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  1. Alright, boys, get to it and good luck! :]
  2. I hope you can be patient with me. I won't have time to write for a while b/c of school. But if you can wait, you won't be disappointed!
  3. Thank you so much! FF series are one of my favorite games!I take a great deal of inspiration from them among other things. I will try my best to meet you expectation and there will definitely summonings! So no worries. I appreciates your review and follow.
  4. The sky suddenly darkened as clouds rolled in above the courtyard. There was static in the air as the winds picked up. Thunder could be heard from above as the whole courtyard was entranced. Fayth lifted up his right finger and pointed at the ice sphere and drew it down in a slashing motion, “Thundaraga!” as lighting flashed across the darkened sky and multiple white hot bolts of lightning struck down onto the sphere, breaking it into hundreds of tiny pieces. The spell left a huge charred spot u
  5. It was just for fun and a way for me to see people preferences. Honestly it's not that serious. No one is saying it's a deal breaker if we don't get those traits. Obviously no one is perfect and I wouldn't want that to applied for me as well because I'm not perfect either. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, even when they don't know it. And I would like to point out, no one is making you make a 'list.' Don't act like you're so above knowing what you like. Just sayin'.
  6. Part II is even cooler! Just you wait!
  7. The courtyard was filling up with instructors and students varying from underclassmen to upperclassmen who were on their break period, curious to see what was happening. It seemed like the entire Academy was congregating to view the upcoming event as word has spread. Fayth stood there stiff as a broad trying to hold it together. He knew now it was a plot to humiliate him. Mana Dual was never performed in the courtyard but in the arena. Head Master Joel wanted the whole school to witness the sham
  8. Your will to be better every moment will make you progress every day until you accomplish all your goals. Congratulations, my friend! Lovealways, Jamie
  9. It was a long walk to the Academy from the Royal Palace. Glenn had already arranged means for transportation earlier, as they awaited them at the Wall of Everett. As Fayth, Evan and Glenn arrived at the Grand Entrance, it was already high noon. The three made it across the fifteen feet tall double wooden doors, made from Melbo Trees. Melbo is a wood so tough it rival most ores. The doors were also protected and enhanced by many enchantments just like the Royal Grounds and the Wall of Everett. Mo
  10. Okay, so this chapter was a very interesting one... the whole atmosphere seemed to shifted and in a ominous way in my opinion. For the characters and storyline I like to clarify. Lets recap, I feel like the rush of the relationship between Logan and Eric was just throw at me with no explanation. There was no development between the two and I feel at a lost. I would like to see more of a relationship built between the pair. I like to see more passion and friendship building other than the hot sex and money. The change in the setting was also confusing. It was like Logan embraced this new life and totally forgetting his roots. It doesn't seem to make him anymore likeable to me. Your use in "Great Lexus Chainsaw Massacre" was absolute hilarious. I also like the comparison of "Centre Courte in the Wimbledon." One thing I foresee is that Logan's blackmail is gonna backfire on him. Since Eric and him are now an item, the pictures are less credible. And I think Tori definitely have something up her sleeves. And seriously what does 'public' even mean?! Haha like who even uses it like that in the context I also wish someone to please lavaliere me! <3 #dreamcometrue. Logan still seems like a douche to me and he's on his way to become a top A d-bag. Fingers crossed. I'm not fooled by Tori's innocent act. She has definitely gonna take revenge you hear me! And Eric is gonna be the ultimate victim. He is by far my favorite character. Logan takes him for granted and does not fully appreciate what he has... The sex scenes where hot but again Logan is a lazy f**k. I feel like he gratifying only and doesn't seem to reciprocate. And I really don't like lazy sex. So one sided "Lower our carbon footprint" LOL. Logan, honest? Doubtful. He seems like he just wants to be apart of "crowd," not like his attitude from the previous chapters and I guess that's why I've like him even less. He so easily changed to someone he's not. Let's hope he sees the errors real soon. He's hardly "one of them" or rollin' in the deep." LOL. All in all the chapter was a success even if it was all about the riches and glamor. I would like to see some soul and heart in the upcoming chapters though. I hope I wasn't too harsh. The story is filled with drama, which I eat up. I wouldn't be so critical if I didn't love it! Nice job and can't wait to continued this hot mess! -Jamie
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    Picture Perfect

    Well that was one intense chapter. I'm finding that I have mixed emotions of Logan now. Yeah Tori is a bitch but I hope her brother doesn't get turn in the cross fires. One things for sure, I didn't know there was an app for that. I guess there really is an app for everything After that one, I'm sure a drama storm is about to strike and what's left is anyone's guess. Logan better watch his back. I hope he doesn't turn into a douche. Again great chapter, -Jamie
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    Iron Man

    “You look overwhelmed,” a voice said behind me. I turned to see a welcoming smile and bright blue eyes against dark features. I was a sucker for creative facial composition and everything about this boy’s charming face was creative. His nose was slightly larger than a plastic surgeon would consider appropriate, but it fit his chiseled face and square jaw perfectly. His dark hair was softly fingered back, creating a flip that could easily be shaken off his face. And then the eyes. Bright blue, see right through you, eyes. Deep blue, dive right in, eyes. Piercing, f**k me gently, eyes. This is my favorite paragraph in this first chapter! I think you did a fine job in description as well as what I will be expecting from the rest of the story. Great start, its witty and classy. The character seems knowledgeable to his surroundings and you write with such style and heat. Makes me want to pour myself a glass of wine and hold out my pinky first. Keep up the awesome work! -Jamie
  13. Hey y'all, Chapter 8 is hot off the press. Check it and dig it. Lovealways, Jamie
  14. Glenn is like the sidekick character
  15. Fayth woke up to find that he was in a warm embrace. Startled, he was confused and disoriented as to where he was. But a warm smile soon washed over his young face when he realized who was holding him. He was spooned from behind, wrapped in sturdy strong arms. One was around his chest as the other around his waist. He sighed contently and turned over to dig his face into the crook of Evan’s wonderful arm. He took in the sweet clean scent permeating all around him. It was heavenly. As he wrapped
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