Aximili Chaosmembrane

What if the one you love, who doesn't know you existed, is in danger? How far will you go to protect him? There are some things in this universe best kept secret and away from the curious hands of humanity. Alfred's tale is just among the unfortunate ones that exist out there. The Servant This is a one-shot story, but I hope it pleases your palate. Enjoy...

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Very true. I thought I wasn't depressed when I was. I thought I was right for feeling bad because everything around me is falling apart, so I thought it was normal. Although the more I talk about my complaints, or defend my feelings/reactions (based on depression), the more blind I became. It was only when I accepted that I was depressed and actually faced it that it started to alleviate.

It's interesting to read about other people's college life. Makes me sad about mine though. Anyways, college was pretty... plain. I was in the closet, and although I was out with a few, carefully selected friends, none of my classmates know about me. Then again, I was pretty conservative and I keep to myself most of the time, hiding away in the library or sitting somewhere and reading a good book, instead of hanging out with people. I think I was quite antisocial, without really meaning to. As far as dating is concerned, a complete zero. I tried some a site called Facepic before, and I met one guy, but didn't know how it went coz after that I never saw him again. Or maybe I did but couldn't recognize him. LOL. I also tried the chatroom, and met a few, but they're just into ONS, something I completely abhorred back then. I was a hopeless romantic, looking for that guy who will sweep me off my feet, or a prince who I will serve as a knight in shining armor. Now, I'm "open," in a way that I'm not hiding the fact that I'm gay, but like Colinian, I don't announce it. They also don't ask the right questions, and assume I'm straight. When I came out, my friends were so shocked coz they never expected me to be gay. As a friend of mine said, I'm the most ungay gay ever. LOL. Another friend, not wanting me to shock other people (like I did to her, LOL), introduces me as gay on the onset of meeting a new person. I just laugh. I think that coming out in school can be liberating. Staying in the closet all those years, I think I was at least safe from disease, but it was five years of pure loneliness. In a way, I got used to it.

YAY!! I look forward to it! Oh... wait... O_O Now I'm scared to read the next chapter T_T This is gonna be a scary Christmas T_T

The Servant "Hello Alfred. How are you?" "I'm fine Charles. But I guess you still don't believe what I've been telling you," Alfred replied. "Well, simply put, you're story is too farfetched..." "I know. Everyone says that," Alfred sighed. "But you know what they say: truth can be stranger than fiction." He gave a shy smile. I smiled back. "So they say," I allowed. He was quiet after that, so I decided to break the silence. "Do you still get visits..." I stopped short when I saw the

What would you do if a demon appears out of nowhere, in all its naked rawness, willing to grant you a wish that someone else would die for?

This is a collection of short stories. These stories act as clues regarding the Otherworld, or that world which we feel exists just beyond our reach, and as such, might feel incomplete. Unfortunately, real life is rarely complete. The same rings true for the Otherworld. Sometimes, that's not a bad thing, as some endings in life are better left untold...

Torn Paper It was a late, cold December night in a small town. Most people are already relaxing inside their homes with their family, most likely preparing for noche buena. The streets and houses sparkle with Christmas lights, and chilling evening breeze erases any doubt about the season. But the street is empty, with no one to feel the wind. Empty, that is, except for one boy. The little boy walked the empty, cold streets alone that night. He didn't seem lost, nor did he seem to be in a hurr

I knew it! (T_T) I just know I'll jump off a bridge once this story is done (T_T).

LOL. I really want to say "It's okay, take your time," because it's been a veeeeeeery GOOD story, but I had insomnia, going to bed still thinking about the story since I last read the cliffhanger (Friday) that I really just want to know what happened next, ASAP (T_T) I'll DIE of stress and worry (T_T). Then again, I might also die knowing what happened next. (T_T)

I had insomnia for the last two days thinking about this freakin' cliffhanger (T_T). I keep imagining what happened and what would happen. Even worse is that the story started quite lightly, friendly, and such. Then right now, it's bloody! (T_T) I was expecting something to go bad, and I knew that Luke will be part of it, but I didn't expect things to get THIS bad. (T_T) To top it all off (the bloody icing to a chilling cake), the CLIFFHANGER! (T_T) It's an awesome story, but.... cliffhanger (T_T) I hope I can sleep well tonight (T_T).

Awww (T_T) What a horrible cliffhanger. (T_T) I doubt I'll be able to sleep tonight. Or at least not without nightmares (T_T)

Thread for: Twisted Fate. This is the first series I'm making. Please feel free to post questions and/or reactions here. Thank you.

Awww, I just started reading, and I LOVE it!

Thank you! () Yea, I'm still working on tenses. (T_T) I'm still not sure how things work here, so I don't know how to get an editor, but I'll look around. ()

Welcome! Looking forward to read your stories.

I wrote it for a dark fic contest a few years back. Interestingly, my mood was fitting for the contest, so I gave it a shot. Although I didn't win grand prize, I'm still happy with the outcome, especially since this is the very first story I've ever published anywhere. Abomination Constructive criticism are always welcome. Thanx,

Done. It seems to have a slow pace, or at least for me. But you described details nicely I can't wait to see how things will turn out for Andrew.

Hi I'm on your story now. I think it's easier to access it if you post a link to your story here. Will post a feedback once I'm done

Hi everyone I'm sharing my story here: Cold Heart This isn't my first story, but it's the first one that got posted here due to someone plagiarizing and posting it here. (T_T) So some of you might have read this already. It's a finished story, single chapter (or something). I'd really appreciate constructive feedback. Thank you.

I use a deck of cards called Talecraft, although I'm not sure if it's available everywhere. It helped me finish my stories. I also tend to read other stories to get ideas.

Coolest I think it's just make 5 comments though, not 5 topics. Feel free to share your stories. I'm looking for good stories to read here, but there are sooo many stories I don't know where to start. >_< Oh, and welcome to GA!

@Lily: I agree. It seems easy for those who are not experiencing it to just say "you'll get over it" or "things get better." But they're like an audience watching a horror movie, and the person experiencing the depression is the "real" person in the movie. It's scary as hell in there. No matter how much the person rationalizes, depression hits back heavily. @Tara: Isn't it ironic when you need your friends to be there, they seem to distance themselves? When you need an ear that will listen, it seems so rare. Sometimes, there's no other outlet but writing it somewhere.