BellaMuerte

Kaleb is gonna hate her if she keeps on I love this story so much!.. too.

o....m....g you, you! you are EVIL.. evil! EV....IL I tell you!!! charlie is alone, the idiot is ...where? O_O and now Derek doesn't know much? what? O_O you.. you are killing me... (but.. but... He does know I wanna know!! ghhhaaa) ....I do understand tho, and will be awaiting your next update, as patiently as I can (with no choice! xD ) can't wait to find out all of the secrets of this story!....

awww damn

I sneak up behind charlie. Closer, closer. He's so close I can smell the shampoo he used to wash his hair. I shove him into Derek and grin. Charlie glares at me, then walks away. I sigh in exasperation. "Fine." I say and snatch Derek up into my arms, holding him like a baby, and run out of the story. (In stories, I can pick up a guy like he's a baby. cause its a story.. ) I want charlie to comfort Derek so bad right now, It's killing me!

I'm sad that I have to wait a week now I just read it all in two days. ghha *tries to be patient*

aww that was so cute. I can't wait to see what happens next!

thank you

Holy wow.. *sigh* *slides down the wall in a heap* I tried to comment the chaps.... but I couldn't bring myself to take the time, I couldn't stop myself from clicking the next chap!! I sat up until 5:30 am reading up until chap 21.. I had to go to bed, but as soon as I was awake, I came back here! ...I may still go back and do that if you don't mind Angels? really? holy shit! Angels.. I thought vampires, till that bomb was dropped and I sat back and thought, wait. OMG. and i was ashamed it was hotter then. O_O I fell in love with these people, so deeply. I felt so bad that he couldn't be with his true love, only he did get Star who has a part of her. The boy's lives were so cruel to them. It was so, utterly sad. But his change in finding the ones he needed to find, it was amazing. I loved the end stand off. This is officially in my top 10 fav stories of all time, amateur and professional alike! I thought for sure Bridge was gonna die for the longest time. I actually prepared myself for it just in case, hoping he wouldn't but scared to death he would anyway O_O I feel like I have been on a long intense ride. Thank you for sharing this with me, really. Thank you.

This. You made me cry. I was crying at the thought of his life before. God.

that was sweet, in a dark and lovely way. I loved it!

wow. I am in love with this boy. What is the red in his eyes? O_O I must know!

aww thank you! It's just a short little story I got in my head one day, I hope you enjoy the rest of it too!

I can't wait for you to read the rest! XD

thanks you!

aww yea I just write, but I don't have an editor. I am really glad you like it tho! Thanks so much for the feedback

Ok yea It is a fan fiction, but to me, it works even if you don't know about where the characters originated. I think. Please give it a chance. It only has 3 chapters, and has 2 posted as of now, the third will be available tomorrow. Gerard has agreed to help out a friend, and do one thing that he would never normally do, join a frat. The initiation consists of spending the night in a haunted house. He knows this house well, and the ghosts within. Sometimes bad things happen, but sometimes, awful things fix themselves. Story Note This is a Fan Fiction based on two members of the band My Chemical Romance. The only part of the characters used in this story that is real, are their looks, everything else is from the mind of the writer. This is fiction. Title from: Vampires will never hurt you by: My Chemical Romance lyric: "And as always, innocent like roller coasters. Fatality is like ghosts in snow and you have no idea what you're up against because I've seen what they look like. Becoming perfect as if they were sterling silver chainsaws going cascading." http://www.gayauthor.../Ghost_and_Snow

Gerard was sitting in the middle of Frankie’s bed still clutching the pillow. The room was dark, and the only light was the light from the street lamp outside. He had never told anyone that this was his best friends house, that this was the love of his life’s house. All the story’s that were told to him about “Frankie” the boy, ripped through him every time someone uttered the words. He still loved him, he came to the conclusion that he always would. The clock had struck 11 some time ago, a

I found it as a fan fiction back in 05 on a fansite. I liked the idea, of course it was a fan fic back then, and vamps so I loved all kinds of stories like that! But after 5 or so give or take, chapters, it disappeared from online. Then some time later, a friend of mine was going on and on about this book she read, and so I checked it out, and sure enough, it was the story! So I read it, even tho the author changed the characters completely. I'm sure for copyrights but. That's the only reason I read it, cause I recognized it. But I thought it wasn't done well enough to be as huge as it had become, I think the idea could have made it great had it been written better. But I guess that's my opinion. I wouldn't hate on it tho. To each his own I say.

Frank felt his presents when he was outside. He could feel him come into the house. If he had had breath it would have caught in his throat. Watching him through the window he saw his black hair blowing around his face, his pale skin illuminated by the light of the moon. Shivering from the chill he let his eyes rest on the boy sitting on the couch. He couldn’t wrap his mind around why he could feel the cold. This is the first day he experienced any of his senses in four years. Tomorrow is Hallo

Gerard has agreed to help out a friend, and do one thing that he would never normally do, join a frat. The initiation consists of spending the night in a haunted house. He knows this house well, and the ghosts within. Sometimes bad things happen, but sometimes, awful things fix themselves.

The house stood proud in its emptiness. As if it were daring someone to enter, to witness its secrets. Abandoned long ago it was the talk of every man woman and child. It stood proud and beautiful behind the unkempt yard. Weeds had grown around the doors and vines snaking up towards the large picture windows that looked out on the people as they passed. In the dark haze of light it looked alive, as if it breathed and wanted to whisper. The sun hung in the sky almost at the end of its decent t

I never have. yet. I do still hold hope that I will, some day.

It depends on the person. Some people cheat, and that is just what they do. But sometimes you have one person that will cheat, and never do it again. It just depends on the circumstances. I have forgiven a cheater. So yea I would, and I don't believe anyone that cheats is always a cheater. But, like I said, some just cheat. It's hard to tell who's who ...

Physical: - long dark hair/Black hair and i'm mush -slender -small build -at least my height(5'5) or more -not overly muscular.. yea -no facial hair Personality: ~faithful ~loyal ~sense of humor ~understanding Lifestyle: ~Monogamous

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