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  1. MidnightMan
    I've never heard of it, but will see if I can find an episode online. Sounds like it might be good! (update) Well I'm watching the pilot right now and Hey! I LIKE IT! I should probably break down and hook up an antenna to that tv of mine! (update) OK! I'm hooked. I've made it through episode 4 and I have the next two ready to view. Thanks again comicfan!
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    I seem to be a bit behind in news. Didn't realize Amy Winehouse had also died. There are things I admire about celebrities, their voice, their send of humor, but I doubt we ever get to know any of them. I enjoyed Whitney's earlier music. I don't know that I've heard anything more recent. It is a shame she made so many poor decisions. Just goes to show, no matter how famous or poor you are, we are all subject to the repercussions of our choices.
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    Chapter 1

    MidnightMan commented on Adam Thomas's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Well, you have piqued my interested. I read a good portion in the sneak peeks, but then read that you had finished the first chapter so though I'd look you up. I'll be glad when the clouds part and the rain stops falling. I do hate the rain. Keep writing. Your fans are waiting.
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    Chapter 1

    MidnightMan posted new chapter in Harbinger

    Harbinger Chapter 1 I am a Harbinger. I was in life, and I am now in death. It is my duty to witness the destruction and rebirth of souls. I’m Death’s stenographer. He bags and tags them and I do the paperwork, so to speak. Whatever horrors I had committed in the last life had dealt me this sentence. I must have been an awful bastard. We Harbinger’s aren’t privy to that information though. I remember my life then, but don’t know what specific thing or group of
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    Harbinger

    MidnightMan posted a story in Fiction

    Death has a busy schedule. Harbingers are the ones that track the experience and death of each passing. One such harbinger has a new trainee... it's not going well.
  6. MidnightMan
    Welcome to GA KalloSofii
  7. MidnightMan
    Wonderful ending, though I'm bummed there are no further chapters to read. It's late, but I need that nap of mine. I'll refrain from calling the law and explaining to them how you held me at gun point making me read chapter and gripping chapter. Thanks for sharing this story with us. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future! Take care!
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    Okay, that was just rude. As there is only one chapter remaining I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and hope you haven't killed them. I could feel the tension in the story as they drove home. Even though I know it was only a paragraph or two, it felt real and seemed to take a long time for them to get where they needed to be. Which in that situation, having driven in the snow for many years I can absolutely relate. Great chapter and looking forward to and dreading the next and final chapter.
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    I had a feeling Cameron would be showing up, though in the previous chapter review I think I made a mistake and called him Andrew. Either way, sounds like everything went off without a hitch. You had me worried with mention of the snow falling. I was sure you would put someone in an accident, and quite happy you didn't. Good flow and nothing to complain about other than I'm know I'm getting closer to the end of the story.
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    I get the sneeking suspicion that Andrew is going to be making another appearance. No time to doddle. Another chapter awaits!
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    “What I don’t understand, and it might just be me, is what the problem your is, Charlie?” asked Becca. Know what you meant here, but you have an extra word or something in there. I totally enjoyed having Charlie's sage advice returned to him. Things are moving quickly and again I love the pace. Next!
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    Glad to hear Scott had the forethought to buy condoms. Everything still pacing well. My only disappointment at this point is knowing that I'll be finished with this in the very near future.
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    No complaints and only good things to say. It seems you have evolved a bit in your writing from the first chapter to this one. I'm enjoying it immensley. Glad to h ear Barbara was alright. Would have hated to hunt you down and make that movie Misery look like a trip to Disney Land.
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    You have a true mean streak in you sir. If the situation weren't tense enough, you throw in a possible 'ex', and a very handsome one at that. Will read more very soon! I'm not even going to bother closing the window. I need it ready for when I wake up! Great story Comic. Thanks for sharing it.
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    If something happens to Barbara, I will be extremely displeased! I could really feel the urgency in the dialogue as well as the narrative. So... NOW I have to read another chapter!
  16. MidnightMan
    That lit'l horndog! FINALLY getting his groove on. Of course, now, I have to read the next chapter.
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    Couple of Issues "Scott looked over and found him had passed out in his seat." omit (had) ? "He took the time slip off the sleeping man’s shoes" time (to) slip ? Great Thanksgiving, until the older brother mucked it up. I had a feeling that was coming but hoped he would have come around by now. I'm steadily disliking this Rick Sr. more and more. There's something wrong with that man. Loved it that Scott carried Charlie into the house. That is very endearing to me. (okay one more chapter)
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    I have to say, that one of the things I enjoy with your characters in the story is that they aren't perfect. Small flaws mistakes and a bit of forgetfulness make them all the more real. Was going to take a nap... but I have to see how this thanksgiving dinner turns out. I'll cuss you later for my lack of sleep.
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    I'm curious now how Charlie's brother will take the news with regard to his current budding relationship. Thankfully Tonya has a spine! Okay... one more chapter and then a nap!
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    I'm fighting sleep again. I shouldn't have gotten up at 4:30 this morning. Not to say that the story isn't absolutely captivating, I'm just sleep deprived today. I'm going to get through at least one more chapter if it kills me! Nothing to complain about, and I'm glad were getting some closure here even with Charlie's world in such turmoil.
  21. MidnightMan
    Wow! seems like Charlie finally grew a pair! Good flow, no issues. GREAT story... must read more.
  22. MidnightMan
    OMG! Nothing contstructive to say, can't stop here. Next chapter!
  23. MidnightMan
    Definitely a busy night and even crazier morning for poor Charlie. If these twists continue I'm going to have to get a neck brace. MORE!
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    It's already all been said. Usually I don't like a rehash of events but you slid through it with ease and progressed through the dinner. Thank you for that! I would have been royally ticked if there wasn't some advancement in the story line. (I'm getting greedy with chapters and am so happy that I don't have to wait for the next one) Scott is incredibly unabashed. I wish I were as brazen in the matters of the heart This sentence was a little awkward... (till I need it later?) “Thank you so much, Marie. Would you mind terribly if I left my laptop with you till I needed it later?” Okay... next chapter!
  25. MidnightMan
    Great chapter, and at the risk of being vague, I'm rushing to the next one! No complaints, no wording issues, can't wait to see how Scott pulls Julie over the coals!
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