BellaMuerte

Kaleb is gonna hate her if she keeps on I love this story so much!.. too.

o....m....g you, you! you are EVIL.. evil! EV....IL I tell you!!! charlie is alone, the idiot is ...where? O_O and now Derek doesn't know much? what? O_O you.. you are killing me... (but.. but... He does know I wanna know!! ghhhaaa) ....I do understand tho, and will be awaiting your next update, as patiently as I can (with no choice! xD ) can't wait to find out all of the secrets of this story!....

awww damn

I sneak up behind charlie. Closer, closer. He's so close I can smell the shampoo he used to wash his hair. I shove him into Derek and grin. Charlie glares at me, then walks away. I sigh in exasperation. "Fine." I say and snatch Derek up into my arms, holding him like a baby, and run out of the story. (In stories, I can pick up a guy like he's a baby. cause its a story.. ) I want charlie to comfort Derek so bad right now, It's killing me!

I'm sad that I have to wait a week now I just read it all in two days. ghha *tries to be patient*

aww that was so cute. I can't wait to see what happens next!

thank you

Holy wow.. *sigh* *slides down the wall in a heap* I tried to comment the chaps.... but I couldn't bring myself to take the time, I couldn't stop myself from clicking the next chap!! I sat up until 5:30 am reading up until chap 21.. I had to go to bed, but as soon as I was awake, I came back here! ...I may still go back and do that if you don't mind Angels? really? holy shit! Angels.. I thought vampires, till that bomb was dropped and I sat back and thought, wait. OMG. and i was ashamed it was hotter then. O_O I fell in love with these people, so deeply. I felt so bad that he couldn't be with his true love, only he did get Star who has a part of her. The boy's lives were so cruel to them. It was so, utterly sad. But his change in finding the ones he needed to find, it was amazing. I loved the end stand off. This is officially in my top 10 fav stories of all time, amateur and professional alike! I thought for sure Bridge was gonna die for the longest time. I actually prepared myself for it just in case, hoping he wouldn't but scared to death he would anyway O_O I feel like I have been on a long intense ride. Thank you for sharing this with me, really. Thank you.

This. You made me cry. I was crying at the thought of his life before. God.

that was sweet, in a dark and lovely way. I loved it!

wow. I am in love with this boy. What is the red in his eyes? O_O I must know!

aww thank you! It's just a short little story I got in my head one day, I hope you enjoy the rest of it too!

I can't wait for you to read the rest! XD

thanks you!

aww yea I just write, but I don't have an editor. I am really glad you like it tho! Thanks so much for the feedback