mr curiosus

Great story loved it from beginning to end, and the inclusion of Jordan made this story not only a pleasure to read but a delight, A real tear jerker, I think a lot of gay people could relate to this story for making the "wrong choices in a fated relationship" and living to regret some decisions more than others, loved the concept well written Thank You...

WoW I really loved this story hope there are more with this extended family, the whole group just invite you into there fold and you feel as though you know them all personally... sad that it's over now plz write more but happy to have read it...

If you liked this story try (The Price Of Revelation by Tiffani Chin) it sort of a cross over/follow on from this story set some 15/16 years later Storms now a lot older as is Sean and the guys and to top it all off theres a twist to the story that will have to enthralled from the outset go read it make your own mind up but I'm loveing it... http://www.gayauthors.org/story/Tiff/thepriceofrevelation/1 The Price of Revelation by Tiffani Chin

Great Story I loved the way the characters all revoled and played of each other, it made it in my mind seem more life like if that makes sense. Anway loved it... Ps nothing came of Bryce's dad? Thank You

Hurray!! It's about time things started looking up for our boyz LoL...

O.M.G. That is the saddest damn chapter, poor Crew he's been through so much crap, it's about time his luck and fortune changed for the better.

So Zeke kissed Chins chin and Hiro's a hero LoL.

Thank You This story does indeed make one think about ones own frailties in this world and to what it would be like to be on the receiving end of such hate, violence, and discrimination at the hands of bigots and homophobes alike... Excellent Story, Well Thought Out...

Great story ~ but I so badly wanted the Ben/Rick wedding to take place, loved the story from start to end, Sobbing like a madman or screaming at a character it was all part of a great ride, but it would have been nice to know what happened to Will to close that chapter of there lives so they could get on with there lives together afresh?... Thank You...

Totally loved this chapter and I have to say believable....

Very enjoyable story Thank You...

I really loved this story it was so heart warming, you just wanted it to go the way it went and I loved the finally excellently written. Thank You..

Really???? I thought ohh great more to the story, but from what I can tell this is the same story over again with if any minor changes I have to admit i didn't reread it all but I'm some what confused as to your intentions, as to how is it extended if the endings are the same outcome, I was hoping for more but am somewhat disappointed I'm sorry to say...

Cool story BUT I WANT MORE I really liked it but it seemed just it started getting exciting it ended

Cool Story I loved the writing style and all the raw emotion you put in to that story, it was a pure pleasure to read and I must admit I did cry a weee bit, Thank You for your effort in writing this and making it available for use here...

Hahahahaha!!! I think you fool is most certainly the reader... I cant believe I read that

Thank You That was such a cute heart warming story, even if I was screaming for them to take it to the bedroom so as not to get caught, pheww that was close to a sorry mommy moment;)

Outstanding Story I must admit when I got to the end of chapter fourteen that I was cussing you, because I thought to myself there is no way on this earth that you could conclude all the open parts of this story in one chapter, but I am more than happy with the outcome and the way you played it out, all I can do is congratulate you for a well written, conceived, and executed master piece... And add that I loved getting to know the characters.Thank You... And to add that I want more ....and soon plz

As I stated in the first part of this brilliant trilogy, I have never laughed or cried so hard whist reading a book of fiction, and that affirmed with this second book that sorely needs publishing in paper in my opinion as it is so of the moment it would shorly be a best seller in a matter of weeks Thank You to the writer for his wonderful ability, and in sharing it with Nifty readers and the world...

Excellent chapter, well written, nothing more needs saying in my opinion*****...

WoW... Loved this story! I have never cried so much reading a masterful piece of fiction, excellent work, well written, well thought out concept, five stars all the way...

Spoiler DO NOT READ THIS IF YOU HAVE NOT READ THIS CHAPTER YET You bad~bad~bad~bad man how could you lead us to believe that poor Mike was dead like that only to turn out to be a dream that is despicable ........

Loved it cried and laughed so much I nearly had water coming from two orifices

Excellent Story I have to start out with i'm not Religous in any way shape or form, and I have to admit I was at times spending more time doing Google searches looking up things than I was reading the story, but that in no way detracted from the fact that this is a well thought, idea and a great piece of work in my opinion... And on the plus side I actually learnt something I Loved some of the foibles and sayings in this story like "grab your cock and put on your jock" mostly the quip about the "three rings" I had a major giggle fit over that The only things that got to me in a huh? sense of the word how many seventeen going on eighteen year olds still call there mother Mommy, well unless they want to use the car or want money and your use of the word latter~OMG Did Cam go back to school.? Did Catherine go to standford.? Did the three homophobes get long sentences.? Did Cam get better,? we know he was on the mend though. Was William or Mark or any of the other guys gay as was hinted at.? Did Jeff get out of the clinic and get clean and go back to school.? Thats all I can think of off the top of my head Other than that I loved it... Thank You And when is part two coming out plzzzzzz...

Plzz tell me thats not the conclusion to this story there are a few unanswered questions if it is ?? But all in all it was a very engrosing story and for the most part well written...