Apekenua

Good Lord, that was some of the most compelling writing I've ever had the good fortune to come across! This saga is an absolute epic with such an incredible story behind it. Reading through as fast as I did I saw a couple of inconsistencies but these pale in comparison to the sheer scope of the drama your characters are embroiled in. My main message here is just thanks for taking the time to write this and share it here. One question though, in this story you mentioned a school named St. Bede's, I used to attend a school with that name near Manchester, UK and I was just wondering if it was pure fiction.

Your characters are amazing, so well developed in the story but leaving enough unsaid that I just don't know where you're going to go next. How will Tom take that outburst for example. I have no clue if he'll get angry(he doesn't really show emotion that much though), go off in a sulk not taking to anyone again(hopefully we've got past that) or he could just brush it off, though I doubt you'd let that happen. I think if Kit had some sort of vice Tom would be able to accept him much more but poor Kit doesn't seem to have one . I just want to know what happens next! Can't wait for the next chapter.

You know exactly how to satisfy me, don't you? A great chapter and it's nice to see you removing some, quite a large chunk actually, of the mystery surrounding Haze. This chapter was a superb continuation with Blake taking more control it seems and getting through to the 'real' Haze most of the time now. Please don't make us wait as long again. Pleeease

This has got me completely hooked! Great chapter! I keep on wondering why you wrote this from Blake's POV when you can tell there must be just as many things bothering Haze. The 'mask' he keeps putting on, how did it start, who else is he fully comfortable around. Writing it from Blake's perspective does tend to make Haze he mystery but there's so much of Blake left unexplored as well. So many mysteries are aggravating but keep me coming back for more, characters introduced but then not fully explained like Anyta mentioned, alos, totally agree with her, one-and-one-eighth steps forward, one step back.