Madeon

Sounds a bit like tooting my own horn, but this is the first time I’ve read my own story in nearly 2 years and I ended up bursting into tears (I’m such a sappy sod). I only hope that the message I tried to convey with this story reaches far and wide, that we should all appreciate what we have and nurture the good in life. Bless you all

Thanks for reading...I will admit this is not my normal style of writing, but I thought it suitable this time, so I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for reading my story and thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it.

For any that are wondering about the title of the story and the postscript, it is meant to be a warning or a reminder. "Memento mori" means "Remember you must die", while "Memento mori ut vivas" means "Remember you must die so that you live". In other words: life is too short, we all must die in the end, so we must live to our full potential during every moment. A sentiment I wholeheartedly agree with.

Time stopped. The jagged lightning, a dazzling web of scars that severed the sky, was yoked, the terrible power within held at bay, aching to discharge their current. It set everything above and below ablaze with a harsh actinic glow. The waves, roiling tempestuously, all spray and white crests, froze, their wrath harnessed until they were free to crash into and against each other once more. The pouring rain paused in its torrent, heavy saturated droplets glistening, sparkling, a min

My first short story. What is done cannot be undone. But what is broken can always be mended.

Absolutely amazing chapter...I have been waiting for this for ages and it was well worth the wait! I cannot wait now for the next installment!

Hi, so has anyone heard anything from Dio after all these years? I hope he's alright, I thought he was an amazing writer!

I just read the last chapter and I really enjoyed it. I must admit, you are right in the fact that the punishments Artie's gang received weren't as satisfying as I thought they would be, but then that wouldn't be life would it? We can't all be satisfied all the time! Anyway, I really loved your story and I hope you really do start a sequel because I would most definitely read it! Happy writing!

Absolutely brilliant chapter! I literally jumped for joy in the last section when the guys in the powerboat thought kookaburra had blown up but was actually sailing away! Love it! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Hello there, I must admit, I am one of the guilty ones who hasn't given you feedback on any of your chapters. It's not that I don't like your story at all. It's just that I am porbably reading about 25 stories that are ongoing and I don't really have the time or patience to give feedback for every chapter. I'm sorry that I seem to have missed your story in terms of feedback but I'll give it to you now. Your story is amazing, in terms of how much detail you put into each segment of each chapter. I mean, even the smallest detail you include can become a big part of your story down the line. I really like the plot as well but I have to say that by this point in time...I WANT BRIDGET DEAD! She is by far the most persistent and irritating of your characters, she's almost like a cockroach in how she evads capture or death and I really really want her dead or imprisoned for the rest of her life! Anyways, rant over...I love your story and I am sad to hear that it is coming to an end soon. Will you be starting a new epic after this, or are you going on a break for a while? Love you and your story, Madeon!

Awesome chapter, absolutely awesome! I have to agree with Mikelaing74 though, Glaster seems to be becoming a bit too sinister as this story goes on, I mean I know he has to be tough but he used to be a bit more fair in earlier chapters. I absolutely love the action between Kandric and his grandfather! The only thing I want to see now is the runification of Kandric and all his brothers and the Princes Klandon and Zoldon, now that will be the best part ever!!! x

Hey, I'm kinda new to all this, and by this i mean reading stories online, and i just wanted to say that your stories, comicality, are the best out of all the others i have read...one thing though! I can never wait for another chapter to all the stories i love and I know that you cant do anything about it, but it just pains me to have to wait so long for another chapter to come along! So, um...yeh, keep up the good work and i really hope you continue this story because im hooked!!!