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Jwolf

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  1. I honestly didn't realize that dream sequence would be so chilling. Glad you enjoyed the chapter though (including the Finn and Puck vision). Airbags can be tricky, but if they stay inflated too long, I've heard they can some minor to not-so-minor burns. Thanks for another awesome review! I appreciate it!
  2. Don't think it was for lack of trying! Lol. Also, I agree above. There are a plethora of eligible gay men to fall for. Have your pick.
  3. The details fall firmly into the 'Nifty Cinderella Effect' I feel like. In fact, I've toyed with the idea of writing my first ever purely biographical novel (as well as I can remember the details, of course). Basically, we were friends for almost a year and I had a massive crush on him, not helped by the fact that our friendship was pretty flirtatious despite his assurance that he was, indeed, straight. Eventually, as these stories go, we got drunk and hooked up. And then we did it again. And then it kept happening for about eight months. I wouldn't call that a super long relationship, but there was definitely something there. I'm not exactly sure if he considers himself straight or bi gay these days, but I do know that whatever we did opened something up for him and he did hook up with other guys after. I'm not saying that snagging yourself a 'unicorn' as I like to call them is common or even realistic, but it does happen. Sometimes.
  4. I have to disagree on my own pure experience. Call it dumb luck, or what have you, but one of my longer, more stable relationships (and best sex ever) was with a guy who was "straight" when our friendship began. It took a few months of me openly crushing on him before anything materialized, but when it finally did, it was awesome. Whether he was just deep in the closet or just into me as an exception to his rule, I'll never really know, but hey... we porked, it worked out, and I filed it away under awesome experiences. Nothing is impossible!
  5. Thanks!
  6. Thanks again for another awesome review. I appreciate you taking the time to offer your feedback. I'm glad you find the characters complex. If nothing else, I'm glad I accomplished that. Thanks again
  7. Jwolf

    Chapter 21: Lucky

    Hey Andy, thanks for such a great review. I'm truly humbled that you like my story so much. I appreciate you taking the time to write this review. I'm glad I could offer a unique and creative take on a tried story construct. I hope you'll read on. I look forward to hearing what you think as the story winds down:)
  8. Jwolf

    Prologue

    I'm certainly glad you're adding it to your list. Enjoy that morning coffee
  9. Toronto, thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! My feelings with the Kyle cliffhanger-- I worried that it was too abrupt a little bit-- is that if he'd told Cooper, there would have been a substantial amount of Coop talking him out of it and creating doubt. He knows his friend pretty well, and he knows he had to pull the trigger on his own. Glad you dug the parenting stuff. I actually really enjoy writing those scenes.
  10. Wow. Thank you so much for the super kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I think the Kyle/Cooper/Chase tightrope will always be there, but I think even the characters know they've got to move forward at some point. Thanks again for the compliment More soon.
  11. Thanks so much for the review and the compliment on my writing. With a story/character like this, being disappointed in the character comes with the territory, I feel. I'm glad you're enjoying the journey!
  12. Can I say, I love your reviews? They make my day. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Another one I thought was packed, so I'm glad you dug the individual scenes. Expect a lot more out of Devon, just fyi. And me and cliffhanger... let's just say we're old friends.
  13. Thanks for the review. I'm not ready to call it a done deal for Kyle and Coop, but this definitely does give Cooper a lot of food for thought. More to come soon
  14. The Funny Thing Is… Maybe Is Neither Yes or No… It’s Simply Maybe In life, there are those questions that pop up that have definitive answers, yes or no. There are those rare occasions where a gray area ceases to exist. You can mull it over, stall, debate with yourself back and forth, but eventually, you have to make a decision. Yes or No. This was one of those situations. Even though I knew maybe wasn’t a sufficient answer, it was the best I could do at the time. “You said ‘I
  15. Thanks for the kudos. I appreciate the review. You know I love romantic gestures too (if you read The List, that is), but I'm not one to make things easy. Let's just say this new thing with Kyle has Coop wondering if romantic gestures are enough. That's all I'll say. Oh and the kid thing doesn't fade to the background, so expect more on that too... Thanks again for the continued reads and support
  16. Hey Davek. I struggled with the decision about how much to include Logan's father, but ultimately, I the story is more interesting confined to their little world, in my opinion. Also, it makes the stakes higher to think they're both uninterested in going to the authorities (Tori very easily could have gone to the school principal about the fat photos, but again... she took matters into her own hands). The thing about homecoming in Texas that I guess I didn't stress enough is that it's not something to be missed... ever. No matter what. It's a huge deal. Thanks for the review!
  17. Well, I'm glad I achieved spooky at least. I'll take it. You'll see what happens when she's gone that's all I'll say. Thanks for the review!
  18. Scary prose? I'll take that as a compliment. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. And yeah, glad high school/college wasn't like that for you! Thanks for the review
  19. I opened my eyes slowly. In a glowing, heavenly haze, I saw Steven standing right there. He shouted something as soon as my eyes opened, and a second later, everything went black again. I opened my eyes again what felt like a second later, only this time, I did so quickly and with a start. I sat up, and a pain shot from my left shoulder, down my spine and throughout my entire body. I screamed out. A second later, an eerie calm came over me. Someone dressed in blue scrubs gently leaned m
  20. Thanks for the kudos. I'm sorry I made you cry... But I'll agree it was emotional. I agree with you on Kyle. His feelings never diminished, I just don't think he can handle putting himself out there again. Theresva long way to go yet thanks again.
  21. Jwolf

    Epilogue

    Glad you liked it:) thanks for reading.
  22. The goal was to keep her from winning, which he did. In thier world that's all that counts
  23. Thanks for another awesome review! I agree, the relationship between cooper and the kids is going to continue to evolve. He has a ton of ground tom cover there, even with CJ. People have strong feelings about Kyle v Chase.... If I can get some merchandise sold from it, I just might
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