mr curiosus

What Can I Say WoW I Truly Love All Your Works, And This One Is No Exception, Great Story. Thank You...

Really Loving This Story, So Can We Have Some More Of It PLzzzzz...

WoW I really dont know what to say to that, other than I just love your work you have a way of telling a story that makes the reader feel as though there there watching it all unfold right before your eyes. Excellent... Again Thank You For Sharing

Short, Sweet, To The Point without to much fuffing Liked this story and the way the scenes played out, But to stay in those wet shorts all evening yukkk.... Thank You For Sharing...

I Have to say i agree with Marzipan This story had me balling like a kid with a lump the size of a apple in my throut, I not only loved the story but the way it was told with raw emotion. Thank You For Sharing Mr Curiousus Please if you feel you have no hope Please Tell Someone A Parent, Teacher, Friend, Police Officer, Or Call The Samaritans, Dont Give Up Hope.........Someone Will Listen To You Just Have Faith...PLEASE.

I thoroughly loved this story thank you very much for sharing it with us

WOW that is one of the most touching stories I have read in awhile young love not just lust but in the end two hearts beating as one through love. Great Story. Thank You.

WoW that was so hot, so in your face so to speak that as soon as I started reading it I just had to go on and on, even forgoing going to the bathroom till I got to the end, I am so glad you made it a happy teen story short and sweet but with so much emotion it just carries you all the way through it... Thank You Mr Curiousus

Loved the story m8 but poor Mike Is Blown out thats so sad but I'm glad it all worked out for the boys...

WoW that is such a hard hitting slap in the face that I loved it, Way to Ryan just goes to show things arn't always as black as they seem, and the love of your life could be that next stranger you meet.... Now Can You Plz Get Back To New Kids LMAO...

OMG How am I going to get by now I dont have the patience to wait till you write more I need my New Kid Fix NOWWWW LMAO... Loving the story so far but that Sean has got to get whats coming to him and soon, Well as soon as you write it LoL...

Spoiler below V V Again OMG! what a story, I have never been so happy to be proved wrong, good for the boys that it's all starting to come together for them, so far...

Spoiler below V V Loving your story as always, but OMG I thought they were planning a party for Randy's birthday, I really did, no way did I expect Randy to find them in each others arms so to speak. Poor Randy

Really enjoyed this story thankz... Angels have always been seen as a sign of hope as far as I'm concerned so loved reading about them...

The way I look at it is this could easily have been a case of murder, if one of those thugs had applied a bit more pressure, or an impact from the bat in a more crucial place (And no I was thinking head LoL) so Jordan deserve all he gets in my book and maybe in jail he'll learn some life skills if it's not to late for him. Excellent story telling again, I felt as though I was there in the gallery seeing it all unfold before me, but I cant wait for the sentencing to be over so you can get on with the five years later book great work thankz

I think you need to take a deep breath and look at it as though she is letting you off lightly an as much as you still have a friend and a loving person to mother your child, so give the lady some time to adjust, by her putting herself out there you may see it as to quick but she may be thinking I just need someone in my life to fill the big gap you have left vacant, try to be happy for her not only is it good for her to have a man in her life but it is also a bit of protection for your child having man there when you are at school. also you get to go to school and shop around if you do meet a friend all well and good if you dont just have fun looking, she's given you the go ahead to try to sort your head out so please dont deny her her moments of happiness where she can grab them and you do the same. I think you need to have some fun if love and or happiness does come your way grab it with both hands. I didn't and I am still regreting the lover I lost...but thats my loss you dont have to lose out, just be happy in what ever you decide, all the best for your new future......

Short but not so sweet a poignant story, and to think there really are sick perverted twisted people like that out there, that do this sort of thing for kicks, they are the ones that need castrating in my opinion... A very touching story Thank You

R.I.P Dan I didn't know you but any loss of a talented artist is a loss to all, to Dan's familly and friends, you have my sympathy and prayers in your time of grief, God Bless You All And Keep You Safe, He's now with the angels in a far far better place. Colin...

Great story loved it Thank You for uploading it any more stories in the pipeline ?? I see Hermetically Sealed refers to this as part of a series any links plzzzz ?

Well I cant say I know any other the people portrayed in this tale but that in no way detracts from the imaginative work you have so skilfully weaved together, love it even though I knew what was going to happen I still felt this urge to continue till it's conclusion Thank You...

I'm really enjoying this sneak peak into the court process, but with all the bs that layers get up too most of them should be locked up I'm hoping in the final chapter if indeed this is the end, that you are going to include any pay-outs to Peter to make him more affluent, therefor Jason's monetary status will not be a pointing factor for there future lives together. ?? TY

Thank you for a thought invoking short story I to am glad they didn't hook up I like it as is... I really enjoyed it...

I like many other readers who have posted reviews, some of which I have to agree with there sentiments, but I also understand your stating that this is your first, so for that I want to congratulate you on an excellent and captivating story line with addictive plot and characters, all off whom are so likeable and if I'm honest totally believable and people with whom I would like to have met and become friends ... That said it is very frustrating reading your work with the amount of errors and spelling mistakes, because in my opinion they do distract the reader from the story therefor making for a harder to read chapter/story please if possible PLEASE FIX THIS ARGHHHHHH. I also totally concur with the points raised by Daddydavek & TimGRmich. All In All A Great Read THANK YOU...Ps cant wait for more of these characters or similar.

SPOILER ohh come off it all peters got to say is, he said hes gay to shut that homophobic a**hole up "simple"

As others have said way to short way to many unanswered questions and again I have always had a fascination with angels/aliens and any thing sci-fi or other worldly but as you answered most if not all my question in your other reply's I'll leave it at that and wait with batted breath for the longer version to become available Thank.You I did enjoy reading your work and will continue to do so