) or pezón (Singular) i.e George le mamo sus pezones duros (trans. George sucked his hard nipples ; or, George le mamó sus tetillas duras; trans. George sucked his hard nipples). Pubic Hair: Vello Púbico (there is not a "sexy" way to call "pubes" in Spanish, I'm affraid) Dick(cock, etc): Verga Balls (as in testicles): Huevos (yeah, just like the eggs you eat at breakfast, we called the same "HUEVOS") Taint (area between balls and asshole): Perineo. But is more erotic to describe the zone, as perineo comes from Perinium, the latin medial name. Believe me it does not sounds erotic. Saying: I was sucking his taint (transl. "le mamaba su perineo" is not sensual at all). Asshole (as in the actual thing, not the derogatory term, if there's a difference) : Culo Cum (as in ejaculate) mecos, since there never just one sperm in a stream of cum, we use the plural all the time, i.e. mis mecos (plural) = my cum (in English is singular). f**k (the software will f**king censor this, but you know what I f**king mean): Coger (verb); Culiar (from "penetration of the ass") If you need Conjugations let me know but I am going to put soome phrases and their equivalent or translation next. f**k me! = "¡Cójeme¡" ALT+162 =ó f**k my ass = "cójeme el culo" f**k me hard/ harder= cójeme mas fuerte -or- cójeme más duro ALT+160 = á Méteme la verga = "Put that dick in/up my ass" ALT+130 = é Méteme la verga = "Put your dick in/up my ass" Métemela toda = get it all inside me (f**k me deep) ¡Vente en mi cara! = Cum on my face! Vente is a conjugation of the verb "Venir" which means come (coming=cumming in Spanish). ¡Asi! = Like that! (as in "Like that, f**k me, yeah! = asi, cójeme, si!) ¡Me vengo! = I'm cumming! ¡Qué rica culiada! = What a nice f**k! -also, ¡Qué rica cogida! = What a nice f**k! ¡vente en mi cara! = Cum on my face! ¡Jálame la verga! = Jerk my dick! / jerk me! ¡Mámame la verga! = Suck my dick! And the list can continue forever, not that I use all that ok, is just that Spanish is a very vast language, even at the time of f**king! Hit me up if you need anything else, or specific phrases, okay! I'll be glad to help! I have excellent Spanish grammar skills if you need help reviewing (not that I'm imposing or anything!). But sorry if you find some grammar errors in english. Long day, too many meetings and my eyes and brain are tired, but I double checked the Spanish and it's good!. Dan.

What do you think guys, I wonder who were all the men that "iniciated" Granger into the "Brotherhood/Sexual Ring" besides the ones that have come up already. The ones he mentioned as old and not so young gentlemen that got fellatio from him. Maybe some Admirals like Chatham or Spencer?:2hands: Which coud mean more protection for Granger and his"interests", anyway. He describes a shorty one, hopefully not a Wilcox :wacko: !! Makes no-sense I know! But then, wouldn't that be a turn of events for George Granger? Making out with the enemy? A consequence of his sluttiness? On the other hand poor Cpt. Travers paid hard not being of more elite! He's got his rear and spirit destroyed by the "giant". it break my heart when granger recognizes he has lost the respect he felt for him when he finds him traumatized. There cannot be true love without respect for each other!!! No wonder he f*cked Cavendish's brains out for the rest of that mission!!! He was hurting! I don't know where to place Calvert in the future but he deserves good. Granger is really slutty when it comes to love interests. But what 19 year old, rich, handsome and horny dude wouldn't do in a cage/ship for months in a row, but release himself at the first chance, giving the sexual tension in every man/boy in the ship would be sofocating and he wouldn't be the only one looking up the that chance! Which brings me to the "release" episode the Doctor offered Granger some time ago. Was it only because his patient "needed" to release stress... Mmmh... Mark is real smart by not telling us how the doctor enjoyed it or was just a "medical" treatment in his behalf. I see potential here... And then there is Winkler. Young, innocent (well not so much anymore but still...) Could he be secretely "in-love" with George? Not too difficult for a teen to fall for his hero/boss/protector. Did Winkler started making with/interested in men because of watching and hearing Granger and his lovers moanning and doing their best to destroying the cots and beds while he slept outside his cabin and bedrooms door. That's gotta be hell for any 14 or 15 year old! Poor thing! Granger being so sexually active I am glad the lad has not turn into a sexual maniac by now !!! Until Mark matched him up with Jeffers, all we could think of Winkler was for sure he was wanking it for dear life -like there was no tomrrow- on those nights ! I am desperate to get the new chapters, but Mark, please do not hurry. I know it is not easy to write historical novels. It is a long shot for Granger to reach Admiral giving he is only 19 and admirals don get the honor until at least upper forties, but please do not chop the series with Belvidera. There still a lot more to do with this characters! I am really intrigued in the developing and maturing of George emotions. His dick is still a train in full force with no breaks, but his mind and heart are taking serious changes... he has starrting to evaluate the art of love versus the love making. Can't wait for more, Mark!

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Bridgemont Series, (HMS Belvidera still in progress) what do you think of Patrick Wilson as George Granger) I know he is older given the fact young adults look older and more developed back then, it would fit.What do you think? (tip: He is the actor in Little Children and The Phantom of the Op.) Both these actors are too old for the Series character but what is impossible with photoshop and efx for Hollywood (hah!). and Ioan Grufford as Travers?

Excellent work on "Bridgemont Series", Mark! Is there a schedule for posting the next chapter on HMS Belvidera. I am affraid I have read the whole series in less then 10 days. I finished Ch 39 yesterday. Is 40 coming up soon? If there is a shcedule for releasing, let me know so I can continue with my life until then :wacko: Haha!!! Thanks!