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yet another awesome chapter, I wonder if the graft is truly clueless about what is going on? Aaron's abilities are rather expansive and pretty potent and so is the scope of Sam's power. i can't wait for more, good stuff

things seems to be heating up pretty fast, on all fronts ... good chapter

God yes, everything about this was brilliant..... Loved how you handled the home scene with the father's rage, the aftermath, the mother's response and Dave's composure..... and Alan... Alan, my favourite part of the story, you did well, and i was not expecting that. sucks that he doesn't have a chance in hell with Nick because some competition is always interesting

you lost readers .... guess they didn't like what they read.. aw well such is life another awesome chapter,the previous was great as well, the rape wasn't exactly unexpected, out of character for Craig i suppose, but i guess i didn't know everything about the guy. they got found out ... bout time lolol....... we all knew it was coming, and i like how you did it, next chapter is sure to be great

“You've got a choice to make, love,” Christopher whispered in Victoria's ear. Her eyes widened. As Victoria returned to reality, she noticed Christopher standing behind the sofa chair where she collapsed when Rufus badgered her. He was dressed in black. She looked down... her hands were glowing and nails sparking; she was literally electric as her short, brown hair stood on end. Victoria looked up at Rufus who had taken a couple steps back. She stood up. “W-what the fuck?” Rufus mu

another good one, again the tension was palatable.. great job. Alan is hurting pretty bad poor chap, but i think dave must be pretty dense if he can't see why, Nick did tell him as well.

another awesome chapter... rather impressively liberal kids you got there lol, re: spin the bottle lol.... it was great seeing a bit more of Dave's innocence but i must say Alan is now my favourite character, weird i know, but i tend to latch on the peripheral characters with potentially huge future roles *not so subtle hint hint* lol

This was great, Dave adjusted quickly, but then again he seems like the sort to jump into things.... i'm pretty interested in Alan now..... its all looking great

great chapter, i really didn't know what to believe for a moment there

another unexpected twist, but i've come to enjoy that about your writing, as well as your story time frames. there is a lot to take in but i love the tension that is building, the graft seems to be planting the seeds of change but he also seems expendable in the grand scheme of things ... awesome chapter.. as always

my gosh what an amazing chapter. i love the lore you introduced, beautifully written

big fan of the theme here, another awesome chapter

thanks for this

Awesome chapter, i had to catch up and i'm glad i have all these chapters to gorge on at once i was not expecting that with Landon and Greg.. at all!! but i love it all the same, awesome pairing, and a force to reckon with in the future for sure. i always figure that they maybe related, but i didnt have much to go on, thanks for clearing that up. if its possible, i think i'm getting even more into this story

The living room of the old, wooden house was dimly lit. A large, drafty den fit for a creature; it had old family photos of this creature and other miscellaneous things decorated all around it. The wooden mantle housed dusty rugby trophies, scratched and scraped…warped from their gold, lustrous pride by time and time did not forget the creature. It sat in the corner facing an ajar glass window. He was a bald-headed, decrepit mess of wrinkles tattooed across his face and bags that weighed down hi