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Ang3l

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  1. Fantastic, I've been waiting for that sequel to imprint. Just read the three chapters in one go instead of working. I think I'm starting to get used to your style because the confusion and the odd clue here and there aren't daunting anymore, but welcome. Or maybe you're not cryptic enough anymore :-P just joking. I love it. Not knowing who/what frost is is still driving me nuts. Good luck with the writing
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    Chapter 8

    Yay! This is one of my favourites from your stories. I hope the next chapter doesn't take as long.
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    Chapter 6

    The dekon comes back
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    Chapter 3

    Fantastic, I had started to give up hope that you'd do this secobd volune. Reintroducing the characters one by one is great to get situated again Still just as well written, although the soft and mellow is a great change from the bkoody scissor hands. And of course the tantalising clues you keep dropping
  5. I'm sorry it's only the first time I write a review to Imprint, it's because I tend to mostly read on my phone. I absolutely love the complexity of the storyline, jumping back and forth between character, places and time periods. It ties my mind in knots and I think 'great finally a story where I've got no clue what'll happen next'. Sometimes we don't even have a clue of what is going on as we read. Some dislike it, I think it allows your imagination to run free and to focus on the descriptions of characters and events. I really feel the mood of each scene, which is rare. In a way I'm disappointed that everything is starting to fit together,at least for the (very) big picture I'm very curious to see who trick and frost will end up to be. And i'd enjoy more folklore about those aether tattoos. Cheers Will
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    Ch. 5 Part V

    Fantastic! I thought you'd abandoned that story. I just had to reread everything to remember the storyline but I won't complain about that. I hope you continue and don't stop there. Love the characters, the complexity of the plot and your very original style
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    Chapter 19

    Fantastic mate, I was starting to despair that yet another promising story was going be abandonned. Please continue I love your multiple story lines, the characters, the plot which is more than original. My only criticism - for this chapter - is that it's too short (as always for every good story) but concerning this one specifically I think you could've fleshed out the description a bit more. On the other hand I understand you not wanting to let us hang longer don't stop
  8. Hey mate, Great beginning. I'm really intrigued, and I feel that you recreate the magical feeling of the original books just fine. One thingthough: I think this has the potential to be a great story in its own right so I wouldn't lay on the gay thing too much, too quick if I were you. Otherwise, I fear it may turn into one of those sappy love stories of which there are thousands on GA. I hope you won't keep us waiting too long. Cheers,
  9. A most intriguing first chapter, after a confusing prologue. I am quite curious to see where this goes and feel the potential for a great epic if only the narrative is not rushed and sufficient time is left for description so that we may truly construct this world in our imagination
  10. As always, I'd say that the only problem is that the chapter ends too soon And we're getting too close to the end
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