Tom

actualy, I was wandering the Efiction a few minutes ago, just clicking around when I stumbled on to something. it kinda shocked me when I opened up the top ten lists, and found myself on three of them. The more I thought about that; then remembering what Max03 said, questioning my opinion about my writing; maybe I need to start listening more to people, instead of just hearing what they are saying...so hear it goes...the frist try....let's see if I can do it....Maybe I can write(a little) of course, I just have to change topics now...hehehe How many of you wear 'boxerbriefs'? I have always had great satisfaction wearing 'the skimpiest thing I can find', but I have heard so much about how comfortable boxerbriefs are, and concidering winter is on the way, I thought I should at least try one pair...well, I included them in my latest Jockey order, so I can't give an opinion about them yet, but I still can't believe I'm gonna try them BTW...I sent Kurt, chapter 6, hope he like's it enough to send it back for posting...hehehe (Sorry guys {this is Kurt} it will be a little bit, hopefully Monday or tuesday... I am going out of town this weekend. Sorry.) Hugs' Tom

I need some help. yes, I know what you are thinking, and I am not talking about guy's in white coats and one of those jakets that make you hug yourself . here is the problem, I have major issues about Jeff and John getting together...at least sexually I have never written a sex scene and am very nervous about it. well, I say writing prompt number 12, and just had to do something ...I still can't believe I did it Anyway, I really need some feadback on what I posted there...click here to read please come back and leave your comments Thanks Hugs, Tom

Yes, sometimes it sucks to be me ...but today...it really sucks to not be me . yep, somebody flipped my coin and I landed 'sunny side up' yesterday . I sat down and got two pages done on IFLM before I had to get to bed. Today I figured out how to end the story. I really have to thank everyone that has read it so far, and even more importantly, left all the reviews and comments. I am kinda bummed out that some of the comments pointed out how confused people got, but I guess that kinda happens when the only clue given to indicate how bad John was hurt, was very vague and clear back in chapter one. I will fill in the rest of the picture as the story progresses, but some of the important points won't be easily noticed

HI Everyone, I haven't been up to writing much lately. It seems that I have fallen victum to a really strong mood swing, making it almost impossible to write the next chapter without strangling Kevin and shooting Jamie in the foot when I add to that the fact that I have picked up a cold and have been working 60 hour weeks for the better part of 2 months, I feel like I'm shutting down inside. since this seems to making me feel worse...I'm just gonna stop here...maybe I'll finish it tomorrow Tom

Hi all, since I resigned from the committee, I finally found the time to finish chapter 5. Kurt might give it back to me before friday, so all I will say is that I'll post as soon as I get it back Hugs, Tom

Yep, I resigned from the WST yesterday. I almost regret doing, it but not quite. when I joined the team, I had hoped to make a diffrence, but with work going into overdrive, and the committee responsabilities, I found that I was starting to miss my writing more and more. I also found that my stress levels had gotten to the point where everything was starting to push me toward a depressive mood swing. The one thing that confirmed my need to resign was one word. when something is bought it to a committee format and is presented as "NON-NEGOTIABLE"...I felt as though I was no longer on a committee The only statment that really means anything at this point is...ten minutes after Myr told me he had granted my request, I felt relieved...relaxed...almost happy again Hugs to all, Tom

it's not ...but I put it there yesterday...did you get into my filing cabnet again

let's see....I know where Kevin's birthday present is...and I know what all the people mentioned have in common...and I know where to find the answer to the last one is...just not telling . guess everyone will have to "hunt" for it Hugs, Tom

But that's what the thread title says...I WANT MORE :2hands: ...

He won't tell me either , The Big MEANY...

All feedback is good. if I had to chose between.."I love your story, Keep up the good work!" or..."I can't really see myself there, could you add more detail?" I would go for the latter one every time. Comments like that are nice to have, especially for new writers. I want negative feedback as much as I enjoy the positive coments. I want to improve my writing as much as possible. I can't do anything without the comments from readers and when I get negitive feedback, I deffinatly know what needs to be improved.

OMG...it was so funny it hurt it really bring home the point, "Be carefull what you ask for, you might get it"

I guess this mean I had better get that second chapter edited...hehe Congradulations Krista Hugs, Tom

hehe...Sorry it has been so long. Chapter 5 is still in the writing stage. Getting a new committee going is really time consuming...and then they asked me to lead it. but it has been really fun so far I am being told there are some really good things to come here at GA, so stick around

Now that Silven is all mad at me for teasing him...I figure I'd better Post in the right spot. but now I forgot what I was going to say...oh yeah, poetry...I am not a regular reader of poetry, but I do feel that Poetry needs a special place in our conunity. If it was strictly up to me, Poetry would be given equal billing with the Efiction. Thank goodness there are people that keep me well contained, (they only let me out when the moon is full) As a member of the Writers Support Sub-Committee, I eagerly await the results of this poll. Being that this is our first project posted, I am hoping that we get a good turn-out with lots of feedback. Thanks for dropping by, Hugs, Tom

A Committee is born

Happy birthday Jas. Hope it's a good one

Hi all, Just thought I'd drop a line and tell everyone what's going on with my story. I have posted chapter 3 and sent chapter 4 to Kurt for editing. chapter four went in a direction I didn't expect...and it brought some memories back up from those places in my mind best not explored. Now, every time I sit down to work on chapter 5, I just seem to lock up.

Man I goofed. I thought Kurtie was goingto be back last Sunday. As it turns out, he gets back this coming Sunday

Hi all, Just had to stop in and chat for a while. I feel kinda bad about the delay in posting chapter 3. It got up to 110 degrees outside my house sunday, and my computer room doesn't have airconditioning. For the past three days I haven't been able to run my computer long enough to write more than five words. Add that to the 10 hours of overtime in the last week, and I haven't gotten anything written. Kurtie has chapter 3 right now, but as all teenagers know, the parents take priority...and his 'mum' is being very time consuming. Hopefully, both kurtie and I can get back on track after the long weekend. Hugs, Tom

I couldn't post last night. It took to long to calm down after reading my first reviews. I finally got 3 after I posted chapter 2!! I just hope chapter 3 is liked as much . Most of the story just seems to form all on it's own. I started out with a destination, but I don't really have a road to travel on. It makes it really easy to not give out spoilers...cause I don't even know what will happen . I did get three responses from nifty today

Yup, It's my blog... I'll never know what to put in here. So, where I work, it is that time of year. the time for random o/t and long days, and given the editing marks Kurtie left on IFLM ch2, it may be a few days before I post 2 or even start 3. And just for the record...A snail walking across my keyboard can get a story out faster than I can . The next chapter will be posted by friday though, after that, I just don't know

This is all new to me. I decided that I kinda needed to set this up so people could leave coments about my story(that is if anybody ever reads it)

Hi, I'm not really into the spin-off stories either, but given the quality of the other stories by dkstories and Myr, I just have to suggest trying out the spinoffs too. The one area that I hadn't noticed a mention of was the Efiction area here. some of the stories there are really good(they even say good things about mine) Have fun reading

hey...I only write in the 'teen' group cause I refuse to grow up. But I still read just about everything...so post already