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    Chapter 6: Bacon

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 6: Bacon

    I read that whole review and all I saw was bacon and cheese. Now I'm hungry.... glad you enjoyed the chapter and you're right about the turn.
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    Chapter 5: Stars

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 5: Stars

    Thanks for the compliment. I enjoy reading your reactions. thanks for that.
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    Chapter 4: Scarecrows

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 4: Scarecrows

    Of course you don't know much about him yet. The mystery makes him a person of interest. I'm really digging that line from Dark's story. Thanks for sharing:)
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    I'm glad you're continuing with this story. It was actually one of my favorites to write. I can't wait to read your color commentary.
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    Picture Perfect

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Picture Perfect

    We'll see how much summit changes him. Thanks for the review
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    Picture Perfect

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Picture Perfect

    I think she has too... Which only means she's gonna raise her game.
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    Picture Perfect

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Picture Perfect

    Glad you liked it thanks again for the review!
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    Picture Perfect

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Picture Perfect

    Him being gay and popular isn't the big issue. The question of outness comes into play in the next chapter. The pictures, I'm assuming that's what you're talking about, would be a big deal for anyone, gay or not. Thanks for the review
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    Picture Perfect

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Picture Perfect

    You're right. There's nothing saying Eric isn't part of the fray. Thanks for the great compliments and the review. I appreciate both.
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    Picture Perfect

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Picture Perfect

    I'll take a Cruel Intentions comparison. I'm going for a dark comedy feel on this one. I'm not going to defend Logan's actions on that one, but we'll see if it really does come back to bite him or not. He definitely assumes Tori won't do that to her brother, but we'll see...
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    Things are going to get messy for sure. Not sure if Coop would have stuck it out or not, but the implication is that the marriage really was over. Thanks for the review
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    Picture Perfect

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Picture Perfect

    You're assuming Eric has no fire to fight with... More coming soon:)
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    Picture Perfect

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Picture Perfect

    Thanks so much. We'll see if Eric can keep his hands clean...
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    Iron Man

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Iron Man

    If only.
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    I thought about telling my dad what had actually happened to the car. Then I considered some issues. I couldn’t prove who had done it; no way would Victoria confess. Instead, I let my dad believe it was a construction accident and before I knew it, I was driving a Range Rover rental and had a spot in the faculty lot for the rest of the year. There was still the question about what to do with the bitch who had totaled my car. To be quite honest, part of me wanted to tell my dad I knew i
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    I should start putting a Kleenex alert on the beginning of the more emotional chapters. I'm always thinking about how far to take it with the humor in a story like this, but to be honest, while writing it, sometimes I need a laugh breather. Plus, Coop and Devon were friends first, and I wanted to illustrate that. I can speak for Cooper's emotion when it comes to Kyle, and to be berated when you're expecting support would be hard to swallow. Their relationship, I think, will be the most effected coming up. More coming soon Thanks for the review.
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    I should start putting a Kleenex alert on the beginning of the more emotional chapters. I'm always thinking about how far to take it with the humor in a story like this, but to be honest, while writing it, sometimes I need a laugh breather. Plus, Coop and Devon were friends first, and I wanted to illustrate that. I can speak for Cooper's emotion when it comes to Kyle, and to be berated when you're expecting support would be hard to swallow. Their relationship, I think, will be the most effected coming up. More coming soon Thanks for the review.
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    That's exactly what we'll call it.
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    Yo might be right on the mj thing, but irreverent is sort of my thing... I'm glad you like the direction we're taking. It was an extremely hard chapter. Especially the Kyle bit. Thanks for the review.
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    Like sojourn, I respect your opinion. Coop has always done things kind of backwards, so it's totally in character for him. As the chapters go forward, without giving any spoilers, I think you'll start to understand Jim better. Could be wrong though.
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    I totally respect your opinion on Cooper, and so far it's pretty justified. I will say, just like last time, it's a journey and he chose, in my opinion, the harder road. I hope you'll stick around. Thanks for the review.
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    Sigh. I dunno, but my mental of them cuddled up in a hotel bed is pretty darn cute.
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    It's time for him to be the good guy huh? I wonder how you'll feel about him after the next couple of chapters. Spoiler: how he deals with CJ is a doozy IMHO
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    Glad you're along for the ride. You're right to assume it'll be a bumpy one. The truth is, I get bore with easy breezy. I prefer messy and complicated:)
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    Prologue

    Jwolf commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Prologue

    So you're gonna read this one as it comes out? As always, I look forward to your thoughts. Thanks for the review
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