Rano

It says (me thinx): PARK YOR CAR at own risk.

Really glad I downloaded this story. Your characterization creates real personalities, and somehow I can relate to both Noah as well Luke...actually to the whole Grimaldi family. I think you did a super job by not describing - in this specific manuscript - to much details but rather eleborated on characterization. The atmosphere and characters worked for me, SidLove and like the other friends who cared to share their thoughts, I also sincerely hope that this really ain't THE END. It would be great to see how Noah and Luke's relationship developes; although I think you've got quite an obstacle to overcome as to explain in future exactly why Lucinda Grimaldi may relent and "order" Noah back as tutor for Luke...unless of course if Luke just decides to withdraw completely and makes it known that Noah is his choice as tutor. The only part that I found so far slightly confusing is exactly how Luke ended up in that janitors lockerroom. OK, I know you've mentioned afterwards that Tony was the culprit...but I was slightly confused as to exactly the how, when and where. I really enjoyed this narative.

What can I add that's not mentioned by now I agree wholeheartedly with KodeOwl and Carrie76 re. chapter 11. Coms, may you live for a very longgggg time to share your consciousness with us ) Tyler and Ariel are so REAL to apparently not only me

Sighhh! I guess I understand our Billy's dilemma for being oh sooo mixed up in his feelings for all the guys he comes in contact with hehehe I mean, the whole situation between Billy and Brandon freaks me out no end! But when he's telling us about Trace (now there's a lad to watch as far as I'm concerned), well, then I'm rooting and cheering him on and getting so befuddledly knotted up when the two of them just don't get it together ( hehehe I guess deep down there's quite a slut in me too...Gee, just think about it! Wanting Brandon and Billy together ... but also cheering myself hoarse for Trace and Billy to work it out ... heheheh how fooked-up can you get?! Ahhh Billy, whatever you do is OK, K? We just LOVE you nevertheless...else we would not have followed you over your shoulder in this lecherous diary of you for so long ;o) You go boy, GO! (pant-pant)

I really don't know what to say, but here I am trying to say something... The problem is that you grow so close to the characters that you become one of them and they become part of you... I feel so sad for Dion and Justin, especially ... as well as the rest of the clan at the lot. Hope is supposed to never let down, but it seems it does somehow, sometimes... It is just so sad that, as jadelilac has noted, that it is so sad that it has to be our Dylan... And don't anyone out there try to tell us that this is only but figmants of the imagination of someone else!!! This Clan at the lot has become much more than just "imaginative figments" - actually I don't know what to say, really...

Thank you The update is much appreciated from my neck of the woods. Strength and more power to You...