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  1. Jwolf, I was totally shocked. I was expecting sex and fireworks! Not Spenser getting hit! Was he in the previous Chapter? LOL! When I look back over this year, you have done a masterful job. I have not felt so connected to a story in some time. When I got to the end, all I wanted was another chapter with an update. Glad that is on the way! You are so right, Cooper found his spot. I wanted him to fight for his children and move to them, but he does belong in DALLAS. I'm going to say Thank YOU! You are a great writer with a wicked mean streak and a great sense of humor. LOL! You named yourself JWOLF, I named you JDRAMA, you end this series as a Great Author. I wish you luck on your next project. Get that pen and paper ready you have stories to write, and I have stories to read.
  2. Shocking... I thought we had an understand JWOLF. I drop my shield, and I get Cooper trying to give away his goodies. LOL! The more he grows up, the more foolish he becomes. i find in ironic, he thought he could bluff a druggie. He couldn't handle his wife of 20 years, why would he be able to scare away, Chase's EX? Morgan knows Chase in ways Cooper only wishes. I truly envy this foolish man, named Cooper. He has a BEST FRIEND in Spencer. He has an EX who does everything for him in KYLE. He has a friend who just loves him for all of Cooper's faults, named SEBASTIAN. Finally he has a soul mate/lover in Chase. Then I read about him wanting to sell himself to a druggie, and I concur with you, this gig is up this must come to and end. Where you lead, I will follow. At least one more chapter. This chapter feels rushed, either it was cut in half, or you just like cliffs.
  3. Two more chapters. I can not believe this. I'm sorry I told you I would miss Cooper and the gang. I didn't think you would take me so seriously. LOL! You better have something good planned, because this story has been a wild ride since that first kiss from Spencer, a year ago next week. I'm hot and antsy in anticipation about what story you create next. On to the review. As I was reading this chapter, I felt like you were for the first time rushing to the exits. Then I found out it was 10,000 + words, and I realized it was really just me not wanting this story to end. I always knew that Spencer and Cooper would fall back into each other good graces. Drinking buddies, rarely go out of favor for long. Vodka is a group drink, and Cooper doesn't seem to make many friends. When you look back over this saga, It is funny that Spencer is with a guy who not out yet, while He was the one to bring Cooper out way back when. I wish we had more time to get into Spencer, but alas that dream just won't work this time. I normally don't support drinking and driving, but it finally gave a chance to see some else who has gotten sick of hearing "gamin" LOL! I wish he would have brought Chase a french dictionary. LOL! Spencer could have made Chase remember french 1 from high school and a few different FRENCH words, Adieu!, très beau, or something else. “If I could knock you up, Pal, I would have done it a long time ago,” I was told this comment last week, the situation was a little different , it is funny that you seem to be in my mates head. Maybe you are long lost twins. I got a warm feelings from the interaction between Cooper and his son, and Chase. I think it was wonderful that Devon gave an inch. Those months will be trying on the sex life, if this chapter is any indication. However, Cooper is a Dad first, lover second. I hope Last Chapter I called CJ a monster, he was one for that brief second, but the change in Devon was totally a shock. She is a women scorned, they rarely change. Although, the flashback is a testament to you reading Harry Potter, and why straight women have to be careful dating bisexual/gay men. She knew he was in love with another man, so I'm shocked she had doesn't or can't remember this little flashback. You don't build relationships with no foundations, and you certainly don't let Cooper keep his phone number from 20+ years ago. Moreover, Chicken choking, is not shocking it is expected. It was great the school let him keep his job, he needs the money. PS. Chase got a job. The economy in Dallas, TX must be wonderful. The rougher sex, was a treat, but I knew Morgan had something to do with it. Chase has a one track mind, and a heart made for Cooper. I hope. You like to throw curve balls. So... What is LEFT? I Do NOT Know. And that is the thrill of this saga.
  4. I missed the posting. Sorry I'm late for the party. Cooper seems to be trying to do too much. He should have just stayed in bed with CHASE. He would have felt better. LOL! The title explained everything before, the chapter began. I wasn't expecting a fighting Cooper after the last chapter. He has been punched in the gut a lot since, he answered that phone call, I guessing 4 months ago. Why was Kyle to busy for Cooper? I would have thought he would have rushed over, I guess he really has moved on. I'm glad Cooper didn't have a crutch this time, He processes things better in my opinion when left to his own thoughts. It seems when Cooper get around his friends or partners, he forgets who wears the pants in his life. I never thought Grandbury, TX was that interesting of a place. I must visit again, because you are obsessed with that thriving community. Cooper really is cleaver, I'm shocked that he could think on his feet to see Morgan, but was tongue tied when talking to his OWN son, last chapter. Morgan is pathetic however, Cooper better realize desperate people do desperate things. I did think Chase understanding that Cooper was speaking from the heart, and not from the brain, proves he does love and understand Cooper. Twenty years, give a man time to grow up, hopefully he can truly ditch his ex husband and they could move some place together. I hear Chicago has universities where Cooper could teach, and I know an Olympic swimming champion can find a job there. Maybe that would be a great solution. A fresh start for all involved. Youtube? We will still be borrowing content in the future I see. LOL! Guess that means Google is a buy? Mike must not have been doing it right. I have seen teens change their minds for less. Those hormones. Who was that little monster you created in the School office at the end? Why was that secretary so forgetful, Coop just stole the kid from them when he went house shopping a few chapters back. Maybe she was new? I bucked my father once, I never did that twice. Cooper is a good father, lousy Husband to his wife, an understanding boyfriend, a wickedly good author, a bad teacher, he hasn't been to class in weeks I think. LOL! All in all I'm going to miss him. I assume this is the CLIMAX, He has nothing left to take, and he has a lot to gain. Well done, JWOLF!
  5. The day I stop looking, and youcome back from your hiatus and make a POST! Welcome Back, JWOLF. I guess my theory, that since you were missing/having fun I hope, That Cooper was having a wild sex filled happy holiday. HA! What did Santa bring you? A new pen, with a wicked/mean streak? I have never been surprised at the depths in which your have made Cooper suffer, but alas your mission is finally complete he has nothing LEFT to take. When we started this journey, Last January I never thought COOPER would change so much. While you were away I reread the LIST, I was going through withdrawal like symptoms, many of your fans seemed to, I almost started a Where's JWOLF page I just can't believe this story started with a KISS. How I bet Cooper wished he had avoided that party, those girls, that dare, and Spenser's lips right about now. I think Cooper is trying to play daddy dearest, but he is about 7 months to late. Cooper should have ignored his feelings when Chase called, that would have been BEST. He risked everything because CHASE was an easy way out of his perceived HELL. Sadly It looks like a bad move for him. However, I know you like to throw curve balls. DEVON is the best example.I never saw her coming and can not wait till she exits. Jon, How will you rebuild Cooper? Time will tell. I will still be waiting and reading. This is a wonderful Story, LATE or NOT. I hope your time away brought you some needed rest, and enjoyment. You have left a tattered gay man, who needs some TLC. ASAP, I can't wait to see what you come up with. Welcome Back!! JDRAMA PS. i didn't tell you what the best part of this chapter was... The ending... Is he really worth it? I came face to face with the answer. At that very moment, the answer was an unequivocal no. GLAD you answered my last question from the last review... But I'm not fooled... you said a this very moment, We both know Cooper lives in the moment, and never plans far ahead. Chase better watch out! I see an opening for TEAM KYLE. Or that could be the Vodka talking...
  6. Westlake82

    EPILOGUE

    I did NOT want to read this last chapter. I knew this was the end of CHARLIE. Hamen Well done. I figured you didn't kill DEREK. You can't have a sequel without Charlie's love interest. I found this chapter emotionally heartbreaking, yet hopeful. I was waiting for those two to end up in the sack. Then I remembered you said PG, so that connection will have to wait for the R rated SEQUEL. I want to thank you for making me laugh during this story the comedy was priceless. Dr. Baker is crazy. I am NOT surprised that Charlie and Travis broke up. They just could never compete with that HERO worship from chapter 2. LOL! The kiss was HOT. The ending was HOPEFUL JUST like you PROMISED. Finally, What was the reason mamma dearest keep the food cans? I just didn't get that. You are a master at suspense. 34 chapters later, Charlie is done, I await your next chapter.
  7. KC, I have totally enjoyed this story of yours. I totally enjoyed the ending. Sex ads! Priceless. I was also touched by Percy's Mom, her reaction was great. I've really enjoy this ride, and this story was a pleasure. KC, I absolutely loved the box twist. You did well! But a dirty cup... LOL! KC, I absolutely LOVED this story!
  8. Jared? I forgot that nobody. Guess I'm not as clever as I thought. Hamen, that was an artful twist if I must say so. Was that a little self promotion? Your getting good, I googled that story. Didn't realize I already was ready the author. Wonder if it is as witty as Charlie. I loved Travis! For the first time. They would have a hot threesome of they could learn to share. He loves Charlie. Like I live cheese. Sadly too much leads to pain and indigestion. Mrs C. I'd like more if she had offer the boy a ride. He is perfect after all. My only question is how are you going to work the shrink in ? I hope she does more than deliver a bill. Happily we have one more chapter together on this amazing ride. I thank you for willingness to humor us over these past few months. This story is a 9. You have a chapter to make it a 10. Well done.
  9. Fag hag. Priceless. I never knew Cobo was so close. Thanks for the quick pick me up. Story is getting good. What is left to tell? Oh yeah that mysterious box of yours. I hope being out is fun for Percy. Almost as much fun as I will have knowing the content of that mystery package. Lol! Your good at holding readers interest. I hope your other writing lives up to this great standard.
  10. Uncle to the rescue? Hopefully! I find this chapter a nice rest on this wild ride you named Charlie. I never would have thought Andrew was the bully from so long ago. I still find it funny how Derek is not responding to be called a fag, I guess acceptance comes quickly when you are thrown from your own home. Charlie's home sure is crowded. I want more detail on Charlie but with Derek avoiding him he fads to the bAckground. I thought he might have gone to the shrink or to a basketball court. Daddy living in his home all alone is just what he wanted. Sad part is Derek has a brainless mother. Who has a lawyer for a best friend and never uses her to set up protections for her son. You think she have a plan B, since she knew what he did to her boy. Calling the uncle is the best move Derek can make. Daddy not going to like this anymore than when he saw the boys kissing. Hamen, masterful job holding all of our interest. You are a class act. I'm impressed, but you got a lot to rap up in 2 chapters. I feel a sequel is in order. Hooray! Charlie is almost over. I like thrilling endings.
  11. Hot sex. I'm glad you answered last week question. I loved Max's apartment just like I knew I would. I'm getting good with the guesses. Except that box? LOL! I'm in love with the sex scene. I like when I feel like a fly in the room, KC you achieved this masterfully. I'm almost ready to go read your other work. However, gotta finish story this FIRST! I just can't believe how much fun I had with this weekly distraction. You gave me a joyful read while I have been a little down. PS. My partner growls like Max, luckily I like it. Percy is a Lucky man, seems he does like this Man to be just a little too close. Lol!
  12. Wow! Give you a few extra days... I'm just stunned. Derek never had to come out, daddy was using his Jedi mind tricks. I loved how he confronted the FATHER. He was lucky the dad only hit him once. That mother, geesh! She is not going to win a mother Teresa award. How Derek has fallen is just cruel. Perfect boy, perfect life, perfect is just not so perfect anymore. He is carless, penniless, homeless, and without Charlie. I almost forgot he has a broken nose. Love the story. But a change of luck is on order. Awesome. 3 to go.
  13. Westlake82

    Mr. Anonymous

    Max's place. I want a new setting. I'm not going to make it easy for you to reveal what is in that box of yours. . I knew they were the same. I'm just happy Binx didn't act like a larger ass in chapter one. Look what he could have missed out on. KC. Well done. I hope your next chapter is as exciting as this one. What do you get when a man finds his man. I expect the answer KC.
  14. Westlake82

    Ch 30: Suicide

    Just finished. Wow! How you get so much drama in your comedy is truly wonderful to read each week. I laughed a lot during this chapter. The almost axing. Derek getting punched, Travis didn't need a reason. The former flame admitting she has a itching for Derek. Just wait till Derek feelings are revealed. I wonder who will hit him first. My bet is on Travis. His fist just like Derek's face. Mikee return was brief, I hope he returns. Daddy's gotta get Derek out of jail. I have a feeling Mrs C. killed Luke. She hit Derek for less, and she loved him. I truly have enjoyed this. See you next week. What is next? I want some fireworks.
  15. Well that was a sad ride down memory lane. Derek is totally in love with Charlie. I guess I should not be shocked. The story is just awesome. I'm waiting on pins and needles. 4 chapters left. You promised a happy ending. Will Hero catch his big C? Will daddy dearest spies alert him to his son future naughty meetings with loverboy. All these answer soon. Can not wait. Your that good. See you next Tuesday.
  16. Westlake82

    Bananas

    You listened. Praise it. I'm glad the box is out of the way. Onward. You relish dishing out the pain. Ribs. Collerbone. Coming out unduress. He should have played dumb. Binx needs his coffee. I hope your issues are resolved ASAP. Your a great writer. I am waiting. Just as you intended. Paramedics are hot. The bill not so much. Ps... You do not know what's in the box. LOL! It's our little secret.
  17. I'm speechless. That was a wicked return. Thank you for delaying that chapter. I never knew you had that in you. This story has been PG, then for you to go all rated R. Just wow! No wonder Mrs.. C, told Derek to stay away from her son. I'm shocked his momma doesn't remember that jacket. Most people could not forget it. Charlie at least has a shot at his man. Thanks Hamen. 5 to go.
  18. Westlake82

    Twizted

    Tease... I swear, you like giving people the case of blue balls. I would like to know who left you hanging when you were a young sexual pup. That's the person is who we need to run over. They taught you patience. Damn. But KC, we must not play with others weekly reading. Answering questions is your job. Not introducing new playthings for Percy. Max better be hot. If he is not, look both ways when you cross the street. I drive well, however I hit Authors who leave me hanging. Strike one. You don't want get to three. Ps. I said if you left us hanging forget the box. I guess I have to take that back.
  19. Jwolf, you replaced Harry Potter at the Thanksgiving table discussion this year. My friends thank you for improving my topic this holiday season. They didn't have too talk about what I was going to be reading next, they got to read the story themselves. When I told them you were writing this weekly, most just could NOT believe I found a great writer for such a low price. I'm thankful that you are writing this story. I loved the table chatter with the gang this chapter. I thought that was what would happen. Cooper seems to be a character you relish in tormenting. He at least knows he is erratic, which is a good thing. I'm shocked he thought Spencer would behave. I read this story from the beginning, and Spencer was just being Spencer. I think Cooper is not used to being on the receiving end of being judged. It is harsh, but we all go through it. I have fully embraced the end of the TRIANGLE you created about 180k words ago. Team Kyle is over. Team CHASE won. I'm not sure what we won. Cooper doesn't have time for Kyle, he has got Morgan trouble coming and Cooper seems unprepared for it. I didn't think you could cause more drama. I was just plain wrong. This character I thought you had exiled to Grandbury, seems to have more issues than I thought. Cooper needs to just record the conversations, hand them to CHASE and be through with crazy boy. He can NOT make Chase choose anything. Chase is going to cause someone pain, I hope Spencer is wrong. The daughter loving Chicago does not surprise me. Cooper standing there and seeing his dream of happily ever after, coming to hapless end... PRICELESS. Just checking... What has Cooper gotten from this ride down memory lane with Chase? I bet Cooper sometimes wishes he didn't answer that late night phone call. You have me waiting for the next release. Wishing you a happy writing session.
  20. Tease. I waited a week to learn I will have to wait another. If I knew you I'd kick you. I'm always tingly when I finish these chapters. Can't wait for the weekly postings. If we go another week. Drop the box, the penis is more interesting anyways. I had lamb for dinner. Yum!
  21. I really liked this chapter. Jdrama has taken a rest, and Cooper better enjoy it. Kyle is just faking, nobody gets over Coopster! It is his world, we just get to watch him stumble and dust himself off. Loved that you exiled Morgan. Brittany should be next. Followed by Devon. You don't need that much estrogen in this story. BHB's has enough. I liked the son defending his dads honor. He is stronger then he looks. I hope spenser relationship works out. Are we going to find out why Spenser and the gang don't like Chase? A twenty year old rejection doesn't seem like a real reason. How was your holiday? Where are we in this drama? I hope at least 1/4 of the way. Your story brings a smile to my face, keep up the good work. PS. What is the new post day. I don't want to have to guess. Was Friday, then Sunday, moving to Monday, and now I believe Thursday. I've been looking everyday. I don't mind, but it is trying. I'm impatient. At least I admit it.
  22. Westlake82

    Mr. Anonymous

    KC, I have loved the story so far. What is in the BOX? Hopefully a picture frame, with a picture of a naked MAX. They need to see each other ASAP, the suspense is driving me to wonder if BINX just has a vivid imagination.
  23. Great update. You are rushing to an exciting conclusion. I am totally supporting your goal of finishing this story this year. I have completed grad school, and Andy is just starting. LOL! I still can't believe they will just let each other go in the end. When Andy went his separate way in the past the results were not happy, if I remember correctly. It has been a few years since I read the earlier chapters. They seem perfect for each other. I liked jealous Matt. Adam, this story though long in coming is just wonderful to read. I thank you for sharing this with us. I await the next chapter. Hoping you have a thankful 2012, with Andy and Matt finished, and you onto a new chapter in your writing. It has been a great ride.
  24. Finally, some one hit Cooper. I thought it might be Kyle. He has been strung along for two decades. I thought he deserved a whack at Cooper's face. Didn't take Morgan 15 mins. LoL! I loved the way Cooper is dealing with his kids. He can't compete with momma, but he seems content to let them go. Most divorces don't end this rational. Can't wait for the decision. Kyle, I just feel bad for him. His love for Cooper... Makes me wish you could find him a new project to focus on. Maybe a restraining order for Morgan. If we get to read about the campaign I hope you let Kyle win something. Losing in your forties is hard. I missed your story greatly. I was cyberstalking you. I couldn't help it. The wait was well worth it. I read somewhere you had chapters ready. You could be nice, give your fans a Happy Thanksgiving with a double chapter release next week. I would be thankful.
  25. Finally, some one hit Cooper. I thought it might be Kyle. He has been strung along for two decades. I thought he deserved a whack at Cooper's face. Didn't take Morgan 15 mins. LoL! I loved the way Cooper is dealing with his kids. He can't compete with momma, but he seems content to let them go. Most divorces don't end this rational. Can't wait for the decision. Kyle, I just feel bad for him. His love for Cooper... Makes me wish you could find him a new project to focus on. Maybe a restraining order for Morgan. If we get to read about the campaign I hope you let Kyle win something. Losing in your forties is hard. I missed your story greatly. I was cyberstalking you. I couldn't help it. The wait was well worth it. I read somewhere you had chapters ready. You could be nice, give your fans a Happy Thanksgiving with a double chapter release next week. I would be thankful.
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