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    Chapter 1

    K.C. commented on Skylights's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I like that Gabe and Sahyl get their views on love from their families. It explains a lot about their actions. The story flows better with less of the Danny Steve drama.
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    Chapter 8

    K.C. commented on Empathy's story chapter in Chapter 8

    I can't wait to find out what happens to Kyle. I hope you tell us how Jacob died. Look forward to more.
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    Chapter 1

    K.C. commented on AranaDarkwolf's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I usually don’t like when a story toggles back and forth between past and present, but it works well with this story. However, it did get a little confusing of which time it was about 2/3rds way through chapter 1. The end was unexpected that surprising fit.
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