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  1. You're right to assume Eric isn't all innocent, but I will say he's the most innocent of them all. I'm glad you're digging the story. Thanks for the note
  2. Jwolf

    Fight Club

    The punch hit me square in the jaw. It was a good, solid punch with a nicely trained swing. My jaw felt like it was on fire. My own blood was the extinguisher. The second hit landed just above my eye. Oh great, I thought. A shiner for the road. I blinked uncontrollably, forced back a tear and then instinctively swung, landing my one and only punch right next to his ear. My stomach was next, followed by my chest, and only after another punch to the head—this time his fist met
  3. Very descriptive and intriguing open. Definitely leaves me wondering what's next for this world of four districts.
  4. Jwolf

    The Funny Thing Is

    Du nu nu...
  5. Eel. I have another protagonist you can't be friends wit. Lol. I like writing love em or hate em guys I guess.
  6. Thanks for catching that. I now kno how oui is spelled. Never trust Tori; that's my advice. Mor to come soon
  7. Thanks for catching that. I now kno how oui is spelled. Never trust Tori; that's my advice. Mor to come soon
  8. His rover is def still at school. You're right to assume bad things will happen... Thanks for the note:)
  9. No one gets sliced. Or diced:) thanks for the review:)
  10. There is a story there. And it's a peach. Thanks for the review.
  11. Jwolf

    Picture Perfect

    Well thank you. Very much.
  12. We've seen how she is at home. Aka not a bitch. But you're right to think Logan should watch out:)
  13. Eek. Taylor? Forgiveness? No. Like really really no.
  14. Haha. I'm glad you like it:) thanks for the review. We'll caucus next chapter.
  15. Hey MC. I'm glad you enjoyed. I'll take a Mean Girls comparison any day. I love Tina Fey's writing. You don't even know how Gretchen Taylor is about to turn... let's just say he didn't always live in Summit...
  16. The contrast between Saturday and Monday was night and day. It was like Picture-gate had never happened. I was in, I thought. And the most important part was that Tori backed off without me having to play my hand. I don’t know if I would have been able to actually destroy Eric, but I was glad my well received threat made that decision a moot point. I did get the feeling, however, that Victoria’s sudden niceness was all a facade. When she invited me to sit under the tree with her and he
  17. Thanks for the review lisa! Glad you're enjoying it so far. I agree that Coop doesn't really get the gravity of the situation, but he definitely does soon. Stay tuned...
  18. Thanks so much. Glad you liked it. Chase and Cooper's relationship is definitely the focus of the next chapter, so I'm sure you'll get your fill of what makes him tick.
  19. I completely understand your concern, but I will assure you we're in for a pretty rough journey. I'd like to think that when things really hit the fan here pretty soon, it'll be that much harder because coop does think things are going smoothly. Stay tuned. Thanks for the review.
  20. Jwolf

    Prologue

    Glad you enjoyed it. You're right, no one holds a candle to chase. I hope you're okay with that.
  21. Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comment.
  22. Thanks so much, Conner. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I sort of stressed out about capturing all of those emotions you named off, so, I'm glad I was successful. Thanks again!
  23. Chapter 2: The Funny Thing Is… For Every Person I Hurt, I Hurt That Much More Inside I knew that my decisions would affect a million people in a million ways. My kids would be forced to ask themselves if their dad was the man they’d grown to love and trust. My wife would be forced to examine her choices and determine if marrying me was the best choice for her life. My friends would go through life believing a fraction of the promises I made. And I carried the burden for every single o
  24. Jwolf

    Picture Perfect

    I wouldn't worry too much about their relationship being effected. It starts to grow moving forward, which I'm thinking will raise the stakes just a little. Glad you found it comical, though! Always a goal of mine with this story. And thanks for the purse catch
  25. Thanks again. Glad you liked the little shocker.
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