BellaMuerte

Kaleb is gonna hate her if she keeps on I love this story so much!.. too.

o....m....g you, you! you are EVIL.. evil! EV....IL I tell you!!! charlie is alone, the idiot is ...where? O_O and now Derek doesn't know much? what? O_O you.. you are killing me... (but.. but... He does know I wanna know!! ghhhaaa) ....I do understand tho, and will be awaiting your next update, as patiently as I can (with no choice! xD ) can't wait to find out all of the secrets of this story!....

awww damn

I sneak up behind charlie. Closer, closer. He's so close I can smell the shampoo he used to wash his hair. I shove him into Derek and grin. Charlie glares at me, then walks away. I sigh in exasperation. "Fine." I say and snatch Derek up into my arms, holding him like a baby, and run out of the story. (In stories, I can pick up a guy like he's a baby. cause its a story.. ) I want charlie to comfort Derek so bad right now, It's killing me!

I'm sad that I have to wait a week now I just read it all in two days. ghha *tries to be patient*

aww that was so cute. I can't wait to see what happens next!

thank you

Holy wow.. *sigh* *slides down the wall in a heap* I tried to comment the chaps.... but I couldn't bring myself to take the time, I couldn't stop myself from clicking the next chap!! I sat up until 5:30 am reading up until chap 21.. I had to go to bed, but as soon as I was awake, I came back here! ...I may still go back and do that if you don't mind Angels? really? holy shit! Angels.. I thought vampires, till that bomb was dropped and I sat back and thought, wait. OMG. and i was ashamed it was hotter then. O_O I fell in love with these people, so deeply. I felt so bad that he couldn't be with his true love, only he did get Star who has a part of her. The boy's lives were so cruel to them. It was so, utterly sad. But his change in finding the ones he needed to find, it was amazing. I loved the end stand off. This is officially in my top 10 fav stories of all time, amateur and professional alike! I thought for sure Bridge was gonna die for the longest time. I actually prepared myself for it just in case, hoping he wouldn't but scared to death he would anyway O_O I feel like I have been on a long intense ride. Thank you for sharing this with me, really. Thank you.

This. You made me cry. I was crying at the thought of his life before. God.

that was sweet, in a dark and lovely way. I loved it!

wow. I am in love with this boy. What is the red in his eyes? O_O I must know!

I can't wait for you to read the rest! XD

thanks you!

aww yea I just write, but I don't have an editor. I am really glad you like it tho! Thanks so much for the feedback

Gerard was sitting in the middle of Frankie’s bed still clutching the pillow. The room was dark, and the only light was the light from the street lamp outside. He had never told anyone that this was his best friends house, that this was the love of his life’s house. All the story’s that were told to him about “Frankie” the boy, ripped through him every time someone uttered the words. He still loved him, he came to the conclusion that he always would. The clock had struck 11 some time ago, a