Hi!
I've never written a review before, but your story so far is the best story I've ever read on this site.
You make me angry, laugh and frustrated. I sit on the tip of my chair in angst every time Blake has to go out, rooting for him. I want to open his head and rearrange things in there so that he can truly see himself for the amazing person he is. I get terribly depressed when he looses control and succumb to his angst.
I love Blake and Haze together, and I can't wait for more.
It's so obvious that Haze is good for Blake. He makes him braver and you can see the subtle changes in Blake whenever he is around Haze he needs to push himself and every time he falls back into his own "state of mind" it's like he has come a small step further out of his psycosis (If you can call it that, I am not sure if it's the right word).
Please write much more, but take your time. The quality of your writing is far better than what other online stories I have read. If I was as good as you, I think I would pursue writing as a career.