Riley,
okay, so i didn't get to read it before you pulled the chapter. Could you please IM me the chapter. I've read other peoples opinion and would like to form my own.
As it stands right now, I'll say this much, anything an author writes that is controversial is going to get negative feedback and, in my opinion, should be treated the same as when Nifty tried to change the title. stand up for your work. your readers are important, but being true to the spirit of your writing is even more important
hugs,
Tom