PoisonIvy
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Thanks for all your reviews I do self edit, I'm gonna go through the whole thing again and update the chapters after I edit them. But what I meant was that it reminded her of all he left behind (i.e tons of money but a broken family), not the actual house.
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Chapter 7 – Eli The day started off like any other, aside from the nervousness I was feeling in having to see Viz and Jake at school. When I walked into school that day, I felt like everyone's eyes were on me, like they knew what I'd done with Viz the day before. Of course, it was just paranoia, no one was really looking at me. But the pit in my stomach didn't go away. After first period, Jake stopped me in the hallway and pulled me aside. I looked around nervously, wondering what he wanted
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It is a quite an unpleasant way to me outed, isn't it
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Chapter 6 – Viz When he left, I wondered where we stood. Were we now an item? Neither of us were out yet, so where did that leave our relationship? Did he want to have a relationship that was a secret? Did he even want a relationship with me, or did he just want to stay friends? I didn't know the answer to any of the questions swirling around in my mind. I'd been tempted to beg him to stay when he said he had to leave but that was ridiculous. I would see him tomorrow. That night I kept repl
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I really like this story so far! The only thing I would change is your use of words for said. You tend to overuse and slightly misuse the word countered. I'm glad I discovered this book (I found it in MaddyA's yahoo group and then found it again on here). Is it wrong that I really want Andy and Jase to be together? I don't know, I just liked Jase from the beginning. Btw, here's a website for when you run out of words for said: http://soyouthinkyoucan-write.webs.com/differentwaystosay.htm
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad that people actually like it, this is my first try at writing a gay fiction novel. I'm glad you're enjoying it
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Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it
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Thank you so much, I'm working to finish the next chapter!
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Chapter 5 – Eli As soon as Viz was gone, Jake sat down next to me and looked at me with a serious face. “Can we talk? Privately,” he asked. I studied his face, wondering what he was thinking and then agreed and walked up to my room with him. As soon of the door was shut, his face went from serious to angry. “What is it, Jake?” I said slowly. “The project is over, Eli! It's done! So why keep hanging out with this loser fag, huh? Why the hell do you want to be friends with him?” Jake questio
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Thank you for the reviews, I'm glad you like it! I took out the part with the teacher at the end, it wasn't important or really needed. Thank you for reviewing this though
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Chapter 4 – Viz The sun shone through my blinds and turned my vision red through my eyelids. I rolled over and pulled my blanket over my face to block the imposing light. It was Saturday but I knew I had to get up sometime so I reluctantly rolled out of bed and slipped some sweatpants on. I was walking out of my room and rubbing sleep out of my eyes when I heard a muffled sound. It was coming from the theatre on the left hand hallway. When I walked in I saw that my mom was sitting in one of
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Chapter 3 – Eli The next six days were made up of school and filming with Viz. We spent that whole week filming my part of the project and working on homework together and getting to know each other. It wasn't a lot of time but I think Viz learned more about me in that week than anyone ever had that fast. It had taken other people two years to learn some of the facts that he got out of me. And all the while, we filmed and worked on the project. Well, Viz worked on it anyway. He'd made it so
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Chapter 2 – Viz The first day of school had started out being uneventful. I was starting the eleventh grade, at a new school, in a new town and I'd already decided my fate—I was going to be a loser, like always. Maybe I'd even be considered a freak, especially compared to the kids I'd be going to school with. Money wasn't exactly a deciding factor here and I wasn't sure whether to be grateful for that or resent it. Popularity was measured with the clothes you wore, the sports you played, the
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Chapter 1 – Eli “Elijah, would you please stop ogling yourself in the mirror? You're gonna be late which will make me late,” my annoying older sister, Tabby, called. I watched my reflection scowl. I hated when she called me by my full name, not that I really hated my name that much. I think it was just the way that she said it, like a mother reprimanding a child, and the fact that she refused to call me Eli, the name that I went by. “I'm coming, would you stop yelling?” I called back. I sto
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Eli Cole is a high school junior who plays hockey, has tons of friends, get great grades, and does everything he's supposed to do. But when he meets Viz McCoy, everything changes. Viz is the complete opposite of Eli, he's shy and considered a loser, because of the way he dresses and the things he's into. The two become friends and find that they have more in common than anyone would have thought. But what trouble will come from the new found friendship?
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Hey, now. Jersey is not all guidos, I'm the proof!
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I actually like Elle Fanning more than Dakota. Hmm.. I loved this movie though!
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Lucas Till went from Hannah Montana to X-Men..I'm surprised by the smooth transition. I, personally, think James McAvoy is extremely sexy, especially in the movie Wanted. But X-Men (First Class) was an amazing movie!
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Sexy is Leonardo DiCaprio in Inception. Is that wrong? ;D
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I don't have many movie selections on Netflix but I'd recommend these shows: Dexter (probably my favorite show, EVER), Arrested Development, The Office, Jericho, Veronica Mars, Battlestar Galactica, Eureka. Those are just some random suggestions of shows that entertained me.
